Thanks a lot.Originally posted by: deepshiii
Amazing chapters😳 Enjoying the way the story is unfolding..
Do continue soon❤️
I am glad you are loving it.
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Thanks a lot.Originally posted by: deepshiii
Amazing chapters😳 Enjoying the way the story is unfolding..
Do continue soon❤️
I am glad you are loving it.
Thank you for the two chapters. I loved them. I hope Anokhi reads the letter soon. Waiting for your next update. ♥️
Thanks a lot for loving the update.Originally posted by: Cherrydreamsxx
Thank you for the two chapters. I loved them. I hope Anokhi reads the letter soon. Waiting for your next update. ♥️
Yes hopefully she will get to read it.
Will update now.
Chap-5
'You have to heal me, you have to heal me...these were the only words ringing in my ears throughout our journey from hospital to the mansion. I don't know but my inner conscience was telling me that his words meant something different, something which was much more deeper than I had ever imagined or thought about. But exactly what that I just couldn't pin point as of now, but I will soon. And first of all I need to read that confidential letter as soon as possible. My gut feeling says it is going to change my life forever, I don't know its true or false but its just that a nagging feeling in my heart says something is going to happen. Oh! god...Anokhi don't think too much, I am really going to explode soon, Shaurya’s bipolar behaviour is taking a toll on me. Sometimes he is like sour and then the other times he is like a bittersweet candy floss. Help me god please to solve this mysterious puzzle called Shaurya Sabharwal.' And with these twirling thoughts my eyelids got really heavy and just like him , I too drifted into a long lost sleep.
'Thud' the sound made me groan. Okay where was I?
'Yup, the car , I was inside the car right with Shaurya of course, but now where I am?
'The touch of the soft fabric and the pillow below my head made me realise that I was in a room. Okay, but when and how?'
'Omggg , hawww it means ...'
'It means I carried you in my arms Anokhi, and now relax.'
‘Shaurya , is that you?'
'No, its Tom, Tom Cruise'
'I was just confirming, there is no need to make fun of me Mr.
Sabharwal .' she replied with a cute pout and I just wanted to kiss out the hell of life from it.
'But, Shaurya how did you carried me?'
'Anokhi, of course in my arms dear. Rest I have no idea of another method besides grabbing you like a sack of potatoes. ' a small smirk passed from my lips as I watched her cute blushing face making me proud, that the reason was one and only me, the Shaurya Sabharwal , oops I mean Anokhi’s Shaurya.
'Stupid, I didn't mean that, I wanted to know about your hand. How did you manage me with your injured hand?'
'Her expressions were curious yet a worry was also etched on it.'
'Nothing matters when it concerns you Anokhi and don't worry I have got my hand bandaged so relax.'
'I have come to take you for dinner as its night already.'
'Ok, but I need to freshen up Shaurya.'
'Ohhh, I forgot Anokhi , come let me show you the way.'
'No need Shaurya , I am very well capable myself. '
'I know Anokhi, you are more than capable and stronger than me, in fact any other woman I have met.'
'Ohhh, so I guess you have lots of experience with the female fraternity right Mr.Sabharwal ?'
Her tone held a tinge of jealousy and accusation and instead of hurting her, here I was justifying myself.
'Are you jealous my dear?'I asked her with a playful smirk.
'Ohhh please don't think so much high about yourself Mr. Sabharwal. Why would I be jealous?'
'Its just that I heard a tinge of jealousy in your tone. '
'Her expressions were to die for, she was pretty much jealous and she couldn't hide it at all. The beauty of my Anokhi was this that everything was clear cut visible in her face. She was as pure and crystal clear as a fresh morning dew.
'Don't take the benefit of your eyesight Mr.Sabharwal and stop staring at me like an owl.'
A playful reprimand escaped from her lips. Making me chuckle deeply as I made my way towards her slowly.
'I needed to touch her once.'
