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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb, waiting for next part.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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]Awww ...Such a WOnderful Update !
You are quite talented 👏
Loved the whole thing !
His restlessness to his Urmila
Her Inner turmoil to meet her lakshman 😳
Loved it to the Core ...

Woww , Telugu telusa ?
Maadi Vijayawada 😆😉

Love,
Sruthi


Hai😊 thanks. Sruthi. Nenu Bengaluru lo unta
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Hai. Big thanks to each nd everyone for ur replies 😊

PART. 3:
Lakshman stood still watching her coming with the aarti plate. Sudden silence prevailed around him. No drums no cheers. He could not feel even his breath and the only sound was of her anklets which is increasing gradually as she came near him...as was his heart beat. He cannot even blink his eyes. They are not anymore under his control. They are just watching her as if they missed her deadly. Everybody watched him silently.it was hunuman who spoke first.
H: yeh Kaun hai rajkumar Lakshman? Bilkul mata Sita ki bathi vanvasi vastr dharan kiya hai ?
Lakshman even looking at her answered. 'Sita bhabhi ki pratibimbh!' Absentmindedly.
Hunuman looked confused 🥱🥱 Arthath?
Lakshman got out of his trance and composed himself.
S: yeh meri chote behen hai ,Urmila avem Sumitra Nandan ki patni.
Urmila came and hugged Sita with tears in her eyes. Sita hugged her back with tears rolling down her face. She greeted ram. She looked at her husband once and lowered her head. Ram and Sita noticed the pain in their eyes.
Kausalya asked them to perform the aarthi.
Shruthkirti did the Arti for ram and Sita while mandavi welcomed Bharat. She then gave the aarti plate to Urmila.
Urmila slowly walked towards him and stood infront of him.she saw into his eyes which are just gazing at her longingly.they lost in each other eyes as if talking to each other through them.
L: kaise hoon Urmila? Looking in to her eyes which are filled with hallowness and long wait...
U:Aap ke Bina kaise Ho sakti hoon swami?as a tear fell down from her eyes, she closed eyes and broke her trance.
She performed the Aarti and welcomed him.
All of them went to mandir and offered the prayers. Many kings and royals are in Ayodhya to see ram .sumanthji informed about their meeting the kings.
K: ram Sita avem Lakshman pehle vishram Karo bad me Bhat karengeSab se.
All the sisters are happy together. As did the brothers.
K:ram tum ye naye Vastra dharan karo. Tum Ayodhya ki raja hoon ab. Said with Guilty eyes.
Ram hugged his mother warmly.
Sita is also accompanied by her sisters to get ready.
Mandavi brought new clothes for Sita and Urmila.
Sita hugged all her three sisters and cried.
S: mujhe tum Sab bahut yaad aaye. aaj tum Sab ko dekh e ke bad me atyant prasann hoon.
Hum bhi aap ko bahut smaran Kiya didi said shruthkirti. 😭😭
Sita wiped their tears. Tum sab apna dhram poorn Nishtha se nirvaah kiya hai mujhe Garv hai tum Sab par.
Sita got dressed up in the Royal attire.
She looked at Urmila and caressing her hair asked her. Kaise hoon tum urmila? 🥱
Urmila with a small smile looked at her. Aap kaise hai didi?mujhe aap ki bahut yaad aaye hai?...
S: mujhe atyant garv hai mere is behen par. Tumhe itNiI peda sehen karte huye bhi apni bahu hone ki dharm ka palan kiya hai. Maa, pithaji avem samasth Mithila ko tum par garv hoga Urmila.
Urmila just smiled at her sister with teary eyes and said ...aap par bhi didi!
She dressed Urmila in a beautiful attire.
She looked beautiful in the dress as usual but she is not the same little sister of her.
S: tum bahut parivartit hogayehu hu Urmila.
U:nahi didi. Mai ti vaise hi hoona. Asked confusingly.
S: nahi.mere Urmila ki aankho me jo utsuktha hua karti thi vo a b kahi kho gaye.ve sadiv prasann rahti thi. Apni adhrao par to sadiv muskurahat hoti thi. 🥱🥱
U: looked at her sister with sad eyes. 😭😭
S: apni swami se door hone ki peeda kaise hoti hai..,is ka gyat hai mujhe. Tum to mujhse bhi adhik peeda me rahe hoon itni varsho se..
U: Nahi. ye mera dharam hai didi..
S: Mei keval ek varsh hi door raha paranthu tum chauthah varsho se door rahe Ho apni pati se. Mujhe me bhi itna Dheeraj nahi hai urmila.
Urmila could not speak anything.
Sita: swayam par itna khatin na Ho Urmila. Apni hriday ki dukh bhatne se tum ko kam peeda hoti hai.
Someone knocked the door and as Urmila opened she found Lakshman outside. She just stood still seeing him so did Lakshman.
sita went to them and asked him to come in. Lakshman entered the room and said
L: bhabhi. Aap Sab ko mata ne bhulaya.
Sita could see the pain in his eyes on seeing her ..
S: devarji. Hum prasthan karte hai. Urmila abhi tayaar nahi hai. Aap us ko lekar bada me aayeye. Saying so she left Lakshman and Urmila in the room and left with her sisters.
Finally they are left alone in the room.


TO BE CONTINUED...
Edited by Bdaygirl - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Awesome update :)
Superb :)
Too good :)
Eagerly waiting for the next part :)
Update soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Update update update..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
]Awesome update :)
Superb :)
Too good :)
Eagerly waiting for the next part :)
Update soon :)
Hai thanks. I will try to update soon. Thanks😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
😭Why did u left here. Am vry impatient reader so plz update soon.
Ds update was really really awesome.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Rupa...this is not done . Update soon. I was waiting for Lakshmila's conversation.
Beautiful update 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Reading this , I felt this might have actually happened .
I loved the depth in your thoughts 👏
Update soon .

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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Lovely and emotional part. Please update the next part soon. can't wait with this cliff hanger for long. 😊😊

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