MAULI VM 4th update (15th dec) (my vm thread) - Page 3

Originally posted by: Rhimjhimsawan

I would die from happiness if you ever used that song on Maunal The words are so perfect for them. I can't find the whole video but here is a part of it. LINK

second VM up...

love the new VM...love the song...didnt expect this song but loved it...has that angst and edgy feeling...liked the concept of your VM by showing divorce scene throughout and focusing on their expressions..im not sure abt the text, it suited in parts and then not in others...but definitely your VM had a theme and made sense...nice choice of scenes...overall the VM put me in that mood where I feel Mauli's heartbreak...much better than the 1st VM

Originally posted by: yanks28

love the new VM...love the song...didnt expect this song but loved it...has that angst and edgy feeling...liked the concept of your VM by showing divorce scene throughout and focusing on their expressions..im not sure abt the text, it suited in parts and then not in others...but definitely your VM had a theme and made sense...nice choice of scenes...overall the VM put me in that mood where I feel Mauli's heartbreak...much better than the 1st VM

Finally am here and am gonna put up feedback here instead of PM.
Yanks kinda has summed up well.
Here goes my feedback, am hoping you don't mind criticism. Let me know, from next time will not focus on it.
Song choice is great! Scene selection is interesting and done quite well, heartbreak captured well, Kunal feeling a bit of guilt Cos M is hurt, captured well.
Now, coming to technical and cons.
I will repeat what I said earlier, upload on drive or change layout to landscape . A single whole piece has a charm and flow of its own than a piece broken in three parts specially when you are uploading all at one point.
Text, suited in some scenes and messed in some.
Password scene didn't need text, Cos even for viewers who see it first time, it's clear what she types or opacity of text and way it blends in could be different. Post she types Nandini instead of her text, you could have used a black screen or some different transition, to put impact on breakdown.
Next is, on music muted dialogues look good but not on lyrics. Ofc not possible to always do this, but try wherever you can.
Tham Gaye and all text looked apt!
Third part of video, transitions looked great with way zoom in on KM face was done.
Pink colour wash or tone didn't look good.
Am not sure which colour tones your software offers but explore something different, than a plain colour wash for most video.
Try a rich colouring or dunno how to put it.
Also a tip, try exploring monochrome b/w cos that has an intensity and does wonders when used well by practising.
Ofc experiment was good as you used pink colour wash to put impact of breakdown.

Am done and trust me, this is the biggest feedback I ever gave on a VM. As I mentioned, am no expert, but just some suggestions so we can help.

Even I want to do one VM now, thanks to you but not sure on whom, from the show. Wish Colors uploaded mini clips so download could be easy.

The first video made me feel as of i miss the good old days..

Originally posted by: Madhura..

Finally am here and am gonna put up feedback here instead of PM.
Yanks kinda has summed up well.
Here goes my feedback, am hoping you don't mind criticism. Let me know, from next time will not focus on it.
Song choice is great! Scene selection is interesting and done quite well, heartbreak captured well, Kunal feeling a bit of guilt Cos M is hurt, captured well.
Now, coming to technical and cons.
I will repeat what I said earlier, upload on drive or change layout to landscape . A single whole piece has a charm and flow of its own than a piece broken in three parts specially when you are uploading all at one point.
Text, suited in some scenes and messed in some.
Password scene didn't need text, Cos even for viewers who see it first time, it's clear what she types or opacity of text and way it blends in could be different. Post she types Nandini instead of her text, you could have used a black screen or some different transition, to put impact on breakdown.
Next is, on music muted dialogues look good but not on lyrics. Ofc not possible to always do this, but try wherever you can.
Tham Gaye and all text looked apt!
Third part of video, transitions looked great with way zoom in on KM face was done.
Pink colour wash or tone didn't look good.
Am not sure which colour tones your software offers but explore something different, than a plain colour wash for most video.
Try a rich colouring or dunno how to put it.
Also a tip, try exploring monochrome b/w cos that has an intensity and does wonders when used well by practising.
Ofc experiment was good as you used pink colour wash to put impact of breakdown.

Am done and trust me, this is the biggest feedback I ever gave on a VM. As I mentioned, am no expert, but just some suggestions so we can help.

Even I want to do one VM now, thanks to you but not sure on whom, from the show. Wish Colors uploaded mini clips so download could be easy.

Originally posted by: Mumoos

The first video made me feel as of i miss the good old days..

Shakti is awesome actor.

ishaali vm. finally..