Akjal Story ~Maahi~ Pt 3, pg 3 up ! - Page 2

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part 2 raat tumhari bahon mein
At midnight... Kajal got up... And akshay as well as she by mistake moved him abit ... But still in bed...
A. ( in a sleepy tone ) kya hua kajal ? Thandi lag rahi hai ? ...par... Abhi toh garmi hai... Aur ... Mujge bhi garmi lagrahi thi... Woh..mein abhi esi on karne wala tha...tum theek ho na ... ? Bhukhar toh nahi hai tumko ?
He said worried after he noticed she was shivering a bit ...
K. Woh ...
A.tum tahan hi ruko mein extra blanket lata hoon... Aur medicine bhi...
He said while he was about to get up... But kajal stopped him grabbing his arm...
K. Akshay tum bhi na... Mujhe sirf thodi si thand laj rahi hai... Aur . . . Tum ko gharmi lag rahi hai toh ... mujhe tumhari shirt de do... Mere liye utna hi kaafi hai... Par please mujhe aise chod kar matjao...
Akshay smiled ... And carressed her head ...
A.abhi deta hoon...
He unbottoned his shirt abd gave to kajal ... She wore it over her kurta ... And they both slept ...
...
in the morning... Akashay was shirtless ... Kajal waas sleeping side hugging akshay... Peacefully ...due to the sunrays that were fallibg on his face ... akshay woke up first... before kajals alarm clock ... he gently toook kajals arm and placed it on her stomach... He looked ather ... She qas looking beautiful...just like a sleeping beauty . ... He placed a kiss on her forehead...and got up...

He stood right in ffrobt of the huge window... And opened the curtains... Kajal woke up ... But still sleepy...
K. Akshay...
A. Tum Uth gayi... Sorry woh...
K.no its ok... Waise bhi i think time ho ne walatha ... Kitne baje hai ...? ( she looked at the clock... ... ) abhi bajbe hi wala hai alarm...
akshay sat on their bed right beside her ...
A. ..aj Meri neend khul gayithi ... So...
He got ready and so as kajal ... He went to office... The whole day passed in his meetibgs projcts...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi guys hope you like it pleaae leave your feedback and hit like button

part 2 raat tumhari bahon mein
At midnight... Kajal got up... And akshay as well as she by mistake moved him abit ... But still in bed...
A. ( in a sleepy tone ) kya hua kajal ? Thandi lag rahi hai ? ...par... Abhi toh garmi hai... Aur ... Mujge bhi garmi lagrahi thi... Woh..mein abhi esi on karne wala tha...tum theek ho na ... ? Bhukhar toh nahi hai tumko ?
He said worried after he noticed she was shivering a bit ...
K. Woh ...
A.tum tahan hi ruko mein extra blanket lata hoon... Aur medicine bhi...
He said while he was about to get up... But kajal stopped him grabbing his arm...
K. Akshay tum bhi na... Mujhe sirf thodi si thand laj rahi hai... Aur . . . Tum ko gharmi lag rahi hai toh ... mujhe tumhari shirt de do... Mere liye utna hi kaafi hai... Par please mujhe aise chod kar matjao...
Akshay smiled ... And carressed her head ...
A.abhi deta hoon...
He unbottoned his shirt abd gave to kajal ... She wore it over her kurta ... And they both slept ...
...
in the morning... Akashay was shirtless ... Kajal waas sleeping side hugging akshay... Peacefully ...due to the sunrays that were fallibg on his face ... akshay woke up first... before kajals alarm clock ... he gently toook kajals arm and placed it on her stomach... He looked ather ... She qas looking beautiful...just like a sleeping beauty . ... He placed a kiss on her forehead...and got up...

He stood right in ffrobt of the huge window... And opened the curtains... Kajal woke up ... But still sleepy...
K. Akshay...
A. Tum Uth gayi... Sorry woh...
K.no its ok... Waise bhi i think time ho ne walatha ... Kitne baje hai ...? ( she looked at the clock... ... ) abhi bajbe hi wala hai alarm...
akshay sat on their bed right beside her ...
A. ..aj Meri neend khul gayithi ... So...
He got ready and so as kajal ... He went to office... The whole day passed in his meetibgs projcts...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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The story is taking off well. Your dialogue are very good and natural.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks a lot guys for your commets and likes

Glad you liked this part

Will be updating right now :)
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Part 3 : chand aasmano se laapata
In the evening... Kajal was in the hall... Next to the huge window ... Sitting on the sofa in front of the tv with a magazibe in hrr hands... Akshay calld her ...
A. Kajal... Tayar ho jana ... Hum aj dinner par chal rahe hain...
K. Ok...toh aj ... Kyun ?
A. Wohh aj office mein kaam jaldi khatam ho gata tgha to socha tumhe dinner par leke jaun...

K. Thank you so much akshya...
A. Are ...muhje thankyou ki kyabaat hai...
Kajal smiled ...
A. Ok ill see you then...
K. Bye
A.bye...
both said so but didnt wanted to...
She was getting ready to go to their dinner... She wore a white saree and a pink blouse ... Her hsir was tied in a braid...
When she was standing in frobt of the mirror... Wearing her jhumka ... Akshay entered in their room... And his eyes fell on hr... She was looking gorgeous... Kajal was so busy wearing her jhumka he didnt noticed him thrre...he walked to her and stood behind her... Then sllwly... He bent a bit and whispered in her ear " beautiful " kajal glt a surprise... And she turned around to lok st him...
K. Akshay...
A. Kajal... ( He said ...very romantically )

And he looked at her...
A. Bs... Ek cheez ki kami hain...
K. Kya ?
he hekd the end if her braid abd slid the rubber band ... And then..with his fingers he loosen her hair ... Looking at her eyes. .. sharing a lovely eyelock... Letting it completely loose...
A. ... Kya bolun tumhaari taarif mein main ...
K. Kuch mat kaho... Kuch bhi nahi kaho ...
Precap : Akjal room romance ...

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