Lakshman and Urmila drabbles updated on Pg 14- 16/3

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sumana.shesha

@sumana.shesha

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Wow :)

That was truly an amazing update :)

Superb :)

Too good :)

Wonderful :)

Update soon :)

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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Fabulous update dear..
I was grinning throughout the update..
Ram teasing urmilla
Then he teasing Lakshman..
Then Barat also tease him unknowingly..
Urmilla practising sword wow and our hero looking at her ...awe...
Omg it's amazing..
Enjoy reading it..
Marvelous work dear...
Update soon...

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mandy001

@mandy001

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Beautifully written.

Amazing work.

Each and every scene has been described really nicely. Keep it up.

Loved warrior urmi, nd ram's teasing.

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Mili

@LakshMila

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Res again :)

Unres...

What is this?Again u left us hanging on a cliff😆

Bohot ho gya...Such an amazing writer u are,now i want an update daily!

Are c'mon i am dying to read next!

And one more thing,kudos to you,the way u brought about Urmila's charaterization is perfect...👏

Lemme guess,will there be a game b/w these two warriors?

Okay leave it i am getting overexcited!!😉

Update soon Tha

xoxo

Edited by LakshMila - 9 years ago

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Srutha

@SriMaatangi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: LakshMila

Res again :)
Unres...
What is this?Again u left us hanging on a cliff😆
Bohot ho gya...Such an amazing writer u are,now i want an update daily!
Are c'mon i am dying to read next!
And one more thing,kudos to you,the way u brought about Urmila's charaterization is perfect...👏
Lemme guess,will there be a game b/w these two warriors?
Okay leave it i am getting overexcited!!😉
Update soon Tha
xoxo

Thanks Mili :)

Yeah well, my hands type with the flow.

I will update latest by tomorrow :)

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Priya.

@Priya.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Srutha

Dying to read the next part...

U r just sooo fab ⭐️

U know it feels so happy to read the second part again n again...

Just the kind of Laksh n Mila we wanted...gosh these two are so addictive.

Please please please dnt stop with the third part...somehow find a way to continue.

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Sruthi

@DilMereSuntaNhi

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Hi Sru ,

Read the two shots in one go😳
I love reading Lakshmila ...And you make it more Beautiful.
The second part toh I was all blushing and grinning 😆
Whr did you hide this talent all these days ?
You should have started this thread quite early .
Totally loving it ❤️
Update the next part soon .

Love,
Sruthi