TS THE FOUR PART 6A : BEHIND ENEMY LINES BEGINNING PG 35 22/05

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Srutha

@SriMaatangi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#181

Aap haina Rishivar 🤣🤣

You took Mili'r route of pravachan love 😆😆

I just can't... My mom thinks I am nuts 😆😆

Dasharath and his reactions 🤣

Kirti and Darbaar. Ye kya hai? 😆😆

Bharat and Suhagraat 😆😆😆

Where do you get crack ideas like this? 🤣

P.S. PM me. We need to work on our crack fic! :P

Quote

Mili

@LakshMila

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#182

Its a big applaud from my side

🤣

Bhaiya I am dead laughing,its probably my aatma commenting 😆

Bharat Mandavi!could totally imagine.Poor Ram n Bharat

And Manthara playing Sitar was 🤪 Heights!

Just imagine OMG

I laughed so much.

Shatru gang toh apni hi hai 'Hum Saath Saath Hai' 😆

If Sumitra is played by Sampada,then Shatru ko bhaang zyada hi chadh gayi hai.I need so many more updates like this every week.Rishivar,Give up hacking and write updates for us :P

😆

Though it was lengthy,I never wanted it to end.

Rest pravachan tomorrow !!

You know which was my favourite couple?

Lakshman's horse and Urmila's pony 🤣

My next work 'The chronicle of Sarayu and his beloved'🤣

What is she named?

Next drabble on their love story lol 😆

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Anokhisharma

@Anokhisharma

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#183

Rightly said... I am still laughing thinking about lakshman's horse nd urmila's pony... Hats off to Rishivar for such mind blowing ideas

Quote

Shivam...

@Shivam...

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: LakshMila
Its a big applaud from my side
🤣
🤣
🤣
🤣
Bhaiya I am dead laughing,its probably my aatma commenting 😆
Bharat Mandavi!could totally imagine.Poor Ram n Bharat
And Manthara playing Sitar was 🤪 Heights!
Just imagine OMG
I laughed so much.
Shatru gang toh apni hi hai 'Hum Saath Saath Hai' 😆
If Sumitra is played by Sampada,then Shatru ko bhaang zyada hi chadh gayi hai.I need so many more updates like this every week.Rishivar,Give up hacking and write updates for us :P
😆
Though it was lengthy,I never wanted it to end.
Rest pravachan tomorrow !!

You know which was my favourite couple?
Lakshman's horse and Urmila's pony 🤣
My next work 'The chronicle of Sarayu and his beloved'🤣
What is she named?
Next drabble on their love story lol 😆

Rishivar Thanks Mili's Aatma for such gracious comments.

Regarding the favourite couple , How about:

THE CHRONICLES OF SARAAYU AND SURILIE

other than that , are you really serious about the drabble😆😆

Edited by Shivam... - 9 years ago

Quote

rina

@Trinaa

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#185

Loved it👍🏼

OMG it was so hilarious😆

I just cant stop laughing after reading this🤣🤣

It was just so funny😆😆

I am with Shatru's team😃

Loved the twins especially Shatru🤣😛

Saraayu's and Urmila's pony ki love story🤣

Poor Bharat, could imagine when Mandavi tries to get the necklace from him😳

Sumantra ji in Sambha style👍🏼

And Dashrath was so funny😆

Loved the part when Shatru is under influence of bhang and poor Kirti🤣

This was my favourite😊❤️

Wait Kirti and politics?⭐️👏😆

Edited by trina134 - 9 years ago

Quote

rina

@Trinaa

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#186

By the way, Shivam I have a suggestion for the next part if you would like that.

I would like if you write on it.

Why dont you show Kirti and the others making a team and teaching a lesson to the twins by playing a prank on them ?

Quote

Mili

@LakshMila

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: Shivam...

Rishivar Thanks Mili's Aatma for such gracious comments.

Regarding the favourite couple , How about:

THE CHRONICLES OF SARAAYU AND SURILIE

other than that , are you really serious about the drabble😆😆

Yup :P

😆

As you said we are not normal people :P