TS THE FOUR PART 6A : BEHIND ENEMY LINES BEGINNING PG 35 22/05 - Page 20

It took me quite some time to read it. But it was fantastic. I enjoyed it thoroughly. 👏👏👏

@Tha @Shivam Ofcuz we should collab :P 😆

Enjoyed reading it. Very nicely written. Pls continue.

Hahaha it was so funny. I couldn't stop laughing.it is amazing. Please carry on.

awesome update rishivar!!!!!worth waiting ...loved suthkirti and sathrugan portrayal ...racing scene mothers running behind mandavi and urmila and coming 3&4 ...special couple urmila's pony and saryu ... and last the counseling part ...team shatru and their crazy ideas was superb !!!!! (they were true winners)
p.s. this certifies I am crazy

Hai

Oh my god. Your posts are always so hilarious and at the same time outstanding.
I loved it. Shatrughan's drunk avatar was adorable and all the competitions were great too.
And the last line was epic, " jeete toh hum hi hai " .

Awesome update.

Ohk!!! This was too much!!!!

Thanks for PM bhaiya. Read it yesterday but commenting late. Sorry for late reply bcoz kal kar nahi paayi thi. Sab theek kehte hai u r great rishivar . Aapne bahut achcha prasaad diya. Intezaar ka phal bahut meetha mila. I died laughing your OS. My favourite points from the OS are=
1. Ram reactions on Sita pravachans 🤣
2.Mandavi aur lankesh 😃
3. Lakshman aur Badam 😃
4. Chandrabhaga scolding Urmi n kirti and sumitra saying - Toh mere yeh dono yeh putra kaun se doodh ke dhoole hai 🤣
5. When Lakshman and Shatrughan comment on bharat mandavi married life - bahut bura kat raha hai.🤣
6. Ram janak conversation in which ram says mujhe sita ka gyan bahut milta hai and janak reaction. 🤣
7.Ram saying in thoughts that he would have sent lakshman to lift dhanush that was too much 🤣
8. Shatrughan in drunk state.🤣
9. Shatrughan saying to sumitra - budhiya 🤣
10. Shatrughan singing Hum saath saath hai 🤣
11.Ram saying nahi Sitae nahi and bharat having great sigh of relief that mandavi is in another team.🤣
12. Ram dialogue = kya ghanta strong hai hamari team that was epic 🤣
13.Manthra playing sitar that was too much too bear 🤣 🤣 can't imagine.
14. Round 1 was totally out of control Sita can't even keep quiet for 5 mins and kirti sharmane se nahi rok payi 🤣 🤣
15.Urmila ki pony aur sarayu ki love story 🤣 🤣 🤣
16.Sita n kirti coming on 4 and 5 rank due to chandrabhaga n sunaina. 🤣 🤣
17. Bharat aur mandavi ki dusri suhaagraat n lakshman urmi shatrughan singing wedding song that was the point that I burst out laughing 🤣 🤣 🤣
18. Dashrath reaction on shatrughan team was too much hilarious pratiyogita 4 🤣
19 . The last line of OS - jeete toh hum hi hai was epic 👏
merit taraf se bhi shatrughan ki team jeeti hai
your whole OS is fantastic n superb. Hats off to u .👏

Rishivar u r fantastic n very talented writer. Keep writing. Waiting for the next part .😊