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gmgi

@gmgi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#851

Thanks Shirley. I will try yr 1st suggestion. The second one i have been trying but the post disappears as if refreshed while typing. When you update stories can you plz give the link also so it is easier.

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Fouzia

@FAMS

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Posted: 9 years ago

#852

Shirley & Shivam &Geena good analysis pls peeps keep on posting . . .

This thread is saviour of people lije me who miss episodes on regular basis with no time to catch up. . .

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gmgi

@gmgi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#853

Shirley it is a sweet OS. The way the story flows it doesn't feel like this is your 1st one. Writing Mythos is harder because your creative liberty has some limits. Enjoyed it.😳

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sshirley

@sshirley

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Posted: 9 years ago

#854

Originally posted by: gmgi
Shirley it is a sweet OS. The way the story flows it doesn't feel like this is your 1st one. Writing Mythos is harder because your creative liberty has some limits. Enjoyed it.😳

thank you Geena .. I have a lot of ffs OSs etc.. on ktlk forum.. but I had never written mytho before.. n r absolutely right.. mytho writing requires one to limit ones creativity.. mere saath toh one more problem arose.. I was just going along fine with my story but moidway, realized the story needs to hv not only laxman but also urmila in a rominent role./.. so had to change everything..

And Guess what... I forgot to implement my own ideas I just gave u.. n lost my long reply to u... can I retype it in the morning? was in a mod to discuss .. but now thanks to IF, I lost my mood

Edited by sshirley - 9 years ago

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Shivam...

@Shivam...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#855

shirley dont be afraid to post your thoughts

It is good to share ur opnion , we get to see different perspectives

And your story was nice , but there also you were scared to post it😆

Havent u read Mine And Mili's versions , which are sometimes crap to the core when we try to add humour in it😆

Edited by Shivam... - 9 years ago

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gmgi

@gmgi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#856

Shirley it is ok. I will go offline soon. Will continue tomorrow.
Shivam you write amazing stories. Not crap.😡😆

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lakshmi

@ShasthaaPriyaa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#857

Hello everyone!😃 I was going through comments when I read DD's asking everyone to 'aake danka bajado'😆 Well,I can see that everyone is frustrated with the writers.😆 I won't comment on Sita and Lakshman as that is too irritating. Coming to today's episode,I would like to say something positive.😆

They placed a point through Sita that an innocent person should never be harmed.😃 I won't say Ram is wrong,he wasn't.😆 But I liked the way he addressed the Asura ladies and children.Shows his ever-compassionate heart.⭐️ Being the Lord,He loves everyone equally.⭐️ And the promise he made to Sita that he will give anyone bad,who truly wants to change a second chance,again portrays Him as the Ultimate Benefactor of all beings. This is my analysis.I am not going into the negative points..as those are already being discussed.😛

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daydreamers

@daydreamers

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Posted: 9 years ago

#858

https://thedormantseed.wordpress.com/2016/01/07/a-matter-of-perspective/

https://thedormantseed.wordpress.com/2016/01/09/trust-a-matter-of-time/

https://thedormantseed.wordpress.com/2014/12/03/point-to-ponder-trust/

https://thedormantseed.wordpress.com/2014/12/04/her-first-love/

https://thedormantseed.wordpress.com/2016/04/17/170416-point-to-ponder-independence/

https://thedormantseed.wordpress.com/2016/01/25/lets-go/

https://thedormantseed.wordpress.com/2016/01/13/reasons-you-were-born/

https://thedormantseed.wordpress.com/2016/01/11/tit-for-tat/

https://thedormantseed.wordpress.com/2016/01/08/now-is-life/

had got a habit of posting simple conversations.. these are the links to few of them. 2 articles, 1 story and other are conversations...

do post ur valuable feedback if you like it 😃

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sshirley

@sshirley

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Posted: 9 years ago

#859

Originally posted by: Shivam...
shirley dont be afraid to post your thoughts
It is good to share ur opnion , we get to see different perspectives

And your story was nice , but there also you were scared to post it😆

Havent u read Mine And Mili's versions , which are sometimes crap to the core when we try to add humour in it😆

aww.. thanks Shivam. I wasnt scared, i just dint know if it wud qualify or not..being focused on SiRa till almost the end..

@bold - what??? 😲😲😲 no way! u guys are champs at writing humorous n entertainng drabbles..

its most difficult to write humor.. i, for instance, wud never try my hand at humor,