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Posted: 8 years ago
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here me again
before starting my story want to say this

i got this idea when i was talking with noha so we decide to make post about it but ends up with this story ITS MY N NOHA CONCEPT

n i want to thank @flora15 for helping me or allowing me to use few part of her post in my story


so big thanks to noha n flora


sorry YET title is not selected
NOT GETTING ANY IDEA OF IT

IF U HAVE ANY IDEA THEN PM ME

PS-- my english is tooo poor so plz ignore gramMitical mistakes


want to write it in hindi but some don't know eng so writing in english as much i know



U R WELCOME WITH ALL TYPES OF COMMENTS BUT ONE REQUEST PLZ DONT MAKE IT WAR ZONE


ONLY TAMATARS R ALLOWED BUT NOT EGGS BCZ I DONT EAT EGGS N MAIN THING SAWAN CHAL RAHA HAI 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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PART 1


After leaving somya home harman searched her in whole house like a mad. When failed to find her in house. he called everyone but nobody know where somya is.Harman get tensed n went out in search of somya. After few hours when he return back he heard preeto shouting n beating plate .He immediately understand that somya left home n him due to all preeto but he say nothing to any one n instead of entering house he straight went to kinner house n burg into it. He get greatest shock see somya in kinner attire when he ask reason she refuse to recoganize him n introduce herself as tarana. Harman try to manaofing her n ask her to return home but somya refuse to return home until he reveal her identity in front of socity. That harman refuse to do. Instead of returning back home harman start living there.

Somya start running away from harman .she change many places but where ever she go harman find her n start living there. many kinner noticed this .one day a kinner ask her about harman. But Somya stay mum .when she did not reply any of their question them they decide to ask harman it self

When they r going to him somya stopped them n introduce him as her husband n some kinars questioning Saumya about her life as married wife ,how was her marriage ,husband and family.

she tell whole story with a painful voice full of sadness and sorrow talks them about how she's married ,how Harman rejected her knowing she's kinar and how after that he loves her how many times he put his life in danger just to save him and how have done for her a lot of things showing his deep love and concern. How he support her in every matter how even he disowned his parents just for her

After that she recalled the hurtfull flashback memory of misunderstood and tells them don't know why he changed and refused her as kinar .

After few days they somehow convince somya to go home with harman

Next day at night harman notice somya is not on bed, he heard some footsteps. He peep from door n notice somya n preeto going out from house

Harman silently follow them n heard preeto instigating somya against him n asking her to leave the country giving her tickets n passport.now his all doubts were clear that his gulabo again fall in preeto trap n preeto is main culprit creating MU in somya mind.he want to caught preeto red handed but stop himself. Till now he has learned to control his anger. Without uttering a word he come back n take his suitcase n passport and rushed towards airport.




PS -- TELL U IN ADVANCE STARTING PART IS FROM RUNNING TRACK EPISODES

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Good Job aunty 👏never mind of mistakes &gramma 😆I'm too doing mistakes..Express yourself as you feel langage can't be obstacles for you ;ignore it😆beat your fear and do your first steps ,use few Hindu sentences if u want..If you noticed I'm from Arabic country and for being used listening and watching Hindi I'm becoming understanding it and using some sentences..Usung Hindi words in Indian forum break all boundaries and unite us a friends ...Some of us are becoming the dearest for us ...What a pureful feelings that this forum is uniting us with ours difference.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Woww loved the first part .. really touching and interesting .. waiting for next part .. I can even imagine the scenarios while reading it 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Flora15

Good Job aunty 👏never mind of mistakes &gramma 😆I'm too doing mistakes..Express yourself as you feel langage can't be obstacles for you ;ignore it😆beat your fear and do your first steps ,use few Hindu sentences if u want..If you noticed I'm from Arabic country and for being used listening and watching Hindi I'm becoming understanding it and using some sentences..Usung Hindi words in Indian forum break all boundaries and unite us a friends ...Some of us are becoming the dearest for us ...What a pureful feelings that this forum is uniting us with ours difference.



thanks for reply
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: jyoti06

Woww loved the first part .. really touching and interesting .. waiting for next part .. I can even imagine the scenarios while reading it 😳


thanks for encouraging
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing story ,good job,waiting for the second part.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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[QUOTE=sairitu]Amazing story ,good job,waiting for the second part.[/QUOTE
thanks]
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Great start mam ... Pata nai show mein woh mauka kab ayega jab Preeto ka sach Harman mahaan ke agey ayega 😆😆😆


Hope this MU track is the final track in which Saumya is listening to everyone other than Harman and iske baad she should only listen to Harman

I think Harman is having some plan going in his mind ... First he will sort out with Saumya and then once his love life is back at track , he will handle Preeto and co 🤣🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pani.Puri



Great start mam ... Pata nai show mein woh mauka kab ayega jab Preeto ka sach Harman mahaan ke agey ayega 😆😆😆


Hope this MU track is the final track in which Saumya is listening to everyone other than Harman and iske baad she should only listen to Harman

I think Harman is having some plan going in his mind ... First he will sort out with Saumya and then once his love life is back at track , he will handle Preeto and co 🤣🤣


true

dont know when preeto will get exposed


bt want DEVI MAA give somya some brain bcz till now uski anko par preeto naam ka parda pada hai



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