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Posted: 4 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: rikara94

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Nahi karega😎 but iska matalb yeh nahi ke main gussa nahi hoon.

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Mai tujhe mana chuki hu 😎


Chlo shuru se shuru krte hain...

Dekho shaurya ne kya hal bna diya hai... poor girl still thinking about him🥺 woh bhi about their fight. She knew very well about him that he cares for and wants to protect her but still kahin na kahin his behaviour confuse her...it's all because he never say anything openly...come on anokhi, usne kaha tha na, that har cheej ko bol ke btana jruri nahi🤪

Yes Vahi problem hai.. shaurya ko har baat indirectly bolne ki habit hai🤣


You know abhi kal rat hi i read about him coming to her hostel room...and you did it😆 teri predictions always sahi hoti hai no doubt🤪


Arre when he offered her that room na.. i so knew ki ye banda jayega kisi din 🤣


'May i come in?' huhh han han kyu nahi. Aap ka collage, hostal bhi aapka, hostal ke rooms bhi apke....aur....bandi bhi aapki☺️ toh ayie na kisne roka hai☺️


Awwww shaurya ki bandi ☺️🤣


Ohhhj 'kisi ne dekh liya toh problem ho jayegi' toh phir 'Warden ko hire maine hi kiya hai' yeh kya hai🤪

Usne pehle vaala bahana diya so that jaldi se andar ghus jaaye 😉🤣


Omg Rimudi it was awesome yar...each and every part you have written further is phenomenal👏 his every action, expressions, and his confusing dialogues... everything was👏

Thank you 🤗❤️


The way he bar bar saying 'I'm very.. confused you know.. iT can't be true right? That's not true and that's can't be possible, i mean....right?' i couldn't stop my chuckle while reading yar😆 kya admi hai yeh🤣 isko khud bhi idea nahi hai ke yeh confess kar raha hai🤪😆 but at the time, it was so cute man

Yes he's so cute no... like a baby 😆


The way he was speaking, and the way she was listening to him without uttering a word...mere andar ka writer chilla raha tha yeh seedha I love You hi bolegi and look exactly same happened.🤭

Yes we think alike 😎


They way you described the scene, every single detail even a single pause in between the sentence..hatts off🤗every single detail was amazingly portrayed...

Thank you so much! Means a lot coming from you 😳


Anokhi knew what exactly was bothering him isiliye she didn't interrupted him and silently listened to him...and when she saw that his action is opposite to what he was saying or he is unable to put his words into the same way his action are screaming....she directly said what he wants to listen desperately or which soothe his heart and stopped the batelling of his heart and mind👍🏼

Waah kitna achha describe kiya hai tune love u for this!


And the moment she uttered 'i love you too'....the relaxation was clearly evident😳

Hai na? He must be so happy 😆


The kiss and her saying I love you too...it literally gave me goosebumps yar☺️

'Thank you making me the luckiest man' uffff janleva katilana...the whole Os was 🔥🔥

Thank you 🤗❤️

I toh personally lived it a lot...and I can state that this is one of mahhh fav of yours❣️❣️

Love you girl❣️

Love you too 😈🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: FortunaMajor

This is so beautiful Rimi! I loved it ❤️

Thanks a lot ❤️🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: Krazzy_Tintin11

Wow this was really amazing.

Loved it so much.

Thanks 😳❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#85

Argh! I’m so late .. but this was soo well written Rimi! Loved every bit of it! 😍🔥

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: rumi_dee

Argh! I’m so late .. but this was soo well written Rimi! Loved every bit of it! 😍🔥

Thanks a lot Rumi 🤗❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#87

Wonderfully penned. Loved it. 😍

Do write more please.

Love Preet ❤

Edited by rishbala3018 - 4 years ago

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