'I needed to believe that she was here with me in reality and not in several dreams which I had since I left her back. '
‘Shaurya , don't come close to me, and for godsake stop playing these kind of games with me.'
'Games, yay I remember we used to play so much Anokhi. '
'Shaurya , stay wherever you are'
Her tone this time made me freeze as I realised what I was planning to do. Only few mere inches apart from her lips. Her heavy erratic breathing, her perky peaks were clearly giving me the desired reaction I was having on her. She was affected by my proximity and my harden member was no less. I wanted to back out at that moment but the desire to touch her and feel her skin for once overpowered my already hazy senses. Her fresh floral fragrance was calling me , my beast to ravish her with my heart and soul. And I just did that only to be pushed harshly with her palms on my chest as I stumbled back.
'Don't you dare Shaurya ?' She glared at me still breathing heavily from our closed encounter.
'And that's it my anger took over my rational self as I once again hurt her.'
'Clutching her shoulders tightly, I pinned her to the wall.'
'And I knew I am going to regret but still I couldn't help the hurtful words that escaped from my lips. '
'Why? Why should I stop huh? Tell me Anokhi. What do you think of yourself a princess that some prince is going to come and sweep you off from your feet. That's never going to happen because you will only get this cursed beast and mind you Anokhi , its your destiny now, hell, heaven or earth nothing can change it. So be glad that this beast is showing enough interest in you, otherwise who in the...?'
'Just stop it Shaurya , I know no body in their right sense of mind frame would want to marry a blind , imperfect girl like me and there is no need to remind me about it. I already know it and who better than from the horses mouth, Mr. Shaurya Sabharwal , who claims himself as a beast. And yes you are a beast a truly , ugly beast who already rejected the beauty. I don't know you Mr. Sabharwal and now I really wish I had never known you. I just know my best friend Shaurya for whom inner beauty mattered the most. And the same for me. But I guess I am too innocent and fragile to know that this cruel world only worships the outer cruel personas like you filled with black void and hollow shell. Now get the hell out of my sight and don't talk to me ever. I hate you Mr. Sabharwal , I hate you. Let's keep it that way only from now on as I know you despise me and for that I too share the same emotion. Now leave.
'That did it omggg what did I do?'
'In my rage, I just broke her heart again . It was not planned. It just happened as I couldn't take her rejection. So I did the opposite. '
'And left the room with a bang.'
'Why? Shaurya why you always hurt me? Why you despise me so much and still why my heart loves you so much? I just can't take it anymore. Its hurting like hell. And this time I just couldn't stop my tears at all. What happened that brought us on the verge of resentment. Everything was going fine but then I don't know I just couldn't let him get closer to me , my emotions were overflowing at that moment when he was coming closer to me and I couldn't let him see how much his proximity was affecting my senses and the best thing I could do was to push him away and I did the same. He had already rejected me and now this. What was happening? I just couldn't pin point at his strange behaviour. And that just did it , the confusions of hazy cloudiness blocked my mind and I just said the hurtful words to him which I had never thought about. And now both of us were hurting. Why couldn't he understand this? Why god why? Why my Shaurya changed from a beautiful human being to this cold hearted beast? Why ? Why? Why?
And with that I cried my heart out.
A similar scenario was happening with Shaurya too, with a bit of difference instead he was hurting himself physically with his rigorous gym in sessions.
But the letter which was a path breaking change in their lives was still hidden and forgotten for a moment.
