Mishaan SS: Fanaa, chap2page2 updated 10/4

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hi guys just an idea popped into
My mind dont know how much i will be able to justify it but will try to fullest . Plz tell your opinions will try to improve .

Prologue
Radio plays
"Mere haath mein tera haath ho"

Kya bakwaas gaana hai ye, Shreked a girl in anger throwing the radio away
Her kohl lined eyes were filled with anger, hate, tears. Tear of betrayl, tears of pain , tears of hate
She was looking like an angel even though with these emotions
Big kohl filled eyes, round face, rosy lips , pretty nose with a simple nosepin . Head covered with dupatta with 2 strings of curled hair on side of her forehead on either side
Wearing a beautiful peach kurta and sharara she was looking etheral muslim bride
But should a bride be happy on her wedding day why was she filled with these intense emotions

"Aarzoo," came a concerned voice of her groom.

"Aarzoo, nai hai mera naam, the girl faced her groom with anger and hatred filled eyes
She held colloar of his sherwani, unintenially pulling him closer to her
Mishti ishaan khaana hai "
Tumne shaadi kya karli, tumhe lagta hai tum jeet gaye , nai Ruhaan ahmed tum mujhe kad nai kar sakte
Mujhe mishti reh kar marna pasand hai,magar Aarzoo Ruhaan ahmed rehkaar jeena nai "
Tumne Mishti khaana ki dosti dekhi, magar ab Mishti ki nafrat dekho gay"
Still looking into his eyes with tears of hate flowing " logon nai pyaar mein fanaa hota to bahut dekha hoga, magar pehli baar ye mishti khaana nafrat mein fanaa hogi" said Mishti with determined, broken and intense voice

Ruhaan freed himself from mishti's grip gave her a slight smile and turned back towards her.
Ruhaan ahmed was everything a girl can wish for in a man. He was smart calm, composed, a gentleman and a very courageours army officer.
He closed his eyes and a let a tear flow from them
RUHAAN MONOLOGUE: TUM MUJHE KYA BARBAAD KARO GI MISHTI, MEIN TU TUMHARE ISHQ MEIN FANAA HUN , ISHQ OR NAFRAT MEIN , MEIN NAFRAT KO JEETNE NAI DE SAKTA
DEKTE HAI TUM NAFRAT MEIN FANAA HOTI HO, YA MEIN TUMHARE ISHQ MEIN

Why did Ruhaan do to deserve this much hate?.
Will Ruhaan's love turn mishti's hate into love .


Guys this is the prologue
Hope you like it
Do comment and tell
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Yayyy new mishaan story,plz continue soon,I'm very excited
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Good start can't wait to read more
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Great start. It's so good to read MisHaan FFs with different backgrounds..Plzz update
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Nice start dear...cnt wait to read more...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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beautiful title.mishaan ff with a Muslim backdrop is so different. why does mishti hate ruhaan?but ruhaan's love will defeat her hatred.loved ruhaan's monologue
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hi guys thank you for liking my story
Will try to improve as far as chapter progress and sorry for not commenting was busy 😛
CHAPTER-1
NIKKAHIFIED
Life is unpredictable and fools are those people who think, they can control their lives.
Mishti always had everything under control, or as she thought . But a curveball and now she was married women. Now she was Aarzoo Ruhaan Ahmed burning with hatred.
What as life in store for the 2 individuals one extremely in hate and one extremely in love .
Lets see
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Seeing Mishti getting suffocating due to his presence Ruhaan felt it is better to leave. Afterall he needed a breath of fresh air to process everything.
Ruhaan went to the terace and started observing the sky in a thought might they give him answer why this all happended and what will happen now .
Suddenly he felt a hand on his shoulder which brought him out of his thoughts. He turned and saw his Ammi standing with tears in her eyes
Aisha ahmed have always been proud of choices of his son but today for the first time she had doubt and Ruhaan can sense that

RUHAAN: Ammi, apke ye aanso mujhe kamzoor karte hai. Aaj ye aanso shaarmindangi hai aur mujhe ye aur takleef de rahe hai.

