SKR ff : The Season of Oleander Blossoms ch4 pg13

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shruthiravi

@shruthiravi

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#101

@milinda what a cute exchange between Lakshman and Sita. And Urmila. She is one naughty girl.

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sugunmanas

@lifeiscrazy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#102

superb Shreya👏👏
loved Lakshman and Sita conversation😃
continue soon😉

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Sowmya

@my_angel...

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#103

wow...gracious god!!!!!!!i'm in so love with this...it is tooo good...lovely ...u just create magic in scenes...gosh u could be assistant to the director of SKR...gosh i'm spellbound by ur writing skills...u r probably tooo great...😊 and this was just mind-blowing...I loved lakshman to the core in this update...And I loved how he was excited knowing about sita...gosh even i had goosebumps...omg!!!!!!!!!!i love this story so much!!! amazing...awesome...lovely...

fantastic...fabulous...astonishing...astounding...

spectacular...captivating...great...phenomenal...

impressive...outstanding...interesting...

remarkable concept and story...superb...

Astonishing...awe...inspiring...beautiful...

breathtaking...Impressive...magnificent...

shocking...stunning...Stupefying...striking...majestic...

wonderful...Wondrous...overwhelming...loved it...sorry wanted to write more but i'm spellbound right now...👏

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radianteyes.

@radianteyes.

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#104

Woo , read it all
What an update loved it too core
Urmillas mischief , sits curosity
Lakshmans interaction.
Everything
Especially that extraordinary line that extraordinary situations require extraordinary measures

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realraul2307

@realraul2307

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#105

Great Story!😊 Thank you for the PM!

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KrishnaSourav

@KrishnaRukmini

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#106

lovely update

loved it

loved the convo between Sita & Lakshman

Urmila is one naughty mischief

loved her

continue soon

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-Archi-

@-Archi-

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: milinda.shreyz

Thank you darling. This is a great review. And no I am not doing total clichd puspvatika scene.
I am glad u liked how I introduced the sons of dasarath. Because itz seeta's story and she doesnt know them yet, so I couldn't use their names. I had to do it indirectly using descriptions. It was very tough, and I was nervous. Thank you so much for your enthusiasm for my ff.
I hope I could live up to your expectation.

Yeah, I figured it would be super hard to write about Ram without actually acknowledging him. But kudos to you - it came out BRILLIANTLY! And don't be nervous hun! There is, no joke, jadoo in your words... I honestly just wanna to keep reading forever.

okay, now coming to the update, it was perfect 👏👏 Seeta's restlessness and anxiety was soo on point. I don't know HOW she could refuse Lakshmana's offer - I would run up the hill if I was in her place (i know, i know, its royal etiquette and all, but still...😆).

Urmila is definitely a sweetheart. She is exactly what the proper and responsible Seeta needs to brighten up her life. I like all the four sisters to be honest. Mandavi's devotion, Shrutkirti's childishness and of course Urmila's nautanki - you characterized them soo well! And now I am so excited to read about Urmila & Lakshmana's love story 😆 I am really hoping you will make it love at first sight for those two

And lastly, the best part of the entire chapter was this gem:

''You exist ? I mean in reality ? You are not a fairy-tale ?''

🤣🤣🤣 Lakshmana is honestly one hell of a guy! The way he teases Ram, the way he talked to Seeta... I am LOVING him.

Shreyuu please continueee soon 😛