ShaKhi FF: Secrets of the Courtship *Chapter V pg 27* (7/5) - Page 18

Shrutiiiii🤗

This was absolutely phenomenal! I love how both of then have this raw pettiness and at the same are able to hold back their emotions.

Although I am waiting for the moment when they will let it go. Can I expect fireworks?!

I am here for the angst and subtlety at the same time.

Keep writing.

You are absolutely brilliant Shrut !❤️

Sruthi!!

This was just amazing! Made my day

I'm getting desperate to know what went wrong when they are still so much in love with each other🥺

update soon coz I'm impatient here🤪

The flashback is the highlight of the chapter for me.

I like how they wonderfully move the story forward. Both of them haven't forgotten their past. They are petty but at the end, they are able to put it aside and be fair.

I absolutely love how you write and its only been 4 chapters but the characters seem so real and fleshed out already. Loved this!

First of all a big thanks for this update. I badly wanted a doze of ShaKhi. Weekends are blunt otherwise.

At every chapter, I'm falling hard for this story.🤗

This slow burn of ShaKhi is really captivating. The way you bring ShaKhi to life is amazing. Portrayal of emotions, word choices in dialogues, setting of scenes..... a big clap to that. 👏👏

The flash back scenes were bliss. The comfort they shared with each other ❤️.

Snapping to the present, their current equation is getting more complicated. 😔 I've no idea for whom should I feel pity. Both Shaurya and Anokhi have their own share of grievances.

I'm looking forward to know what really went wrong between them. And this chapter was quite intriguing.

Waiting for the next chapter. Do update soon dear.

Ahh you updated!!! Yes! I read it twice 🤗 This made my Sunday! It was so so good! Even after so many years they long to be with each other but cannot get over the past! Their pettiness on who has a bigger ego and angst is so visible. Are both of them going to break and say something to each other! Ohh I cannot wait.

Waiting with baited breadth for the next one. Hope your thinking about writing the next one because I sure as heck am! Lots of love ❤️

Just found this and omg I love it so much!!!!!! Thank you so much for the update

Originally posted by: infinitie

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A/N: I'm back with another story because I just can't keep myself away from ShaKhi. I tend to ramble so I apologize in advance if the chapters get long 😂 This one is going to be a bit of a rollercoaster but I hope you enjoyed the first installment! Do let me know what you think ❤️❤️

Loved your story. I can really see your Anokhi in about five year's time...seasoned and successful, having made a name for herself in the profession. Can't wait to see the reason for their falling out.

The flashbacks are delicious!❤️And don't ever apologize for long chapters....the longer the better😊You write so well! Thank you!

I loved it Sruthi. Their flashback was so cute. Waiting for your next update. Do continue soon ♥️

Sruthi🤗

This was yet another beautiful update.
I love this story a lot. The pace and the build up keeps me hooked and makes me yearn for more.

The flashback banter was really cute and funny. The cactus point forced me to think actually and agree with Anokhi😆 Flowers wither with time but a cactus doesn’t. I felt this had something to do with relationships in general. Not too sure if you wanted to indicate the same but I thought so while reading. Do correct me if I’m wrong here🙈

Also, I appreciate how these two are reflecting and correcting their behaviour and trying to build a good working relationship, keeping the bitterness aside.

Shaurya gave her a cactus😲 I mean he’s still not over her no matter how much he tries to show and conceal his feelings. He still loves and cares for her and so does Anokhi. Poor babies🥺

I cannot wait to read what happens next..!😋

Do continue soon💗

Loads of love🥰❤️

Such beautiful update shruti 👍🏼❤️

Those flashback scenes were so cute 😳😛

Just loved it 😍😍

Your story is very interesting and love the way you write and eagerly waiting for next part 😍❤