LAKSH MILA part 4 updated (page 5)

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Hai friends 😛 This one is a ff on laksh mila. . Hope u like it. 😊

PART. 1:
Finally the fierce battle came to an end. Ravan was killed and Sita returned to ram after giving her Agni pariksha. Ram made Vibhishana the new king of Lanka .the time came to return to Ayodhya finally after the long fourteen years. Lord hanuman flew to Nandigram to inform about Rams return. Bharat and Shatrughan are happy at the news and are eagerly waiting for their brothers.
Finally ram reached Nandigram along with Sita and Lakshman. Vibhishana ,Sugriva and many fellow vanaras accompanied them to Nandigram, In the giant Pushpak viman.
Bharat along with Shatrughan and sumanthji. Welcomed his brothers and bhabhi and all the members.
Ram hugged Bharat and Shatrughan hugged his twin. That was an emotional time for all the people over there.
B: aap aagaya bhaiyya. 😊 Poora. Ayodhya aap theeno ki aagaman ke liye saj rahi hai bhaiyya. Humara avem Ayodhya Vashi ki Pratiksha Samapth Huwa
Ram introduced his new friends to Bharat and Shatrughan. Bharat welcomed all to Ayodhya.
B:aap Sab hum area sath Ayodhya prasthan kijiye ram bhaiyya ki rajyabhishek poorn hone tak Hume avem Ayodhya ko aap ki seva ki sobhagya dijiye.
Vibhishana and Sugriva happily agreed to Bharat. It was their luck to see the coronation of ram.
Su: putra ram. Ab Sandhya samay hogaya. Hum Sab kal prathahkaal hi Ayodhya ke liye prasthan Karna uchit hoga.
R: ram looked at Lakshman. Tum Kya ka hogi Lakshman. Tum chaho to hum abhi Ayodhya ke liye prasthan kar sakthe hai.
Lakshman answered with a calm smile. Nahi bhaiyya jaisa aap Sab ko uchit lage.
They decided to halt there for night and start for Ayodhya in the morning. Bharat sent message to Ayodhya about their beloved prince home coming.
After having their meals ram sat with all his family and friends.
R: mata kaise hai Bharat?
B: Sab ache hai bhaiyya. Aap ki Pratiksha kar rahe hai sab.
Sh: aap ke Bina itne varsh kaise bitha iski Kalpana bhi hum nahi kar parahe hai bhaiyya. Ayodhya to Suni hogaya avem raj mahal bhi.
Ram hugged his brothers .as if he don't want to let them go away from him again.
S: mere behen kaise hai devarji. .
Sh: ji bhabhi. Ache hai... ek din bhi nahi bhita aap ke yaad with naa roya ho!
Sita looking at Bharat asked him. Avem mandavi?
B: (with a guilt ). Aap ki Pratiksha kar rahe hai Mehal Me!
Lakshman wanted to ask about Urmila but could not gather strength .he feared he cannot control any more listening about her.
Ram reading his thought asked about Urmila.
R: Urmila kaisa hai...
Lakshman just closed his eyes as he heard her name and turned his face away so that no one can see his tears😭😭
Ram just put his hand on his brother 's shoulder gently pressing it to give him enough strength while somehow Lakshman composed himself and faced them again.
Su: putri Urmila theek hai. Tum hare aagaman ki suchana unhe bhi milgaye ve bhi Pratiksha kar rahi hogi. ... Looking at Lakshman. Sab ka.
S: mere behene Mataon ke dhyaan ache se rakna na sumanthji.
Su: haan putri. Maharaj ki Jane ke bad tumhare behen hi Sab sambhala vo bhi poori Nishita se. Atva Ayodhya to Suni hogaya. ...
Shruthkirti ne tho sari Mehal ki vyavahar swayam dekha. Atva mandavi to apni mata on ke seva me Jeevan Samarpan kiya. Ve na hoti to maharaniyaa apni dhukh se kabhi uber hi nahi pate.
S: avem Urmila..."...
Lakshman looked at sumanthji tensed.
Su: Urmila ... Ve tho Sab ka dhyaan rakha! apni beheon ka mataon ka avem Rajya ka . Apni swayam ki dhukh bhool kar ve mandavi ko sambhala. Mataon ko Sambhala. Ve tho Jeevan ki Kathin paristhiti me bhi dhairya avem shahas se apna dharam nibhaya.
Ve apna Sab sukhsuvidha Tyag kardiya. Mehal me rehte Huey bhi ve vanvasi ka jeevan vyathit kiya. Sab ki seva hi uske jeevan ban gaya. Itni varsho me Maine ek bar bhi Urmila ki nethron me asru nahi Dekha. Jab Sumitra Nandan ki Yudh me acheth hone ki suchana mili. Ve tho. Thoot hi gayi kadachit ve apna dhukh Kisi se vyakth hi nahi karti. Sadiv apne kaksh me hi rehthi thi prarthana Karte .

Lakshman could not bear it anymore and just got up and left from there. Shatrughan tried to stop him but ram asked him to let Lakshman go.
All are sleeping while Lakshman could not. As he closes his eyes he can see the flashes of his wife smiling at him. He cannot take it any long.
L: chaudhah varsh Bheet gaya. Kadachit ek rathri nahi Bheet rahi hai. Mai aur Pratiksha nahi kar pa Raha Hoon. He closed his eyes and let his tears come out for his love ... Urmila. ...his MILA❤️

And finally subah hogaya.


TO BE CONTINUED...

Edited by Bdaygirl - 9 years ago

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sreevijayan thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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very emotional start...awesome..pls continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Continue soon.
Nice it is!
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Nice story. If you don't mind for this intrusion, please add a line for Urmila on with what jobs she have been engaged during those fateful 14 years.
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Superb, finally some body is writing abt post exile period. Loved it and dying to read
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A very heartwarming OS

Specially loved the last.line

14 years passed by easily , but this one night is not passing .👏👏👏
Edited by shivam030291 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is damn emotional !!!
But beautifully written :)
Superb :)
Update soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yee kyaaa??
Cliffhanger
Jldi updt kro na plzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb imagination !This line "And finally subah hogaya" 😳


P.S :: Urmila was sleeping for 14 years !
Edited by Arshi- - 9 years ago
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Please continue soon.
Can't wait

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