Prompt And You Shall Receive: Lakshmila Drabbles Part 8 on Pg 33 *New* - Page 8

Originally posted by: radianteyes.

Rita I just read the first part and one thing that comes to my mind is superb
You have a beautiful flow in writing and that keeps the readers gripped .
Will read the 2nd part soon

Originally posted by: sugunmanas

Hey Riya

sorry ya i am late i just read now read the update😃

its amazing😃

continue soon😃

Originally posted by: DilMereSuntaNhi

Ohh my Goddd ! This is so sooo Beautiful.
I read Sita's Sister , but still reading this feels like I never knw something like rejection . I felt the pain all over again . I could feel the turmoil of emotions Lakshman was going through.
And OMG , Like really ..Fallen short of words . There can never be anything beautiful than this .
She was hurt , he healed her pain . She promised him , he promises her back . You wrote it so beautifully . I am getting more and more fascinated towards Lakshmila .
And their sweet nothings ❤️ It can only be LakshMila .
I would love to read more . With this I can write it on a piece of stamp pamper that you know magic and using it in your writings . You are Fab Darling 🤗

P.S- So Ranju n Swati were awake till late night to read this . I wonder did they go to sleep after reading sucha Fabulous Post 😉 . I would love to read what all Lakshman dreams about😆

Love,
Sruthi

Originally posted by: asmitag

Kaash tum SKR ki script writer hoti then bahut awesome scenes milte Lakshmila ka this just fab 👍🏼

Originally posted by: kayal1998

Wow that was really good👏👏

Loved both the parts

The second wasawsome and I just fell more and more n love with LakshMila

Poof Lakshman seems to be the handsomely naughty Prince just like Urmila😳

Originally posted by: eternity_of_luv

Hey riya..
Sorry I got to sleep before reading it..
It's amazing awesome superb...
Marvelous work dear...
Lakshman search for her..Lakshman solace..urmilla's angry..Each and every thing is brilliant..
Lakshman calling her Mila and her angry..then his confession... 👏 👏 😳
Their sweet little talks after confession
Love it ..
Beautifully penned..
Waiting for more work..
😃

Originally posted by: TwinMadness

This is so amazing, Riya :) I loved the emotions of Lakshman and Urmila. You have done such a fantastic job with the portrayal. This is what we all wanted in the show as well.

Please do update soon :)

Originally posted by: abshcool

wow just simply wow!!!!!😳😳
what an update read both in a go...😳😳
superb work yaar...👏👏
do continue soon...😳😳

Originally posted by: Priya.

Riyaaa.

Just where were you all this while?...a gem of a writer ⭐️⭐️⭐️ Thank you so much Priya

I know I am a bit late here...net was acting up...finally managed to complete reading both...Absolutely absolutely loved them ...just the kind I would like to read. Not a problem...you have liked the update and that's what is important.😊

Waiting for more...updated😉

Can I ask for something?...can you write on their realisation based on the scenes that are shown in SKR...like the first meeting,swayamvar, and later on all the Laxmila scenes?...saving her life at the lake, bringing food and all the rest...pov and impression about the other from both Laksh and our Mila. Sure I have noted the prompt down..will get to it as soon as I can clear the backlog.😊

Keep it longgg😆...very demanding I know...😉...but we LaxMila fans can haq se demand anything of each other ...right?😆 Of course anything for my fellow Lakshmila fans😆

Will catch you at Lax AT one of these days.. Hopefully soon enough.

Priya

PS - waiting for the hot update😉...and I completed 13 ages and ages ago😆 hahahaha good to know😉