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Sabyata

@Sabyata

Sparkler

Posted: 6 years ago

#11

Loved it

awesome post...

Keep writing and posting jee

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prettywomaniya

@prettywomaniya

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Anahi
res 😊

unres

quoting myself so that this post can again come to the first page and get more viewers.. everybody should read this..

and its really sweet u liked the reserved post without knowing what i was going to write..

this post is so heartwarming .. i really love this post. will read it again and again whenever i am going to feel bad for mauli..

ahhh the stranger is so intriguing and charming.. there is no face in my mind , dont know how he looks but i am sure his heart is pure gold..

you are so good with words .. do write more!!

👏

i dont read stories on the forums but i really wish if you can convert this one shot into a short story.. 😊

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Angels11

@Angels11

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 6 years ago

#13

To wonderful beginnings...

But u dint reveal the name of the hero, cliffhanger mein chod diya 😭😭😭

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PenguinBaby

@PenguinBaby

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 6 years ago

#14

Well, I already ship them even though the stranger doesn't have a face in my head lol. ❤️

Hope everything goes towards Mauli's happiness! And as this is a Oneshot, should I believe you are not going to continue it?😆

Please do, I would love to read a new love story/revenge saga/ whatever you make of this😃

-Sanu

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PenguinBaby

@PenguinBaby

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 6 years ago

#15

And, is he a doctor too? 😆

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iykyk

@iykyk_3

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 6 years ago

#16

Nimmi, forgot to ask one thing. Is he a doctor by any chance? Someone using knife and a lot of sharp objects?? 🤔

And can you please continue this? I really want see their journey. So please do continue this... Pretty please with sugar on top. 😳

Edited by Ashi3 - 6 years ago

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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

Stunner

+ 28

Posted: 6 years ago

#17

Wow this was amazing loved it so much.
Please continue soon.

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tweetie19

@tweetie19

Dazzler

+ 9

Posted: 6 years ago

#18

What a splendid piece of writing! U write so beautifully..😳 i hope u are continuing this.. want to read more on Mauli ❤️

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silver_lotus

@silver_lotus

Explorer

Posted: 6 years ago

#19

Why is it os only. You can't keep us away from this stranger who can distract mouli from her pain. Hope cvs bring someone worthy for her

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Ashi3
And you're back to what you're best at. Woohoo! I can't be more happy!! Thank you so much Nimmi...🤗

As usual you have portrayed her emotions beautifully. The two persons whom she considered to be the center of her world betrayed her. Her soul is bound to be shattered by the blow. And collecting the shards of your broken self is a humongous task. The journey is going to be tough, but it's good to see that she hasn't lost the grit to fight her battles. She's willing to push herself forward. She won't let someone walk over her self-respect. She is the girl with fire in her soul.

The 'weird' stranger was indeed charming. 😉 He succeeded in diverting her attention in his own quirky manner. He was chivalrous, eccentric, endearing & irritating at the same time. But he was the perfect distraction she needed at the moment. His efforts to relieve her of her pain was heart-warming. I loved reading their interaction. It sure does seem like the beginning of something new. :D

Also, I love the title! ❤️ It sure is the beginning of a beginning. The beginning of a new journey; a new battle; new struggles; a new life; and a new story. And I would be waiting for all of it to unfold.

Do write more on Mauli, dearie. I would love to read more from you.

Love you my best girl! *squishy bear hugs & kisses* 🤗 🤗 ❤️

Ashi boo..

Awwiie.. *badiwaali jhappis* yaara.

well it was worth writing this story just to see your happiness.

i should thank you for always loving my works the way you do.🤗

waise i wrote this story for some other character before but somehow it became Mauli's story. (to think of it.. Angel was born for Dutta but Sanskaar owned him.)

loved the way you described Mauli and her emotions.

totally love 'Girl with fire in soul' phrase. So true.

gee... i am so glad you liked this stranger. *big smiles*.

it indeed is beginning of a beginning.

The beginning of a new journey; a new battle; new struggles; a new life; and a new story..

beautifully put Ashi.❤️

i will continue this story. me thinks i am in love with my own characters😆. that of mauli and our stranger.

so yes... will surely pen down the next chapter or should i say .. next milestone of Mauli's journey.

thank you so much Ashi.

love you more my girl.

Squishy hugs right back at ya🤗🤗🤗