Prompt And You Shall Receive: Lakshmila Drabbles Part 8 on Pg 33 *New* - Page 12

Originally posted by: LakshMila

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Phenomenal!

Originally posted by: AMAYASTARSS

Amazing!
You are a born writer 😃
Do write more 😳
Read all of you're work 😛 keep it up.

Originally posted by: TwinMadness

OH. MY.GOD.

That was just :O

Amazing :)

Originally posted by: NEIRAlover

OMG...it is so beautiful😳 Thank you dearie😉😳

This is so lovely...awesome!!!!

Completely in love with it.

I am so glad that you have liked the update.😃

You are a born writer...fantastic👏

Thank you...I am so touched.😊

I will need some time to recover after reading this 😳 HOT 😳 romance. HOT romance😆😆

Originally posted by: sumana.shesha

Wow :)

That was superb :)

Mind blowing :)

Awesome :)

Loved it :)

Update next part soon :)

PM me :)

Originally posted by: shivam030291

Hi Riya

All 3 parts were an amazing piece of writing , kudos to you

Loved it to the core .👏

Shivam

Originally posted by: DilMereSuntaNhi

Hey Riya ,

Write something lik , During exile it was believed that Mila also took the clothes of Aesthetics even being in the Rajbhavan she ate fruits and vegetables , slept on the floor . Just like her hubby . For sure Sru...I hope I'm able to do proper justice.😳
How she misses her husband . One side point from Urmila . Only Mila's inner turmoils .
she remembers him from everything . Even the empty corridors of Bhavan reminds her of Lakshman . Pooja mandir . Her jewellery . Their Room in the Palace . Everything just reminds her of him . What does she go through all these yrs . Was she crying for being left alone or is actually having a mental contact with her husband all this while .
Oops Sry , I have come again with another prompt .😆 Hahaha you are always welcome and you know that.
Love,
Sruthi

Originally posted by: DilMereSuntaNhi

"Then so be it...to the world you will be Urmila...the Princess of Mithila and younger Kulvadhu of Ayodhya...but in the inner quarters of this chamber ...in the deeper recesses of this suite...you will be my Mila as I will be yours!! The unstoppable, unrestrained, wild...passionate.. your true self...won't you?"

"I don't need my mehendi to tell me how much my husband loves me...I know he does...every time he looks at me...with every passing glance, every little gesture...tells me that.

Things like this make a relationship Beautiful . I agree with you...these little things show how much a couple cares about one another.😉

Beautifully Written 👏 It was worth waiting . I am so sorry for being this late . I am the unlucky one anyways . I am actually quite Amazed with the way you represented their inner emotions , this is what a newly wedded go through , blaming their own selves for each silly mistake . Only time clears that ofcourse . I loved it completely . I could actually see Karan and Yukti enacting this 😳 ! You make them worth falling in Love all over again .

Me too wrote the entire update keeping them in my mind.😳 And don't apologize for replying late...I understand that you have boards coming up. You are here and that's what's important for me. Trust me.😃

You RoCk GiRL😎

Waiting to read more Lakshmila from you .

Love,

Sruthi

Originally posted by: emina

Absolutely loved it...😛😛😛

1 prompt from me😳. Can you write something on Lakshman's jealousy😆. Like maybe after swayamvar, but before Lakshmila's marriage is fixed, if we could have an entry of another Prince(Maybe he came for Sita's swayamvar but fell for Urmila instead😃). He is pursuing Urmila but Urmila and Lakshman are yet to admit their feelings. Something like this. Sounds crazy I guess.

Originally posted by: Muzikchik

Amazing fic!!!

Eagerly waiting for the next part! 😊