Chap-6
'Don't cry Anokhi, don't shed your precious tears for him, he is not worth it at all. All he does and has always been doing since you have met him is hurting you, but now enough is enough I won't let him hurt me more. I was drained emotionally and physically completely and so decided to finally freshen up and head for the dinner as my stomach was growling in hunger. Now I am not going to torture myself for the heartless man at all. He cares a damn for me and so do I am going to do from now on. His ruthless rejection had already broken me from inside enough, that a lifetime will also be not enough to heal my inner wounds. And now I am going to reject him ruthlessly, what does he think of himself huh? He is a perfect man and I am a helpless imperfect maiden in distress. That's never going to happen he is not a knight in shinning armour nor am I a damsel in distress. I am going to quietly perform my duty till maa gets fine and wakes up and then I am going to leave this place forever never to return back. I have understood finally that what I have to do further in my life and it would be for myself only. I am going to dedicate my entire life to god, I will give up worldly pleasures, the feeling of lust and love everything that binds me to this unworthy world and to that man I am going to give up. I will be transforming myself to a nun. And will be leaving this life forever with all the feelings and desires. The decision was made and I made my way to downstairs for the dinner, deciding from then on to start following the rules. So I skipped heavy dinner and rather got myself a very simple meal. The thought of dedicating my life and soul to God Almighty brought a sudden calmness in my heart. A new zest to get my maa fit and fine and then my life with my God was all I had and now there was no place of Shaurya Sabharwal in my life or any other for that matter nor that I had before. But my future was crystal clear in my mind. But first and foremost I have to find Shaurya , only to let him go forever from my life by forgiving him and asking for forgiveness in return as my heart won't be able to keep any grudges , while leaving my past life.'
'Wiping my lips I got up only to get halted in my tracks once agan with his deep voice, which held regret and pain this time.'
'I am sorry Anokhi, forgive me please...I was...'
'Before he could finish his sentence I made my way towards him sensing his smell and replied back in a surprisingly calm voice.'
'I forgive you Shaurya , and do forgive me too for my atrocious behaviour, it was really an unlady like act, I should have stopped.'
'No Anokhi, you have done nothing to ask for forgiveness, in fact its me. I am the one responsible for all that happened.'
'Shaurya now let bygones be bygones, I just wish until my stay here till maa gets well. I hope we can be cordial with each other. That's my only wish Shaurya , and I hope if you have ever considered me as your friend then you will abide by this and fulfil my only wish.'
'She smiled graciously yet I found her so much calmer than before. As if she had decided something really important. There was a kind of aloofness in her behaviour. That playful innocence was gone and I know damn right I was the reason for it. God! what had I done in my stupidity. I wanted my old Anokhi back and not this cold and aloof Anokhi with all the warmth gone from her face and presence. '
' Shaurya , I just had my dinner and now I am feeling really tired and sleepy, hope you don't mind if I retire for the night. Good night maan and sleep well.'
'With those last parting words she returned to her chamber.'
Leaving me baffled and completely heart broken. I desperately wanted to talk to her, tell her and beg for her forgiveness. In fact I don't know but I really wanted to tell her the truth. I wanted her with me forever when she said she will leave me I died then and there. I have to tell her the truth now, no I can't stay away from her. I wanted to destroy the letter deliberately because I wanted to hide the truth from her but I couldn't find the letter but now I want to tell her the truth myself now and I just hope she believes me.'
'Now I will do whatever it takes me to mend our relationship, now no more sacrifices or hurt and pain.'
'With that determination I smiled after a long time and had my dinner , from tomorrow both of us are going to have everything together, and that's a promise Anokhi from your Shaurya .'
'On the other hand, Anokhi finally slept peacefully after having her phone conversation with her landlady and conveying her decision of being a nun. She was a christian and she agreed to help her in this matter.'
'Once again both of them took another life changing drastic decisions, but this time it was the opposite. '
'Fate always plays an important role in our life and it was playing its part in the form of that letter, which was laying beside a small rose plant pot in the garden.'
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Awesome parts
Both got into fight nd this tym Anokhi rejected him ruthlessly
Anokhi decided to be nun😲Hope she gets to knw the truth before that
Cont soon
Okay
This is going amazing
Kudos to your work
Waiting for next update
Wow....... 🥰🥰🥰🥰Can't wait to see how shaurya trying mending their relationship😊🙃🙃
Awesome update🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰 and thank you for long 2 two updates