Prompt And You Shall Receive: Lakshmila Drabbles Part 8 on Pg 33 *New*

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Riya

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: VYGA89
Amazing.
Loved it.
Thank you so much for this.
I just love LakshMila...

Thank you keep reading for more😛

Edited by Riya_16 - 9 years ago

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-ladyninja-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

res
unres
me first cool girl😎
these lines"If the palace could talk...it would tell you how for the very first time it was eager in greeting the newly weds"
wow yaar seriously these lines were just beautiful n i cant describe it😳
and the story overall i am in awe at ur writing skills seriously so beautiful😳😳
and according to me this part was so awesomely described about how much both of them loved each other❤️the way he removed her jewllery the way he kissed her mehendi wow😳
i want more scenes like this on lakshmila*greedy me*😆😆
the last few words"ALWAYS" wow i got reminded of bella and edward from twilight where they say in the last part "forever"😭😭
it made me a bit emotional😭😭
i wish this part didnt end there at all so good it was..😳😳
and thank u so much for updating it earlier than u decided🤗
waiting for the next part dearo..😳

Edited by -ladyninja- - 9 years ago