AMMI: Ruhaan tum meri jaan ho, aur mujhe tum par fakra hai, magar mein ye samjah ne mein nakaam ho ki tumne us baachi k saath asa kyu kiya , kyu use ek asa rishta mein bandha jisme tumhe or use dono ko takleef k elawa kuch nai milega
Mujhe dar hai ki allah tumhe kaisa maaf karga us ladki ka vajoot mitana k liya. ( with wet eyes and cupping Ruhaan's cheek) Meri Jaan tumse nikaah ne uski pehchaan mita di , vo kaise nibha payegi. Vo tumse kaise Mohabaat kar payegi
Jo puri zindagi Mishti Ishaan khaana thi vo kaise apni zindaagi Aarzoo Ruhaan Ahmed rehkaar bita payegi
( RUHAAN HOLDING HIS MOTHER'S HAND AND KISSING THEM)
WITH BROKEN VOICE
Nai jaanta Ammi, nai jaanta ki mein allah se maafi mangane k kaabil ho ya nai, nai jaanta ki age kya hoga, nai jaanta ki kab tak mein uski nafrat seh payoga, magar itna zaroor jaanta hun, mein use mohabaat karne laga ho , jab tak is jism mein jaan hai, tab tak mein nikkah ke do bol nibaahne mein koi kami chodhoga , uski hifazat karna mera farz hai aur use nibahana mera karam

Aisha even though was worried felt some releif hearing Ruhaan's words ,
She hugged him and prayed to allah to forgive her son for what he did
Aisha's monologue
YAAH ALLAH TU REHMO KAREEM HA, MERE BACHOON PAR APNI RAHEEM BARSA, KHUDA KAISE SAMJHAON MEIN ISE KI YE RISHTA SIRF DILLON SE HI NAI SARHADON SE BHI BATA HAI.
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Mishti was so broken with the events that she just wanted to talk to her mom , suddenly she heard knock on the door

Kya mujhe andar aane ki ijaazat hai, came a sweet ,calming voice of 20 year old Gaiti, She was an intelligent, sensible girl and always stood for what she believed in .She was Ruhaan's sister who loved him more than anything. She had become Mishti's best friend when she came far away from her home but after the nikkah, Gaiti was afraid she lost the right to be her best friend

Gaiti: Bhabi, ye mein apke liye khaana lai thi, in dino mein jo kuch bhi hua apne khaya bhi nai kuch, kha lijiya
Agar kisi aur cheez ki zaroorat hai tu bata dena,
Gaiti could sense that Mishti didnt want anyone reminding her how her identity has been compromised and unfortunately Gaiti was one of them
She kept the food and turned to go,

BHABHI HA, Mishti broke with broken voice
Gaiti turned to see her
MISHTI: jo kuch dino pehle tumhari dost thi aaj vo tumhari bhabi hai
Tumhe zara bhi dard nI hua mujhe bhabhi keh kar , kyu hoga tumahara bahi kabhi galat to ho hi nai sakta, tum to kabhi galat ka saath de nai sakti

GAITI: kabhi kabhi hum itna ulaj jaate hai, ki doosre ki nazar mein hum kabhi saahi nai ho sakte, jab tum mishti thi tab bhi tum azeez dost thi, aaj jab tum Aarzoo ho tab bhi mujhe utni hi azeez ho, ha mein Bhai hai bahut MOHABAAT karti hoon , magar utni hi izaat tumhari bhi karti hoon
Mein ye nai kehti ki mera bhai galat nai hai, magar haa ye bhi ik sach hai ki agar usne tumse tumhaara vajoot cheeena hai, to jitna dukh use pahuncha hoga vo hum sab samaj bhi nai sakte
Tumhare nazarye se mein ab jo bhi kahongi tumhe vo galat lage ga aur mere nazarye se mein galat na tum ho na mera bhai
Waqt sab gum bhar dega, raasta khud b khud mil jayega . Hum bus us sabar se chal sakte hai manzil ki aur

Tum so jao, kal ik naya savara hai , dekhte hai zindagi ne kya rakha hum sab k lye
Gaiti smiled and left
Mishti started pondering over Gaiti's words

Precap:
Mishti: Mom plz pick up the phone,
Ring jaa rahi hai maa utha kyu nai rahi
( Ruhaan snatched phone from mishti, saw the call and cut the phone in anger)
Ruhaan: tum pagal ho, tumhe kitni baar manna karne k baar bhi kaise india mein phone laga sakti ho

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Well baby girl sis...its bit confusing 🤔 but dnt lose hope
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Ammi Ruhaan scene was emotional.ruhaan saying how much he loves mishti was touchy.but then like ammi asked y did he forcefully marry mishti?surprising that his sis Gaiti is mishti's close friend.Gaiti cant blame anyone 4 the situation.her dialogues to mishti were meaningful

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Ammi Ruhaan scene was emotional.ruhaan saying how much he loves mishti was touchy.but then like ammi asked y did he forcefully marry mishti?surprising that his sis Gaiti is mishti's close friend.Gaiti cant blame anyone 4 the situation.her dialogues to mishti were meaningful

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Ruhaan had to choose what he felt was best


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