KYA YEH SACH ME PYAAR HAI? A NEW AnuRaj FF!!!=p

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Fahmiii93

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Posted: 10 years ago

HI GUYS I AM BACK...SO HERE IS THE FF...I WILL START WITH THE CHARACTER SKETCH AND IF YOU LIKE IT THEN COMMENT THEN I WILL CONTINUE WITH CHAPTER 1...

YOU ARE MORE THEN WELCOME TO THROW RIPPED SANDALS OR RAW TOMATOES IF YOU DONT LIKE IT...OR THINK THERE SHOULD BE SOME ADJUSTMENT DOENE...SO HERE IT GOES...

CHARACTER SKETCH:

RAJAT SAREEN: A very honest and down to Earth man, but when he gets angry no one wants to mess with him. He likes it when girls are dying for him. A squadron leader but also a lover...ANUSHKA'S LOVER...

NEIL SAREEN: A more like fun boy in college and a mummy boy at home...he is his mum's favourite even though he only has 1 brother. At first, everyone thought that he would be a poison in the community but after falling for Devyanie he changes...ANOTHER LOVER...

MINTY SAREEN: Here comes the mum of the Saree house. She is really possessive about her two sons and will do anything to make sure that the Shastri sisters are not happy but inside she has the softest heart ever.

SAREEN SAB: He is the coolest dad ever, he loves his sons. He always stands by the truth. He sees the Shastri sisters as his daughters and currently he os quit tensed about his little son, Neil...

SHASTRI JI: The dad that taught his daughters everything from right to wrong, how to walk and how to hold a spoon, how to talk and how to show respect to elders even if you don't know them in person. He is the bets friend of his daughters. He is the ideal dad...but can get angry from time to time.

ALKA SHASTRI: Probably not so modern, she prefers to stay home and talk care of her dad and her 3 little sisters. She is the eldest Shastri sister. And she dreams that her husband will be a nice, sweet and loving one,

ANUSHKA SHASTRI: Not the typical girl, well she can considered one because she loves her family more than anything in the world. She can become a teacher when her sisters are naughty, a mother when they are in pain, a friend when they need to talk and a grand mother for her dad, she is the 2nd eldest daughter of the Shastri household.

DEVYANI SHASTRI: A care free girl, she thinks she the world's most beautiful girl and that every boy are mad about her. She loves her sisters, she is outgoing and fun.

PEEYA SHASTRI: She is the fourth and the last sister. She is treated as a small kid by her family though she is grown up.She is the quietest among the sisters. She loves reading and is the most studious one.

BUT WHAT HAPPENS WHEN 2 SISTERS FALL FOR THE SAME MAN? WHAT HAPPENS WHEN SOMEONE IS ON THE VERGE OF LOOSING THEIR LOVE OF THEIR LIFE? WHAT HAPPENS WHEN THE HEAD OF THE FAMILY PASSES AWAY FROM HEART ATTACK? WHAT HAPPENS WHEN EVERYTHING IS FINALLY SETTLED BUT A BLACK WIND COMES AND DESTROYS EVERYTHING?

MORE CHARACTERS WILL BE ADDED AS THE STORY CARRIES ON...SO THIS IS THE BEGINNING...SO GUYS PLZ GIVE ME FEED BACK SO I CAN WRITE MORE OR IMPROVE IT...THANKS BYE!=P

Edited by zaya93200 - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Fahmiii93

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Posted: 10 years ago

CHAPTER 1:

Hi guys i am back with Chapter 1 of this FF...so guys enjoy it and plz comment, i would love to read all those feedback...thanks...=p

Life is not as easy as it sounds. ESPECIALLY IN DEHLI! Everyone was busy with their own little jobs, mums are cooking, doing their everyday chores, dad's are either chatting with their friends or at office boiling their heads with unanswered questions, children in school and teenagers in college either having fun with friends or listening really carefully to the teachers giving long lectures about the countries goods and bads.

But college St. Xaviers, everyone well actually most students were joining the NCC just to be with the most eligible bachelor of the town. Every girl would do everything to be with him, even commit crime. He was the most eligible bachelor, after all he had the most educated job, A SQUADRON LEADER, he was tall and fit so basically handsome and he had that deadly look...that everyone craved for, he was non-other than RAJAT SAREEN!!!

After a long day of job, where more than 100 girls were screaming in his ears " Sir me ", "No Sir me"!!!

He had enough, he wanted a hot shower where he can forget all his worries. But little did he know that his worries were about to increase once he reached his house.

IN THE HOUSE:

Sareen Sab: Oye, Minty Darling...Sab kuch taiyar hai na? Woh log pochti hungi?

Minty: Ha. ha baba, sab kuch thik hai...woh Shastri Sisters toh ab mere demag khalegi!!

And the chit-chat continued between the two parents, which made a tired Rajat even more confused and tired.

