ShauHir TS : Crashlanding On You Part 2 | Pg 4 15/04 ✔ - Page 2

I liked Ahir being frank with his feelings. In the show too he's open with his words compared to Anokhi & Shaurya. Him being a sweet friend to Anokhi was nice & I almost thought Shaurya was interested in Anokhi but then came the twist 😆

To hide his feelings, his defence mechanism is to be rude? LOL Only Mr. Sabherwal! 😎

Waiting for the next, good going!

I havent read this post but seeing this title on india forum I just couldnt stop myself for writing. I love KV so much as Shaurya. Its hard to even think like this more a moment or read about him being with a guy. lol. So no way I can read. I dont know people were seriously shippinh Shaurya and Ahir that u came up with this idea. For me its gross. Its fun as bromance and teasing . But actually writing something on it. Need guts. I see people wanted to read but I am uncomfortable even thinking about it . Sorry didnt mean to be rude or anything. Just was stating my opinion. I enjoyed aall fanfic on this forum but this one Couldnt dare to read.

Originally posted by: richi4sonu

I havent read this post but seeing this title on india forum I just couldnt stop myself for writing. I love KV so much as Shaurya. Its hard to even think like this more a moment or read about him being with a guy. lol. So no way I can read. I dont know people were seriously shippinh Shaurya and Ahir that u came up with this idea. For me its gross. Its fun as bromance and teasing . But actually writing something on it. Need guts. I see people wanted to read but I am uncomfortable even thinking about it . Sorry didnt mean to be rude or anything. Just was stating my opinion. I enjoyed aall fanfic on this forum but this one Couldnt dare to read.

hello, thanks for your views. It is okay to not like something. You might not like or approve. But I feel every author has a freedom to write what they want as long as it is not breaking the forum rules. LGBTQ+ is a subject which is now written worldwide and there is a huge fan base on them. I didn’t mind you calling my writing gross but what I mind is calling the idea gross. It’s was totally upto you whether you wanted to read or not. There is a disclaimer in the beginning of the story and also I wrote it because there were 15 people who wanted to read it.

For me its gross. You didnt do anything wrong. I was just surprised people were interested in this. I love your writing. I think you are same author who writing where Anokhi is pregnant with twins for Shaurya right.

Originally posted by: richi4sonu

For me its gross. You didnt do anything wrong. I was just surprised people were interested in this. I love your writing. I think you are same author who writing where Anokhi is pregnant with twins for Shaurya right.

There is absolutely nothing gross about gay relationships. I strongly beg to differ. It’s absolutely your choice whether you want to read it or not. No one is forcing you. But calling the subject gross or looking down upon others is not cool. And yes, I am the same author.

didnt mean to call u or writing gross dear. just for me its gross. I dream of both of those actor in my dream . Its hard to see them together. lol

No i am not looking down on gay or lesbian relationship. Infect my co worker at my job who is my buddy now is lesbian. I fully okay with it. I am just saying for the character Shaurya only.. Cant see him with other guy.. I am sorry . I shoild have kept my thought to myself if i didnt like it. I am sure others enjoyong it

Finally FF on ShauHir

Thank you so much Koeli for this🤗

It's indeed wonderful FF. I am always impressed with ACP he is straight forward he always knows what he wants in his life. He is never confused about his feelings. Here you have portrayed his thoughts so well.

About Shaurya he is still in dialema what is actually happens in his mind but yes I must say he also have some feelings towards our ACP😉

Btw I loved the concept that Shaurya and Anokhi both are childhood bestie❤️

I can imagine last part when ACP is staring the pic of him and Shaurya confront him.

Would love to read more from you🤗

Originally posted by: deepshiii

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Yay! We have the TS up already😍

Coming back in sometime to read it and add my review🙈💓

Edited👇🏻

Wow Koeli. This is superb. I love how you’ve built up the first part of the story to help the reader understand Ahir and Shaurya’s perspective and their view of each other and their relationship. I enjoyed reading it. Also, love how these two hide away their feelings for each other by clouding it through different emotions.

I’m glad you actually chose to wrote on a topic people otherwise still aren’t too openly accepting for.

Cant wait for the next part already😳

Do update soon🤗💓

I honestly wanted to keep it simple and as because this is one subject I was so conscious to pen down because how audience will take it. I will be keeping the scenes subtle and reader friendly. Thanks a lot of reading and encouraging. It means a lot.

Originally posted by: ..RiMi..

Wow this was so awesome!!! ❤️

It is a very sensitive topic and I loved how subtly you have handled the emotions. It was beautifully written! I loved the concept a lot !

Both their POVs were different but had the same emotions! Wow!

Continue soon! ❤️

#SauHir FTW 😎

thank you so much Rimi... coming from you means a lot. I hope I can justify the topic and add more emotions to the plot.