Mishaan SS: Fanaa, chap2page2 updated 10/4 - Page 2

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Lovely chapter,I'm sure ruhaan ne kisi reason se aisa kia hai,jo tumhare hatho me hai 😆 so cont. soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Babygirl728

Lovely chapter,I'm sure ruhaan ne kisi reason se aisa kia hai,jo tumhare hatho me hai 😆 so cont. soon


😛 thank you yup will continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: rbb1

Good start can't wait to read more

Thank you means a lot
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: pranurosid

Great start. It's so good to read MisHaan FFs with different backgrounds..Plzz update

Thank you i thought intense cross border romance will suit them hope i am doing justice
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: sreevijayan

Nice start dear...cnt wait to read more...

Thank you
Means a lot hope i am doing justice
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Chapter- 2
THE AHMED FAMILY

As soon as Gaiti left room she saw Ruhaan . Ruhaan was unable to meet her eyes bcz Gaiti was the only one who always stood by him no matter what everybody said she always trusted her brother and if someone asked her choose between Ruhaan and others she will always choose Ruhaan . Hence deeo down he knew he disappointed his sister big time , he knew bcz of him she lost her best friend
Gaiti:( broken voice) Nazare mat churao bhai, mera garoor toot jayega.
Bhai aapne jo kiya, vo galat tha, magar plz mujhse nazare chura kar khud ko aur takleef mat do
Mujhe allah par jitna vishwaas hai, utna hi aap par garoor , plz Bhai mein force nai karungi, jab kisi par vishwaas karne ka maan kare to, mujhe baata dena ki jo apne kiya vo kyu kiya

Hearing Gaiti gave him sense of relief . Whatever happened he didnt know whom to trust whom to no but one thing he knew he didnt want to hurt Gaiti telling her truth

Ruhaan entered the room and saw Mishti in deep sleep, he took the quilt and pillows and slept on couch
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Next morning
5 am
Azaan sound

The peaceful sound of Azaan was enough to wake Mishti up . With all that has occured this sound somewhere reminded her of home
As soon as she turned to go to washroom, she saw Ruhaan sleeping on couch

Mishti: meri zindagi barbaad karke, tum kaise so sakte ho, Mr Ruhaan ahmed ye neend tumhari akhari neend ho gi

Outside door
Gaiti: Bhai ! Bhai namaz ka waqt ho gaya hai, Abu bula rahe hai

As soon as mishti saw Ruhaan wake up se pretended to sleep

Ruhaan: Aaaya !
His sight fell on Mishti and he thought how can allah make someone. So beautiful
MONOLOGUE : Kash mein tumhe bata pao Mishti ki mein tumse beinteha mohabaat karne laga ho aur isi mohabaat k khatir tumhe Aarzoo bana hoga, mein tumhe Mishti rehne nai de sakta
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Dining area
Every member of Ahmed family was waiting for dinner to be served .
Rushad ahmed. Was the patriach of the house. He had a stern voice and everyone was scared of his anger
But today he was happy as his son got married

Rushad: Aisha begum! Aur kitna waqt lagega Bhai aaj ghosht milega bhi ya nai,
Aisha: ji lai

Rushad: Ruhaan miya tumhari begum sahiba kaha hai, bata dena usa hamare ghar mein bahu betiyaan itne der tak akele nai rehti are bhai tumhare nikaah k baad bhi agar tumhari Ammi aur behen ko hi rasoi ka sab kaam karna padhe to phir tumhari begum ka kya faidA

Aisha serving food to Rushad first, then Ruhaan

Aisha: ji vo aarzoo ki tabiyat thik nai thi , issi liya meine hi kaha tha ki aaram karle. Gaiti ne dawai de hi thi ab thik hai
Ruhaan understood his mother covered up for mishti

Aisha herself wanted mishti to not come in front of Rushad for if he knows the truth noone knows what will happen

Aisha: Gaiti, jaa khaana le jaa aur use sab samjha dena ki kal se kaise rehna hai
Gaiti whispering in aisha's ear
Ammi, mishti shakahari hai vo ye sab kaise
Aisha: sssh pagal hai kya abu k saamne bhed kholna hai kya rasaoi mein uske liya alag se khaana banaya hai jaa leja aur sun phupo aa rahi hai use tayaar kar lena.koi garbard na ho
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Ahmed house
Bhabhi! Bhaijaan gaiti Ruhaan are kaha ho sab k sab
Gaiti: lo ammi aa gayi firdous phupo
Mein bhabi ko lekar aati hoon varna pata hi apko

Knock knock!
Gaiti: kya mein andar aa sakti hoon
Mishti: hmmm
Gaiti: bhabhi phupo aai hai plz aap neeche aa jaiya aur haa
Gaiti didnt know how to complete sentence
Mishti: Aarzoo bankar aana yahi na
Gaiti felt really bad hearing this but she had no choice
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Mishti came down to greet Firdaus phupo.
Firdaus Nd Aisha talking

Mishti: aslamo malekum phupi
Firdaous: malekum o aslam
Firdaus: haye kinni sohni begum lekar aaya hai mera Ruhaan, haye bhabhi jaan mein na kehti thi li lahore mein sabse sohni nu ( daughterinlaw) apdi honi hai . Ya allah, le gaiti nazar uttar iski meri Ruhaan ki Aarzoo ki.
Firdaus : aur bata aarzoo bhai meine suna nikaah mein tere ammi, abu, bhai behen koi ni aaya kya huya bhaag kar to ni ghar se
Hearing this mishti was shocked
Are bhai mazak hai je daar to asa gai jaise sach bol rahi hoon

