ANURAJ FF-bas teraa sath ho...chahe jo baat ho.. (updated chp 5A pg22) - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats iqrak..gr8 u have started writing.yesterday u were asking me whether I am writing a ff or not and today I got this big surprise...really excited n looking forward to ur updates...the prologue increases the curiosity...very interesting character sketch.update soon dear..😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: xtrysia

Congrats iqrak..gr8 u have started writing.yesterday u were asking me whether I am writing a ff or not and today I got this big surprise...really excited n looking forward to ur updates...the prologue increases the curiosity...very interesting character sketch.update soon dear..😊

thank u so much
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Posted: 10 years ago
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omg iqrak...dis is a big suprise...i m so happy..all the best dr...will be waiting for the future updates
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ashakalyani

omg iqrak...dis is a big suprise...i m so happy..all the best dr...will be waiting for the future updates

thank u so much i will try to update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi...iqrak...! First of all welcome to the Writers Club...! Nice beginning...the prologue is beautiful...! I will be happy to read yet, another Anuraj love story...in your own unique style...! All the best for this new adventure of yours...! Update soon...and, I'll be always here to encourage you...! Love you...! 👏🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Waida1234

Hi...iqrak...! First of all welcome to the Writers Club...! Nice beginning...the prologue is beautiful...! I will be happy to read yet, another Anuraj love story...in your own unique style...! All the best for this new adventure of yours...! Update soon...and, I'll be always here to encourage you...! Love you...! 👏🤗

awww thank u i hope tumkomere style me anuraj ki story ache lage 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oye hoye Iqru,meri superstar ⭐️
Chha gaye tussi 😃

Continue soon 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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CHAPTER 1

AT SAREEN PLACE

TING TONG

Continuously ringing the bell

Dev - koi ghar me h ki bhi nahi ??

Anu - Bas karo kitne baar bell bajaogi tum dono

Neil - kon h??? ruko khol raha hu

(neil opens the door)

Dev - hello mr ,ghar me the to door jaldi kyu nahi khola?? hum kab se bell baja rahe the

Neil -tum log me patient naam ki cheez nahi h kya??? Kon ho tum log ?? yaha kyu aae ho?

Anamika - hum log chor h tumhare ghar chori karne aae h , itna sara samaan h suitcases h to guest hi hoge na

Neil - oh, to tum log chor ho ,mujhe pehele hi pehchan lena chahiye tha kyuki shakal se bhi tumlog chor aur jhagdalu hi dekhte ho

Dev - tumhari himmat kesi hui hamare face pe jane ki

Anamika - hum log na nokaro se baat nahi karte to apni malkin minty aunty ko jake bulao

Neil - oh, to me tum log ko nokar dekhta hu , for ur kind information me iss ghar ka beta hu NEIL SAREEN naam to suna hi hoga ??

Anamika - ha naam to suna h hamare Kanpur me neil ek bandar ka naam h kahi tum wahi Bandar to nahi

Dev - shakal se to wahi Bandar dekh raha h😆

Neil -tumhari hemmat kese hui mujhe Bandar bulne ki

Anamika - jese tumhari hemmat hui hamare behen ke shakal pe jane ki

Anu - bus karo tum log bhot hogaya , Namaste hum anu h minty aunty ko plz bula dege kya

Dev - anu Bandar ko plz nahi bolte ...hehehe

Anu - ekdum chup agar kuch aur bola to hum...

Sareen - are beta abhi tak ghar me nahi gae hum log apna kaam bhi kar ke aagae, mujhe laga abhi tak to tum log chai nashta kar rahe hoge

Anamika - nahi uncle neil hum log ko ghar me nahi le raha bol raha h ki mera ghar h me tum log ko nahi lunga

Dev - ha uncle kabse hum log dhup me khade h andar hi nahi le raha

Neil pov - kitni jhuti h ye behene

Anu- nahi vo...

Anamika pressed anu hand and told chup plz😉

Sareen - mauji ye tere ghar mera ghar kya lagaya h, ghar me guest aae h aur tune inhe ...😡

Neil - nahi dad ye log ...

Shastri ji - jane do sareen ho jata h

Sareen - chalo andar chalo sare

Anu, shastri ji ans sareen went inside

Neil - ye beheno ko to me ...😡

Dev - kuch bola tumne ?

