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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hi friends! I am new to this forum. I really love the show. So here I am writing a short story. I hope you all like it. Please do comment.

Part 1

Radhika: lao Nandini pari ko hume dedo. Hum isse sula denge

Nandani: nhi maa aap janti hai pari mere bina nhi soyegi.

Radhika: par Nandini aaj tumhari aur kunal ki suhagraat hai.

Nandani: maa aap bhi janti hai ye shadi sirf pari k liye ki hai hum dono ne. laiye pari ko mein sula dungi (and she takes pari from her and heads towards her and kunal room.)

In the room

Kunal is standing near the window holding mauli's photo. Nandani entered the room and kunal try to hide the photo but nandani saw it. She put pari on the bed and come towards kunal.

Nandani: Kunal aapko humse kuch bhi chupane ki jarurat nhi hai hum jante hai ki aap aaj bhi mauli ko bhoth pyar karte ho. Who bhoth lucky thi jo usse aapke jitna pyar karne wala pati mila tha. Hum dono ne shadi pari ke liye ki hai and I promise ki mein humesha pari ka pura dhyan rakhungi

Kunal: nandani I am sorry mein shayad kabhi tumhe ek patni ke adhikar na de pau par tum humesha pari ki maa rahogi. Mein janta hu ki pari ko mauli ke baad koi ache se sambhal skta hai to wo sirf tum ho. Chalo raat bhoth ho gyi hai ab hume so jana chaiye.

Kunal and nandani lie on the bed with pari in between them. But sleep was far away from nandani eyes.

Flashback

Preparations were going on Mehra family because thakur family coming to see nandani for there son Rajdeep thakur. Mauli was in room with nandani and helping her to get ready.

Mauli: kya baat hai nandu... Kuch pareshan lag rhi ho

Nandani: nahi mauli bas thode se nervous hai...ki pata nhi wo ladka kaisa hoga

Mauli: mene tumhe pehle hi kaha tha ki aise arrange marriage ke liye haan mat bolo...aise kais eek baar milne pr kisi ke character ka pata lg skta hai...aur itni jldi kya hai shaid krne ki, pehle apni studies to complete kr leti.

Nandani: hum bhi apni padhai pura krna chahte hai...pr tum to janti ho na mama mamiji ko ye sab pasand nhi hai...unhone hume humare maa baba ki death ke baad apne sath rkha, itna to kr hi skte hai hum un k liye

Both the families fixed nandani and Rajdeep marriage While everyone was congratulating each other nandani's eyes were fixed on mauli. She felt something is wrong with her.

Later at night in nandani's room

Nandani: kya hua mauli...tum kuch pareshan lag rhi ho? Tum khush nhi ho kya is rishte is?

Mauli: nhi nandani aisa kuch bhi nhi hai...wo bs hume Rajdeep kuch theek nhi laga

Nandani: tumhe aisa kyu laga mauli...hume to wo bhoth ache lage, ho skta hai tumhe koi galatahmi ho gyi ho. Unse ache se milogi to wo tumhe bhi bhoth ache lgege

Mauli: haa tum sahi keh rhi ho

Soon wedding preparations started. During all this nandani and rajdeep come close to each other. Nandani felt that rajdeep is the perfect guy for her. With each day passing she fell more and more in love with him. But on the other side mauli was becoming more and more sure that Rajdeep is not the perfect guy. On the day of haldi when mauli goes to Rajdeep house he tries to misbehave with her and she slapped him.

Rajdeep: iss thapad ka badla hum tumahri best friend nandani se lenge

Hearing this mauli, ran from there to warn nandani. But on reaching nandani's house she got the biggest shock of her life. Rajdeep and his family were already there and nandani was on the floor crying

Mamiji: ab kya krne ayi ho tum yaha pr

Mauli: mamiji ye Rajdeep acha ldka nhi hai...iasne humare sath badtameezi krne ki koshish ki

mamiji: bas kro mauli hume sara sach pata chal gya hai ki Rajdeep ne nhi tumne uske sath badtameezi ki... sharam nhi aati tumhe apni hi dost ke hone wale pati pr tum dore daal rhi ho

mauli: nhi mamiji aisa nhi hai ye Rajdeep jhutha hai

mamaji: iss jaisi ldki se umeed bhi kya ki ja skti hai...padh likh kr aise hi to dimag kharab ho jata hai ladkiyo ka

mauli: nandu tum to hum pr bharosa kro...hum sach keh rhe hai ye Rajdeep acha ldka nhi hai

Rajdeep: bas kro mauli kyu humara rishta todne mein lgi ho...hum pyar krte hai nandani se tum samajh kyu nhi rhi ho.

Mauli: bas kro Rajdeep kitna niche giroge aur tum

Nandani: bas kijiye aap sab...mauli hume nhi pata kya sach hai aur kya jhooth pr hum apne hone wale pati ka hi sath denge...

And that was last time when mauli saw Nandini. Through some common friends she came to know about Nandini wedding and that she has shifted to Mumbai after her marriage. Soon mauli get admission in a medical college and there she met love of her life Kunal . Kunal was everything a girl can dream about her life partner. On the other hand nandani life was completely opposite of what she expect. Rajdeep was not the man she expect him to be. From past six years she is regretting that day when she choose Rajdeep over mauli. Rajdeep was a monster. He considered nandani as his slave rather than his wife. He used to beat her for small things and he even brings other girls home while nandani cries in the balcony.

But one day nandani got to know that she is pregnant. She was very happy that may be now Rajdeep will treat her properly as she is going to be the mother of his child. But when Rajdeep get to know about that he beat nandani very badly.

Flashback ends

Nandani woke up with heavy sweating. She tries to control her breathing. She tries to pick up the glass but it fell from her hands. Hearing the noise Kunal woke up

Kunal : Kya hua nandani...tum itni ghabrayi hui kyu ho

Nandani: kuch nhi kunal bas ek bura sapna dekh liya tha

Kunal: Bura sapna ya buri yaad... itne saal baad bhi us insan ka darr tumahre andar hai

Nandani: kuch yaado ko mita bhoth mushkil hota hai...hum chaha kr bhi unhe nhi mita skte

Kunal: mita skte hai nayi yaaado ke sath...nayi yaade banao nandani...pari ke sath, iss parivar ke sath...mere sath (hearing this Nandini look into his eyes and kunal felt that he saw something in her eyes)

Nandini: (breaking the eyelock) hume so jana chahiye

Kunal: haan

Kunal (in his thoughts): kash nandani tum uss insan ke khayal se bahar aa skti...bhoth dard diye hai usne tumhe...bhoth zulm sahe hai tumne uske...pr mein waada krta hu ki uss insan ko saza dilwa kr rhunga mein... tumne pari ke liye mujse shadi ki hai ab ye mera farz hai ki mein tumhe uss insan se azadi dilwau...aur yahi mauli bhi chahthi thi.




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Posted: 6 years ago
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The story is nice...waiting for next updates
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Lovely start
Kunan married
Seems like destiny brought them together
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Congrats on your story and I loved the start :)
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Posted: 6 years ago
#5
so here I liked that you used the past from show
is Mouli no more ????
now Kunan married and they have child
I would say it's Kunan child because Rajdeep don't deserve to be call as human forget about father
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice story
Continue sooon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Congrats on this story. Lovely start. What kunal planning to do
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will be waiting for next update
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Waiting for the update 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Syory was superb plz update soon...

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