Aisha: Firdaus nayi nayi baachi hai , tang mat karo ise
Aur iska ami abbu america mein hai isa liya nai aa paye

Mishti: mein gaiti ki help kar dete ho kitchen mein

Mishti and gaiti started making tea and snacks for phupo. There was an uncomfortable silence .
Gaiti: mein samosa lekar jati hoon, aap chai le aayo

Firdaus : gaiti ik baat to bata maayka kaha hai Aarzoo ka

Mishti: Punjab mein
mishti replied as soon as she brought tea for firdaus
Firdaus sarcastically smile
Mishti serving tea to firdaus
Firdaus: kya aarzoo ye bhi to punjab hi hai , tum punjab mein khaha
Mishti: amr
Gaiti: Rawalpindi ( gaiti cutting mishti)
Rawalpindi mein paida hui aur america mein padhi
Ammi inki islamabad se thi aur abu rawalpindi

Firdaus: o bhai meina socha ki dosra punjab bolegi , are vo amritsar vala

All three Gaiti, mishti and Aisha were shocked hearing this
They knew they had to be careful from firdaus

Here firdaus threw another bomb
Firdaus: Gaiti, vo mishti khaana ka kya bana, pata chala koi hai bhi ya kisi ne bhaijaan ko daaranre k liya shosha chodhha . Are mujhe to laga kahi sach hi na bhai kya pata aaj kal k khoon, baap ko dhodne begane desh hi aa jaye

Mishti couldnt bear to hear all this and ran towards her room.
Firdaus: isa kya ho gaya. Bhag to asa gai jaise mein iski baat kar rahi hoon

Gaiti : in angry voice phupo bus karo na aap khao naya naya nikaah hua hai yaad aari hogi ghar ki
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Mishti closed the door and let tears fall from her eyes
Nai mishti tu haar nai sakti , mujhe mom ko batana hoga , mujhe nikalna hoga yaha i cant loose
Mishti had promised mauli that she wont call her or come back home till she brings back her father but alas she had to break one promise

Mishti dialled mauli's number
Mishti: mumma plz pick up the phone mera pass bahut kaam tym hai
Hel
As soon as mauli picked up before mishti could talk to her ,Ruhaan came snatched the phone and threw it in anger
His eyes were red with anger
Mishti had never seen this much anger is his eyes
Ruhaan :( angry tone) tum pagal ho
Clutching mishti's shoulder tumhe samaj mein nai aata tum ab mishti khaana nai Aarzoo Ruhaan ahmed ho tumhara ab us desh hai , tumhare parivaar se koi vaasta nai hai. Aaynda agar india phone kiya na tu

Mishti hated the touch of this man and now what he did she felt disgusted seeing him
Mishti removed his hand and threw them away
Misti ( anger and stubborn voice)
Tum he lagta hai mein daar jaungi nai ruhaan ahmed mein mishti khaana hoon tum mujhe mere vatan, mere family se kabhi door nai kar sakte

Ruhaan turned away and started shouting gaiti's name
Gaiti! Gaiti!
Gaiti: bhai kya ho
Ruhaan: mishti ka pass phone kaha se aaya tumhe kaam diya tha ( raising his voice) tumse vo bhi nai hua
Agar aaj k baad mishti k haath mein phone dekha tu mujhse bura koi nai hoga
Gaiiti was shocked seeing Ruhaan it was as if she was seeing a monster
Ruhaan left from there
Gaiti took the phone from mishti
This time also there was silence but this time when Gaiti saw in mishti's eye she saw them mocking her that this time gaiti is supportiing wrong

What Ruhaan did was enough for mishti to burn with revenge , with hatred
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Guys here is the next chapter it is more or less like filler but was important for the story
Do comment and tell

Your opinions matter alot for me to improve
Edited by sheen97 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#17

Gaiti's dialogues to ruhaan were touchy.she gave him the liberty to tell her why he did it whenever he is ready to trust someone.ruhaan admiring mishti's beauty was romantic.poor guy wishes he could tell her how much he loves her.why is he not able to tell her that?why does he not want her to live as mishti but as Aarzoo?rushad seems to be a kadoos.Firdaus' tongue.oh.mishti had promised mauli that she wont call her b4 finding ishaan?is he held in Pakistan?i am confused.where is ishaan?sad that though mauli picked up the phone Ruhaan took the ph from her.Yes Gaiti is wrong.but she is so scared that she cant go against ruhaan.liked mishit telling ruhaan that he cant separate her from her family.i think ruhaan has got a genuine reason 4 doing all this.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Interesting story, wonder what happened between them
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Very nyc update..
But still the cause of the wedding s not very clear yet..
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Gaiti's dialogues to ruhaan were touchy.she gave him the liberty to tell her why he did it whenever he is ready to trust someone.ruhaan admiring mishti's beauty was romantic.poor guy wishes he could tell her how much he loves her.why is he not able to tell her that?why does he not want her to live as mishti but as Aarzoo?rushad seems to be a kadoos.Firdaus' tongue.oh.mishti had promised mauli that she wont call her b4 finding ishaan?is he held in Pakistan?i am confused.where is ishaan?sad that though mauli picked up the phone Ruhaan took the ph from her.Yes Gaiti is wrong.but she is so scared that she cant go against ruhaan.liked mishit telling ruhaan that he cant separate her from her family.i think ruhaan has got a genuine reason 4 doing all this.


Thank you i love the way you give your opinion
Yes Ruhaan has a strong reason for doing this

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