Lakshmila TS/FF-You are engraved in my heart❤️ part 2 updtd page 7

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-ladyninja-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: NEIRAlover
WOW!!!!
Read both the parts...beautifully written.

Your FF made me fall more in love with LakshMila.

Please do continue.

And may I know your name?

thanku so much aayu😳
@bold aww really?😭*happy tears*😆
sure sure 😛

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-ladyninja-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: DilMereSuntaNhi

Next part kab update karegi ?
I cnt wait 😡😕😆

aaj karungi update😉😆
n ek minute ruk u became goldie wow congo sista🤗❤️
i know am late in wishing u😭😆

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-ladyninja-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: lasyap3
Hey ! How have you been ?
Remember , we met sometime back !

and

Regarding this one , I really wanted someone to write this angle of story in Lakshman and Urmila's lives ... and see here is it ...

The prologues was brilliant ! I loved it ... Waiting for more

hey lasya am good dearo nuvu ela unnavu?🤗
aww thanks ya😳

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-ladyninja-

@-ladyninja-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

hela guys am back with part 2😆 and yeah regarding pms i didnt send for part 1 too but if u need them then just hit a like on the first page😛

the incidents that happened just sometime before kept flashing in her mind.she just couldnt get away from those thoughts.she was almost back where they had come but then she realized that she had left the pot back there.[😆] for a second she thought in her mind"uff how stupid am i?!one thing i know is that i am very much stuck!!if i go without the pot what will didi think about me and on the contrary if i go back to that place where i had left it how will i assure myself that it would not be without any danger??"what will i do now"she wondered."one thing that is left now is that let me go back there and get it come what may"she said and took a huge wooden branch[😲] with herself which was lying nearby and started proceeding backwards.she was indeed courageous by this move of hers but was a bit afraid too. all through the way she kept telling herself"yes girl you can do it"

and finally she reached there and from a distance she could see the pot under the tree where she had left it."thank god till now no danger"she sighed out in relief.but the next second she could hear some sound precisely footsteps coming towards her.immediately to which she shouted"who is down there". She couldnt actually see anything as the place was a bit full of bushes. one thing she could have done is that immediately running away from there but she chose not to.the sound of the footsteps grew even louder and she could vaguely see the figure which was approaching towards her and she shut her eyes and thought"GIRL THIS IS IT"and took the wooden branch and"BOOM"[😲😆] she hit the figure.

"ouch"she heard him cry and suddenly her heart started beating fast.it was the same guy who had saved her life a little while ago[😳]."omg what did i just do"she shouted but even before she could complete the sentence she was pinned to the tree beside by him."how dare you"he asked with anger at the top of his nose and his eyes red shot looking at her.she was buried with fear by the action of his."well i must say you have indeed given me a wonderful gift for saving your life"said lakshman with still his shoulders bleeding.this sentence of his pricked her heart[😭]

"well i am really sorry for hurting you and i didnt mean to. i just thought it could be a random demon."said urmila."where the hell could you find i demon walking down the path and that too so freely"asked lakshman with urmila replying with teary eyed"i know i was wrong i am sorry"he knew he had hurted her by his words and action and he was cursing himself for this.but the next second with he himself without knowing the reason calmed himself down and said"i am sorry"she was surprised rather i would say shocked.both were just looking into each other but he just left her.[😕]"listen just take this piece of cloth and tie it around.you are bleeding and i cant see you like this"she said with both of them confused by her words.she just turned around while he dressed it up and she was about to leave but she couldnt.yes he caught hold of her hand and her heart beating even heavily.his touch gave shivering all over her.she just thought"what is happening to me??why am i becoming like this when i am around or nearby to him"and then she turned around and she was just looking at her with a smile on his face "wouldn't you thank me for saving your life"he asked her eagerly waiting for her response leaving her shocked..[😳]

well thats it folks for now.hope u all liked it.😳

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1002384

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

gurl paro kiddu update...😳😳😳😳

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Sruthi

@DilMereSuntaNhi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#46

."well i must say you have indeed given me a wonderful gift for saving your life"

Awwie ...This is so beautiful !
Emotional update it was, bt more than that , it was passionate.
I loved it Paru ...
Iss baar thoda zyaada likhna ⭐️
Waiting for the next one...

Love,
Sruthi

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sugunmanas

@lifeiscrazy

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

wow fantastic update dear😃
loved this part to the core in the update
fantastic😳 loving Lakshmila even more😳
why am i becoming like this when i am around or nearby to him"and then she turned around and she was just looking at her with a smile on his face "wouldn't you thank me for saving your life"he asked her eagerly waiting for her response leaving her shocked..