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Shivani Priyam Kumar

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: -ladyninja-

thanks shivu 😊 seriously u guys are so motivating😃
n asu hi again n i think so i have greeted u the third time now😆😆

Naah...good work should always be praised because that's how you can pry out more form writers! And Paro I am a literature student and trust me when I tell you this...unless and until a work really moves me I don't waste my time reading it...jhoothi tarref is not my cup of lassi!😛

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Riya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#332

Originally posted by: Meself

Pranaam putri!! And baby I am loving your work so far...give me a bit more of time I'll put my two cents on the thread...its just I have so many other works to read and comment as of now!

Shivji ko humara work accha laga!!!!!! Main to dhanya hui Prabhu.🥳☺️

Take your time Shivani...there's no hurry.😳

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Riya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#333

Originally posted by: Meself

Naah...good work should always be praised because that's how you can pry out more form writers! And Paro I am a literature student and trust me when I tell you this...unless and until a work really moves me I don't waste my time reading it...jhoothi tarref is not my cup of lassi!😛

@Bold- Me too 🤗.

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Shivani Priyam Kumar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#334

Originally posted by: Riya_16

Shivji ko humara work accha laga!!!!!! Main to dhanya hui Prabhu.🥳☺️

Take your time Shivani...there's no hurry.😳

Careful what you wish for!!! I am a lazy, lazy woman! I have to finish my stories that have been going on for the past TWO years and I have to make comments on at least 8 more threads...so Riya...be very careful about what you wish for!!😆

P.S. You do write really well! Keep it up putri!

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Shivani Priyam Kumar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#335

Originally posted by: Riya_16

@Bold- Me too 🤗.

Arre hum angreji bacche! Haye...more jhappiyan to you!

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-ladyninja-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#336

Originally posted by: Meself

That entire Lakshman-Urmila angle wasn't dealt with at all! Either Urmila was playing a tigress for her sisters or she was playing a shrink for Lakshman...Kavita Kane reduced everyone's stand. She made it look like Urmila was a secondary fiddle and nothing more...I did not find her the fire-brand woman as she is claimed to be...issey acha tha ki 14 saal ke liye usko sula hi deti!

@black hmm yeah they both had only 2-3 scenes together..one after he rejects after then at their wedding night and after that maybe twice or thrice he teasing her n then when she goes n visits him at the forest

@violet though i would say the book was good but here as far as i read she was only taking care of her mother in laws n sisters n though she handled all the situations by herself at some points i found it a bit lame..meaning some places..

@green mujhe kabhi kabhi lagta tha either she was waiting for him or sleeping😲😕if u had noticed kavita would have said"years passing by n her getting old"something like that i used to wonder what she actually is trying to convey😕

n overall when ppl said to read the book i thought the book would be only full of lakshmila but after i read it it was maybe a carbon copy with some deleted parts of the original story but in urmila's pov🥱🥱

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-ladyninja-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#337

Originally posted by: Meself

Naah...good work should always be praised because that's how you can pry out more form writers! And Paro I am a literature student and trust me when I tell you this...unless and until a work really moves me I don't waste my time reading it...jhoothi tarref is not my cup of lassi!😛

aww thanks sweetheart😳
PS :u like Anushka shetty?😃

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Riya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#338

Originally posted by: Meself

Careful what you wish for!!! I am a lazy, lazy woman! I have to finish my stories that have been going on for the past TWO years and I have to make comments on at least 8 more threads...so Riya...be very careful about what you wish for!!😆

P.S. You do write really well! Keep it up putri!

Oops...hahaha...are you a Libra? because I am and I am a procrastinator...😆. I have 88 pms sitting on my dash board that I am yet to answer since 2012...

Edited by Riya_16 - 9 years ago