ShaKhi FF: Secrets of the Courtship *Chapter V pg 27* (7/5) - Page 19

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Posted: 4 years ago

Wowwww man, this is so good 👏👏Read it all in one go!

I haven't watched this show but this makes me want to do so. Definitely gonna give it a try 🤗

Posted: 4 years ago

So Sruthi it is? Scrolled to reach the chap & saw your name 😆

Entire chap was interesting, especially the fb & their words. Shaurya's gesture with which he gave flowers to Anokhi was so sweet 😊 The part I also went on to thinking was when Anokhi asked about Shaurya's past. She was clearly a novice teen when Shaurya started college 🤭 That age gap is cute nevertheless, even in the show

But I had this question & wanted to pen it down. Its not about Anokhi holding grudges (she's not a/c to the story), clinging to their bitter past or anything. Its clearly Shaurya who needs to move on, the one who is having questions, hard time dealing with Anokhi's comeback, isn't it. Handing flowers to her face & keeping the everlasting plant inside her office told me that story. However the plot is turning fresh with every chap

Waiting to read more.. 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago

They r so rough with each other at present. 😭 Their past scenes were so cute n funny. 😆 Cactus, ouch!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: infinitie

I'm glad that you enjoyed it!! Shakhi's tashan in this is definitely very heated given their bitter past!! But after some ups and downs, I'm sure they'll find their way to each other Thank you so much Aheli (can I call you that or is there something else you go by??)

Yes can't wait! 😍 Yeah sure u can call me Aheli coz that's my name. 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago

I took my own sweet time to reply to you this time around. But I just had to sit with the update for sometime before writing back to you.


First, let me tell you girl, out of all the FFs out there yours is my absolute favourite. That's got a lot to do with your writing. I love how you write. Be it the language or the way you describe Anokhi or Shaurya's mindset I just love it. 💕


This was a very balanced and if I might say so a happening update. We got another glimpse into their past. I love how you contrast the innocence of the past with the bitterness of today. Shaurya's brooding anger and Anokhi's headstrong attitude - I can sense how masterfully you are crafting the story. Can't wait to read more. So I am toh loving the slow burn nature of the story.


Keep writing 🌼💕


PS: My name is Abhinaya 🌼

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Posted: 4 years ago

Damn you need to write the break up part fast because this anticipation is killing me 😆 just kidding, the pace is amazing. Update soon!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Hey Shruti🙋‍♀️

Sorry I'm late again


Another wonderful, insightful chapter👏

These 2 are so heartbreakingly beautiful and it's all thanks to your brilliant writing..❤️

I loved how both, separately, put their grievances aside for the betterment of their work.👍🏼

It's nuances like these that I enjoy amidst all the chaos👌


Hope u keeping well🥰

Take care

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: infinitie

Thank you so much Anamika (or is there something else you go by??)!! Shaurya and Anokhi have always been headstrong but with their heartbreak added to the equation, they are naturally even more guarded and stubborn. They both are trying to prove that they don't care while forcing the other one to drop their mask first. In the end, they will have to both lower their masks to actually talk through whatever happened in the past. Thank you for loving the long updates since I tend to write a lot! I hope you enjoy the next chapters as well 🤗🤗


You can call me Anamika. Its not my name but, I like the name a lot ❤️

Also, I am real bad with responses, you may have figured it by now 😔 But irrespective of it, know that I am reading your updates asap and loving them and at some point, I will defo respond.


I love the characters in your story for that specific reason. They have had life experience so far and are equals. Show's Shakhi are still naive, both on different aspects. So I think that brings out a different spark in this story.

Loved the last update! I told you, I loved the way they remember tiny details about each other. The cactus ❤️ Both of their egos and self-respect are high up there over their heads. But also very very glad that they are trying to be professional than bringing the personal issues in between them. That is the way they will maintain their respect for each other. I am loving the flashbacks; very eager to learn what happened in the past. Waiting to see how they let go of their masks and pain.

Keep going 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

The flashback was soo cute ❤️ These two are adorable

I loved it shrutii and can't wait to know what actually happened in the past, really liked the cactus scene 👏

Please update soon .🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Plz upload next part soon please plz plz Plz update soon..Waiting...

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