Neil giving fake smile- nahi miss jhagdalu

Anamika - aur kuch bolna bhi mat, nahi to hum kya kar sakte h tumhe pata bhi nahi

Neil - tum behene mera kuch nahi biggad sakti ,hum logo ko to me me dekh luga

Dev - vo to dekh lege kon kya kar sakta h

Anamika and dev also went inside

Anu - tum dono ne bichare ko bhot pareshan kiya aur uncle ji se jhut bhi bola

Dev - usne bhi to hame pareshan kiya , dhup me hum log khade the hame ghar me bhi nahi bulaya

Anu - tum dono ka kuch nahi ho sakta ,tum log ki khabar hum baat me lete h

Return from the market with lots of carry bag

Sareen - kaha thi tu tere ghar me guest the aur tu ghar me hi nahi

Minty - me samaan lene gai thi khana banana ke liye kuch samman nahi the

Anu - Namaste aunty ji

Dev and anamika - hello aunty

Shastri - Namaste bhabhi ji

Minty - Namaste , hello beta tum log ache se to aae na koi pareshani to nahi hui na

Shastri ji - nahi bhabhi ji hum sare ache se aae koi pareshani nahi hui

Sareen - are jaldi ja khana bana saro ko bhuk lagi hogi , sare thak gae hoge

Minty - ja rahi hu batane ki jarurat nahi mujhe bhi pata h

Anu - chaliye aunty hum aapki madat kar dete h

Minty - ha tum teeno help karoge to jaldi khana ban jaega

Four of them went to kitchen and started cooking

Minty - me bahar chai deke aati hu

As minty went

Anamika with knife in her hand - anu tumhe mahan bane ki kya jarurat thi tumhare wajhe se hame bhi kaam karna bad raha h 😡

Anu - vo itne sare logo ka khana akele kese banti isliye hum ne socha unki madat kardeti h 😊

Dev - anu tum mahan ho tumhe kaam karna pasand h lakin hum dono ko nahi plz next time se ase mahan kaam mat karna😭

They all had lunch after lunch they all start shifting things in the house

Dev - ufff hum bhot thak gae h ()

Anu - chalo dev thoda hi kaam bacha h jaldi se hum dono khatam kardete h

Dev - tum sirf hame kaam bolo anamika ko kitna acha h veer se phone pe baat kar me busy h koi use kuch bol bhi nahi raha

Anu - ajj use baat kar lene do miss kar rahi hogi veer ko , chalo jaldi jaldi sara kaam kar lete h 😊

After 10mins

Dev - finaly sare ghar set ho gaya hum delhi aahi gae aaj ka din khatam hogaya kal se naya din nai shuruat hope yaha hame hamara rajkumar miljae, hum kitne khush h delhi aake😊

Anu - apne sapno ki duniya se niklo aur niche chalo dinner karne

Anamika - are wah tum log sara ghar set bhi kar liye , aur mujhe bulaya bhi nahi😉

Dev - ha tum to busy thi veer ke sath to isliye disturb nahi kiya miss kar rhi ho na veer ko

Anamika - miss to bhot kar rahe h 😭

Anu - acha ji koi kisi ko miss kar raha h😳 , use delhi ane ki khushi nahi h kya

Anamika- khushi to bhot h kal se ek nai shuruat

Anu- hame daar lag raha h hum log nae seher aae h kese yaha adjust karaege

Dev - tension mat lo anu sab pehele jesa ho jaega , hum log yaha adjust ho jaege ek

anamika - chalo jaldi ab niche chalet h nahi to minty aunty chilane lagegi😆

and they all went down for dinner

After dinner in their room

Dev - ek hug to banta h hum beheno ka🤗

They all hug each other and went to sleep


hope tum log ko acha lage😳 finger crossed
Edited by iqrak - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Hey iqrak..read ur first chapter n must say a nice start..Dev teasing Neil is always a fun n really liked d good n sweet anu..liked the bonding the sisters have...I hope Rajat jaldi aa Jaye so that anuraj ki story start ho Jaye..BTW very nice update n keep updating...😊😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: xtrysia

Hey iqrak..read ur first chapter n must say a nice start..Dev teasing Neil is always a fun n really liked d good n sweet anu..liked the bonding the sisters have...I hope Rajat jaldi aa Jaye so that anuraj ki story start ho Jaye..BTW very nice update n keep updating...😊😊😊

thank u so much dont worry next chp rajat ki entry h and keep reading

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