Hey...iqrak...! Mashallah...what a lovely update...! For your first try...I must say you've penned down all the characters beautifully...and you've introduced everyone accordingly...!👏
Loved the first altercation of Neil Sareen with the Shastri Sisters...specially with Devyani and Anamika, the damakedaar twins...! They are like lightning and thunder...who will end up being similar to a sonic boom in Neil life...! Devyani will be a real headache for Neil...being very smart, she will easily overshadow, and easily trick him for her own convenience and benefits...!😆
Awww...Anushka Shastri is so sweet and sensible...always ready to help others...but, can also become very strict, demanding and authoritarian...when required...! Waiting...waiting...for Rajat Sareen entry...!😉
Like in all the other stories of the other members FF/OS...I'm loving this jolly and merry type Sareen Uncle...! His dialogues are hilarious...and you wrote them in your own unique style...!😆
As far as Minty Sareen is concerned...I can't say much on her...! I don't know how you will shape up her character...! Whether she will be positive or negative...! Will wait for your next update...before coming to any conclusion...!😊
All in one...it's an enjoyable and humorous update...! Enjoyed reading it...! Thanks for using very simple hindi words...which made it possible for me to comprehend the story...! Keep up the good work and continue to update...! Hats off to you for this first try...! Love you...!👍🏼 🤗
Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 2
