ANURAJ FF-bas teraa sath ho...chahe jo baat ho.. (updated chp 5A pg22) - Page 7

Originally posted by: R95510

hi iqrak, just read your ff. dont know how i missed it. iqrak ,lovely chapter 1. the sister bonding was super, iqra tumne bhi anu ko mahaan bana diya. please iqra , rajat ko anu se bhi zyada mahaan banao yaar. iqra where is rajat sareen!!!! loved your writing iqrak. awaiting chapter 2

Originally posted by: IluvHarshad

Loved the first chapter Iqru 😃
Awesome 😛

Originally posted by: iqrak

awww meri superstar⭐️ ko acha laga😳 thank u so much

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Originally posted by: Waida1234

Hey...iqrak...! Mashallah...what a lovely update...! For your first try...I must say you've penned down all the characters beautifully...and you've introduced everyone accordingly...!👏

Loved the first altercation of Neil Sareen with the Shastri Sisters...specially with Devyani and Anamika, the damakedaar twins...! They are like lightning and thunder...who will end up being similar to a sonic boom in Neil life...! Devyani will be a real headache for Neil...being very smart, she will easily overshadow, and easily trick him for her own convenience and benefits...!😆

Awww...Anushka Shastri is so sweet and sensible...always ready to help others...but, can also become very strict, demanding and authoritarian...when required...! Waiting...waiting...for Rajat Sareen entry...!😉

Like in all the other stories of the other members FF/OS...I'm loving this jolly and merry type Sareen Uncle...! His dialogues are hilarious...and you wrote them in your own unique style...!😆

As far as Minty Sareen is concerned...I can't say much on her...! I don't know how you will shape up her character...! Whether she will be positive or negative...! Will wait for your next update...before coming to any conclusion...!😊

All in one...it's an enjoyable and humorous update...! Enjoyed reading it...! Thanks for using very simple hindi words...which made it possible for me to comprehend the story...! Keep up the good work and continue to update...! Hats off to you for this first try...! Love you...!👍🏼 🤗

Originally posted by: mustafa786

nice work iqrak. Introduction of new character Anamika is amazing 👍🏼

CHAPTER 2

AT SAREEN HOUSE

MORNING 9AM

Anu - jaldi utho dev 9bajh gae utho jaldi nashta bhi tayar ho gaya ab to utho

Anamika - abhi tak ye ladki uthi nahi ruk jao anu ye tumse uthne wali nahi h hum isse apne tarike se uthate h

Anu - tum kya karne wali ho

Anamika - dekhte jao...

Jake thada pani ki bottle lati h aur dev ke face pe sara pani gira deti h

Anu - anamika ... asa koi karta h kya ?

Dev- ah ah aha ye kya kiya tumne hum itna acha sapna dekh rahe the ab hum tumhe chodege nahi

They both start running in the room

Dev - ajj to tum gai bhot din se soch rahe the tumhe maarne ki ...

Anamika - anu plz bachalo

Anu - iss baar hum tumhe nhi bachaege iss baar hum dev ke side h

Anamika - hay ye sune se pehele me mar kyu nahi gai , anu tumne hame dhokha dediya , tumhe to hum baad me dekhege

Anu - notanki ladki

Dev start running behind Anamika , anamika ran and went to the hall

Anamika - papa...

She went and hide behind shastri ji

Anamika - papa hume plz bachalo dev hume ajj chodigi nahi

Shastri ji -acha theek h pehele batao to tumne kya kiya h

Dev - hum batate h papa

And dev say every thing

Dev - ab hum isse chodege nahi

Shastri ji - rukh jao dev jaane do iss baar hamare bolne pe maaf kardo agli baar mat maaf karna

Dev - papa ... ajj maaf karde rahe h lakin agli baar ki to hum tumhari jaan lelege

Anamika hugs shastri ji - thank u papa

Shastri ji- acha chalo hum office ke liye nikal rahe h , tum log apna dhayan rakna theek h

They all hug shastri ji , shastri ji leaves

Anu - chalo jao tum dono jaldi taiyar hoke jab tak hum nashta lagate h theek h

Anamika - theek h hamari amma , chalo dev

Anamika and dev both put hand on eachother shoulder

Anamik - sorry ha pani dalne ke liye aur hume ye batao kya sapna dekh rahi thi

Karol bagh market 10am

old aunty fall down one man came and help him it was none other than our hero RAJAT SAREEN

RAJAT SAREEN HERO IN BROWN SHIRT WEARING SUN GLASSES SMART , HANDSOME , DASHING LAJPAT NAGAR KI SARI LADKIYA MAR RAHI H

Rajat - uthiye aunty ap theek to h na ?? me ap ki kis tarha help kar sakta hu batao ???

Old aunty - beta me theek hu, agar ho sake to bus tum mujhe roadcross kardo tumhari meherbani hogi beta

Rajat - are aunty ap ne mujhe beta kaha to me ap ka beta jesa hua isme kya meherbani ye to ek bete ka farz hota h chaliye aunty me ap ko road cross karadeta hu

Rajat aunty ko road karata h

Old aunty - bhot bhot shukriya beta tum nahi hote to pata nahi me road kese cross karti

Rajat - plz shukriya mat boliye , aur koi kaam h to boliye me kar deta hu , ap ko apke ghar chod du ?

Old aunty - nahi beta aur koi kaam nahi h me chale jaugi, bhagwan asa beta har maa baap ko de tumhari sari pareshaniya durho jae

Then rajat was passing through the market

One vendor - are rajat beta tum , itne dino baad kese , sab theek h na ???

Rajat - ha bhai sab theek h , kuch kaam se aya tha baad me milte h

Ramesh ke gupshup bhot din se nahi khaya ajj man kiya isliye aya

Then rajat goes to Ramesh pani puri ke stall pe

Ramesh - are bhai app itne dino baad aiye, bethiye

Rajat - ha tere hath ka pani puri khae bhot din hogae socha aaj kha lu ek plate thikha banana

Ramesh - theek h bhai

Girl1 - bhaiya mujhe bhi thikha dena

Goes and sit close to rajat and see rajat and give him a smile

Rajat also give her a fake smile and stood up

Girl 1 - kya hua kyu uth gae bhetho na

Rajat - nahi me khada hi theek hu

Girl 2- mujhe bhi thikha dena bhaiya , u know rajat I love thikha and I also love u , ajj me tumko kesi lag rahi hu rajat

Rajat pov kaha aake fhas gaya

Girl 2 - bataona rajat

Rajat- achi lagrahi ho

Rajat pov - bhagwan mujhe bacha le

Girl 1 - kal tum free ho coffee pe chalet h

Rajat - are mujhe abhi ek kaam yaad agaya baad me batata hu

Girl 1 -batana jarur

Ramesh - are bhai pani puri pura plate to khale

Rajat - baad me aake khauga

Rajat ran from there

sorry rajat ki entry itni achi nahi rahi , thoda mistake hogaya 😆tha isliye lakin pakka next chp bhot acha hoga sorry