Lakshmila TS/FF-You are engraved in my heart❤️ part 2 updtd page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
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heya guys i had been thinking to write a ts or ff on lakshmila and i have finally made a decision to write a piece on them😆😆 anyways since its been long since i last wrote and i am sure that this may make u go nuts but try to bear with me😆😆

PROLOGUE
She was numb,heartbroken but more than that it seemed as though the whole world had come down in front of her.She was just sitting at the corner of her room trying to control the tears as she knew that she shouldn't have done that but she had no other go.The man whom she had loved the most was about to leave to the forest in order to serve his brother and sister in law.She couldn't see him for one last time as she knew it would be difficult for her to let him go.but the worst thing was she gave him the worst pain,yes the pain of hatred.But she had her own reason behind this.She just held on to her heart and said"i know what i had done was wrong but i did this so that you wont be able to think about me for the next 14 years.But i know i wont be able to live a moment without you.Even if you are away from me"YOU WILL ALWAYS BE ENGRAVED IN MY HEART LAKSHMAN"said Urmila and let down the tears from her eyes.


"knock knock"guys are you there or felt asleep after reading this??😆 anyways just tell me how this was and do let me know whether i should continue this..😳

PART 1
PART 2

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radianteyes. thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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beautiful start ,
loved the pov😊
do continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: radianteyes.

beautiful start ,

loved the pov😊
do continue



thank u so much that's motivating😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Just reading the prologue , I felt numb.
Beautiful update . Waiting for the next one .
Update soon.

Love,
Sruthi

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: DilMereSuntaNhi

Just reading the prologue , I felt numb.
Beautiful update . Waiting for the next one .
Update soon.

Love,
Sruthi



thankie shruti🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful update
Loved the POV
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: priyu03

Beautiful update

Loved the POV
Update soon



aww thankie so much priya😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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loved the prologue...😳
waiting fr the first part...😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: abshcool

loved the prologue...😳
waiting fr the first part...😳



thankie😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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great start...loved it...continue soon😊

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