Lakshmila TS/FF-You are engraved in my heart❤️ part 2 updtd page 7

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-ladyninja-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: eternity_of_luv
Beautiful..continue soon...

thanks girl😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: -GrilledCheese-
lovely start...waiting for more!

thank u so much yaar😊

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-ladyninja-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

hey guys am back but this time with part one😆 happy reading😊

It was such a beautiful day in the city of Mithila with the sun shining brightly,the birds chirping,flowers bloomed with some wonderful fragrance and everyone were so happy.Yes this was the day where Sita ,Urmila and their two cousin sisters wanted to spend it with the villagers and their children. So the four girls had got the permission from rajrishi Janak and they headed into the interiors of mithila with the minister accompanying them.every one of the villagers were so happy to see them and welcomed the girls with utmost joy. But actually one thing which troubled them were the demons who were present in that place which made the living the of the villagers a bit difficult.but still they ensured that they had utmost safety around them.

Sita had now decide that she would cook some food for the children and while her two cousins were playing with them.she just realized that she needed some water to cook the food."Urmila! dear sister"Sita called her."could you bring me a pot of water so that it would be a great help for me though i know i am troubling you"Sita added and requested."Didi it would be a great honour to help you out with the work"urmila replied and proceeded to collect some water.but sita stopped her."but are you going alone?i know it wouldnt be safe for you."she said."no need to worry didi its here nearby i will quickly go and come back"she said and left the place.Urmila noticed that the place was so calm and silent but couldnt see the disaster that was gonna come.

She could actually hear some sound coming from nearby.she quickly went behind a tree to see who it was.there stood a man who was tall and well built and he was practicing archery all alone.her heart suddenly started beating heavily and she didnt knew the reason behind this.she wanted to see him.but suddenly from no where a demon came to attack her and she just shut her eyes screaming loud.but when she opened them the monster was gone.instead she finally saw the guy whom she wanted to see a bit before.he was handsome,very handsome but he didnt seem to smile he was rough and his eyes were cold and angry as angry that it could just burn down someone.yet she found him attractive.

He was just looking at her without any expressions which made her go a bit uncomfortable.he took small steps towards her making her breathe heavily.she couldnt move any further as her back hit the tree.he was still coming closer and closer to her.she just shut her eyes whereas he stopped right there.he just left the place without saying anything to her.she could feel that he wasnt approaching her and she opened her eyes and as she sensed she couldnt see him.she wanted to thank him speak to him but he was gone.she was just bewildered by his actions and asked herself"where did he just disappear?"

finally i completed the first part.hope u all liked it.😊

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Sruthi

@DilMereSuntaNhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Finally you updated it Paru , Pta nhi kabse hume intezaar karvarhi thi !😆
Beautiful , Very well written dear 👏. I can visualize the scene reading it
Lakshman the tough Young Rigid Man , 😆 Will Love to see his side as well , I guess he is going through the same what Urmila went , Bt he is too smart to cover it up , Unlike Mila.😉
hayeee , He approaches and Approaches ☺️ and Leaves😲😆

btw U said its a TS ? then whr is the stry heading ? Only upto their marriage ?
Sry #OverExcitedMe 😆

Update the next one lengthy and dont delay .😆

Love,
Sruthi

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-ladyninja-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: DilMereSuntaNhi
Finally you updated it Paru , Pta nhi kabse hume intezaar karvarhi thi !😆
Beautiful , Very well written dear 👏. I can visualize the scene reading it
Lakshman the tough Young Rigid Man , 😆 Will Love to see his side as well , I guess he is going through the same what Urmila went , Bt he is too smart to cover it up , Unlike Mila.😉
hayeee , He approaches and Approaches ☺️ and Leaves😲😆

btw U said its a TS ? then whr is the stry heading ? Only upto their marriage ?
Sry #OverExcitedMe 😆

Update the next one lengthy and dont delay .😆

Love,
Sruthi

aww sru thankie for such a lovely comment🤗if the story doesnt end in ten parts then i shall convert this into an FF😆😆😉

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Sruthi

@DilMereSuntaNhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: -ladyninja-

aww sru thankie for such a lovely comment🤗if the story doesnt end in ten parts then i shall convert this into an FF😆😆😉

Ohh you meant ten shot ? I assumed it to be three shot🤣
LOL ! 😆😆