ShaKhi OS || The Luckiest Man - Page 4

Rimu🤗

Love you too much re❤️😳

This os is so good

So i finally thought of not shortening my comment🤣

I was so off today due to some health issues but your os made my day🤗

Watched today's episode and when shaurya mentioned of Holi celebrations, I simply thought there won't be any wonder if he end up in the hostel🤣...but both the BTS part and your os shocked me yaar😲😆

My most favourite part is shaurya's confusion in accepting his feelings and at the same time anokhi silently agreeing to whatever he is telling her knowing very well what his heart is echoing👏

I think something similar will also happen in the show....shaurya will surely refuse to confess his feelings since anokhi is his student....but I'm sure anokhi will understand his inner turmoil...I wish he gets atleast one true relationship in his life that is with her

No words about the remaining parts as you know what I mean☺️🤣

Waiting for more stories rimu

Oh my..

This was so beautifully written 👏👏

So mesmerizing ❤️

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Loved how shaurya confessed his love

And anokhi accepted it

Uffff rimi!!! This is amazing!!!! 🔥🔥🔥

Ohhh my heart is aching for shaurya 👍🏼

I can feel his yearning and it was beautiful even his denial sounded like a love confession he said he loves her in the purest way possible he told her how much he cares ..

Awww professor saheb ko i love you too mila jawab mein i hooe this comes true writers should definitely read this and take cues.

Seems like the events in this OS will turn out to be true..

I m so excited ❤️

Beautiful it was 😳

This was so beautiful Rimi. I loved it. Thanks for writing this. ❤️

Haye Rimi! This is so beautiful and so emotional. I have already read it multiple times

He was vulnerable and she was calm. All of Shaurya's angst came out through his monologue and if something like this happens in the show, KV would be sooo amazing in that scene. As much as I want him to be comfortable with his feelings and her to be a bit hesitant when he is making advances, this OS made me rethink it. If this is how good the confession would be, I don't care who confesses first

Please keep writing ❤️🤗

Waiting for your Holi OS☺️😉

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Nahi karega😎 but iska matalb yeh nahi ke main gussa nahi hoon.

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Chlo shuru se shuru krte hain...

Dekho shaurya ne kya hal bna diya hai... poor girl still thinking about him🥺 woh bhi about their fight. She knew very well about him that he cares for and wants to protect her but still kahin na kahin his behaviour confuse her...it's all because he never say anything openly...come on anokhi, usne kaha tha na, that har cheej ko bol ke btana jruri nahi🤪

You know abhi kal rat hi i read about him coming to her hostel room...and you did it😆 teri predictions always sahi hoti hai no doubt🤪

'May i come in?' huhh han han kyu nahi. Aap ka collage, hostal bhi aapka, hostal ke rooms bhi apke....aur....bandi bhi aapki☺️ toh ayie na kisne roka hai☺️

Ohhhj 'kisi ne dekh liya toh problem ho jayegi' toh phir 'Warden ko hire maine hi kiya hai' yeh kya hai🤪

Omg Rimudi it was awesome yar...each and every part you have written further is phenomenal👏 his every action, expressions, and his confusing dialogues... everything was👏

The way he bar bar saying 'I'm very.. confused you know.. iT can't be true right? That's not true and that's can't be possible, i mean....right?' i couldn't stop my chuckle while reading yar😆 kya admi hai yeh🤣 isko khud bhi idea nahi hai ke yeh confess kar raha hai🤪😆 but at the time, it was so cute man

The way he was speaking, and the way she was listening to him without uttering a word...mere andar ka writer chilla raha tha yeh seedha I love You hi bolegi and look exactly same happened.🤭

They way you described the scene, every single detail even a single pause in between the sentence..hatts off🤗every single detail was amazingly portrayed...

Anokhi knew what exactly was bothering him isiliye she didn't interrupted him and silently listened to him...and when she saw that his action is opposite to what he was saying or he is unable to put his words into the same way his action are screaming....she directly said what he wants to listen desperately or which soothe his heart and stopped the batelling of his heart and mind👍🏼

And the moment she uttered 'i love you too'....the relaxation was clearly evident😳

The kiss and her saying I love you too...it literally gave me goosebumps yar☺️

'Thank you making me the luckiest man' uffff janleva katilana...the whole Os was 🔥🔥

I toh personally lived it a lot...and I can state that this is one of mahhh fav of yours❣️❣️

Love you girl❣️

Originally posted by: SparklenShine

It is amazingly beautiful👏 I loved the way his words didn't match his actions. Acceptance with Rejection is cherry on top❤️

And thanks for giving it an open end, I can continue with my thoughts😳🤣

Thanks a lot for reading 🤗

I'm glad you liked it ❤️

Acceptance Rejection turmoil is always so hot to write 😆❤️

Yes yes.. aage ka u can continue in your head 😉🤪