Prompt And You Shall Receive: Lakshmila Drabbles Part 8 on Pg 33 *New*

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sumana.shesha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#91

Wow :)

That was superb :)

Mind blowing :)

Awesome :)

Loved it :)

Update next part soon :)

PM me :)

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Priya.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#92

Riyaaa...lovely...truly worth the wait...

Loved the tender sweet love...

Had Karan n Yukti in mind all along while reading it...😳adore them for the way these two bring LaxMila to life.

When it comes to your favourite characters it's important for me to like the actors portraying them...otherwise I find it difficult to relate to them...don't know if it's weird 😆...but that's how it's for me 😳

As to my prompt...no probs...take your time...🤗

Greedily waiting for the next one😃

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Divi.C

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Posted: 9 years ago

#93

I think. I m dead😳😳😳

It wass awsome fabulous fantastic superb amazing n so on and on...dont have enough words dear...

Pls write more about lakshmila...pls...

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Aayushi15

@Aayushi15

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Posted: 9 years ago

#94

Aww l can't express how much I loved this os. It was so so beautiful. Every sentence so magnificently formed to portray the emotions.
Please write more as I love how amazingly you showcase the feelings of lakshmila.

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mandy001

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Posted: 9 years ago

#95

A greedy reach is asking, when will u give next update 😆

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Riya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: sugunmanas
fantastic update👏👏👏
loved Lakshmila😳
no words😃

Manas, thank you so much for reading😊

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Riya

@Riya_16

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Posted: 9 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: -ladyninja-
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unres
me first cool girl😎 Awww...thank you sweetie🤗
these lines"If the palace could talk...it would tell you how for the very first time it was eager in greeting the newly weds"*me blushing and running off to hide☺️*
wow yaar seriously these lines were just beautiful n i cant describe it😳
and the story overall i am in awe at ur writing skills seriously so beautiful😳😳 Thank You so much Paro...

and according to me this part was so awesomely described about how much both of them loved each other❤️the way he removed her jewllery the way he kissed her mehendi wow😳

I had Karan and Yukti in mind while writing this scene and trust me this was my very first attempt at writing a Wedding Night scene😉😳
i want more scenes like this on lakshmila*greedy me*😆😆 I'll try my best sweetheart😳
the last few words"ALWAYS" wow i got reminded of bella and edward from twilight where they say in the last part "forever"😭😭 so you are an Edward Bella fan👏👏. Do you watch The Vampire Diaries too?
it made me a bit emotional😭😭 I can understand believe me dear
i wish this part didnt end there at all so good it was..😳😳 But every thing comes to an end...hai na...Paro?
and thank u so much for updating it earlier than u decided🤗 Anything for you😉
waiting for the next part dearo..😳

Updated.😃

Thank you so much for liking the update and commenting Paro...😳

I know you all are busy and it takes a lot of effort to do comment. Thank you once again.

Dekho kitna colourful reply diya maine😆

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GrilledCheese

@GrilledCheese

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Posted: 9 years ago

#98

amazingly written...enjoyed reading it!

do keep writing!

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Shivam...

@Shivam...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#99

Hi Riya

All 3 parts were an amazing piece of writing , kudos to you

Loved it to the core .👏

Shivam

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Sruthi

@DilMereSuntaNhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#100

Hey Riya ,

Write something lik , During exile it was believed that Mila also took the clothes of Aesthetics even being in the Rajbhavan she ate fruits and vegetables , slept on the floor . Just like her hubby .
How she misses her husband . One side point from Urmila . Only Mila's inner turmoils .
she remembers him from everything . Even the empty corridors of Bhavan reminds her of Lakshman . Pooja mandir . Her jewellery . Their Room in the Palace . Everything just reminds her of him . What does she go through all these yrs . Was she crying for being left alone or is actually having a mental contact with her husband all this while .
Oops Sry , I have come again with another prompt .😆

Love,
Sruthi