Rajat: (in his mind) Shastri sisters? they are coming? but who are they? Oh well, i don't care...as long as my room is mine...

Just then a car engine stopped right outside the Sareen House. The Shastri's finally arrived in Dehli. They were mesmerised not by the beauty of it because everyone knows that Kanpur is way more prettier than Dehli but by the business of the city.

They were excited but also pretty scared.

Devyani: Didi...wow...it's so good, there is so many people but why are all those people staring at us? Did we do anything wrong?

Alka: No, i think we are new that's why...anyway...

Minty: Hay mere puttar...how are you? come and give a hug to me...

Anushka: Namastey aunty ji, how are you? Namastey uncle ji

Sareen sab: Namastey beta, we are good...come inside...AAARRREEEYYY...Shastri ji, how are you? Long time no see...huh?

Shastri Ji: Namastey Ji, how are you...

Everyone got into the house. Everyone was happy with the new guest's arrival but what will happen when 2 souls will meet from 2 poles? what will happen when 2 heart will want to speak out but cant?

KEEP READING TO KNOW THE REST!!!!=P

Edited by zaya93200 - 10 years ago

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shrividhya

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Posted: 10 years ago

Nice update!!! Hope u keep updating frequently!

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manishasatpathy

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Posted: 10 years ago

amazing story plzz keep updating loved it 😊

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Poorva Chakraborty

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Posted: 10 years ago

good beginning, i m looking forward to your story!😊

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Fahmiii93

@Fahmiii93

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Posted: 10 years ago

CHAPTER 2:

Hi guys i am back with Chapter 2 of this FF...enjoy and comment and yes if u liked it hit the LIKE button!!!=p

Everyone got into the house. Everyone was happy with the new guest's arrival but Minty Sareen, she never liked them, she always had that one thought about them, that these girls will take her sons away from her.

While everyone was busy chatting with the new guests, Rajat was busy thinking whether he should go out to greet them or just stay inside. And guess that he did, he stayed inside.

Back in the sitting room, Anushka was getting restless, she was getting bored. She knew that he would not be alright to just walk around the house without anyone's permission, she had to do that, she was getting bored.

Anushka: Aunty, can you tell me where the washroom is please?

Minty: Sure beta, just go to the right of the kitchen, it'll be there.

Anushka: Thank you aunty.

Anushka didn't wait for a second. She didn't want to go to the washroom, that was just an excuse to see the house.

She reached the bedroom area and what she saw was awful, a very messy bedroom, with cloths, shoes and items all over the place and another bedroom where everything was placed in there place, all tidy and cleared. She didn't know what to do so she just decided to go. In the mean time, Rajat came out of his bedroom, hearing the noise of the shoes he thought that there might be someone there but no, no one was there.

THEY DIDN'T SEE EACH OTHER ONCE AGAIN!

After a walk around the house, Anushka went back to her dad, where all her sisters were.

Shastri Ji: Anushka, tum agaya? Toh Phire chalo, ghar chalo!

Anushka: Ji papa

Alka: Papa, I am talking the luggages upstairs

Peeya: Papa, i am also going with didi...

Alka: Peeya, i asked you not to call me didi!

Peeya: Ok sorry...let's go

Anushka: Papa, i am going to upstairs...

Devyani: Yeah, papa me too, see if we can clean up a bit...

Sareen Sab: Anushka beta, i'll send Rajat upstairs he'll come to help OK..

Anushka: Ji uncle ji.

With this the Shastri's went to their new home, but it more or less looked like an old one, they had to make it look like the "Shastri's house"!

A few minutes later Rajat appeared. He was scared, nervous and happy to have new people to live with...FINALLY GIRLS!!!

Rajat: Uncle ji, namastey, kaise hai ap?

Shastri ji: Namastey beta, main thik hun tum kaise ho?

Rajat: Main thik hun, waise dad was saying that you need help?

Shastri ji: Ha beta, Anushka needs help, she is allergic to dust, she in that room over there...

In the room, Anushka was stuck, she couldn't stop sneezing.

Anushka: *sneeze* hai shankarji, *sneeze* what's wrong with me?

Rajat: Is anyone here?

Anushka: *sneeze*, ha, mein, Anushka...*sneeze* mein, mein, mein...

Rajat: Anushkaaa carefull, gir jaogi...wait!!!

Anushka was on top of a ladder, sneezing...she was on the verge of hitting her head on the cold and dusty floor when a pair of strong and protective arm held her tight.

That was their first ever meeting, where something was happening but no name could be given, there was a long silence, but a nice one, a silence where no words had to be spoken...

SORRY GUYS, THIS CHAPTER WAS FAIRLY SHORT BUT I WILL UPDATE A LONG CHAPTER IF THIS CHAPTER GETS EBOUGH LIKES AND COMMENTS...ENJOY!!!!!=P

Edited by zaya93200 - 10 years ago