Shakti: Forgiveness ~Haya FF part 11

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Summary: soumya was kidnapped by none other then preeto. Harman disappointed married mahi out of preeto wish. Years later soumya comes back with more surprises then everyone expect.


Haya ; very brave and courageous nine year old . Loves his mom to death, and would do anything for her. very out spoken, and stubborn, and can be shy when he doesn't know something.


Table of context

Prologue ; page 1
Part 1; page 2
Part 2; page 2
Part 3; page 2
Part 4; page 3
Part 5; page 3
Part 6; page 3
Part 7; page 4
Part 8; page 4
Part 9; page 5
Part 10; page 5
Part 11; page 5



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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey congrats for your writing 👏👏👏

The prologue seems quite interesting 😳😳😳 So Saumya is back with a bang years later only to set scores with Preeto and IDK what and how you are planning to show romance b/w HaYa but it would be interesting to watch HaYa after so many years 😳😳


I think after several years when Saumya will be back then she would be complete feminine figure with no defects 😳😳


Update soon 😛
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Prologue



It was a rainy day. A young boy about nine was running, he was heading somewhere with a gift in his hand. He was determine to reach his destination no matter what. As soon as he was about to cross the street, a car pass by almost hitting him. Surprise his gift falls and smush. He stood their watching the cake, but became angry when the car decides to drive.

Elsewhere, soumya was waiting. She was getting anxious, because Haya hasn't come back yet. He had told her he was just going to grab a few things at his friends and will be back, but he hasn't. She look at the house, they we're about to leave, and hope everything goes well.

Meanwhile, the boy ran after the car even when it turn a different route. He stop running when the car stop at a factory. He saw reporters their with camera's. He watch as mahi and preeto step out. Soon follow by harman and harak Singh. The reporters took their photos and question about the factory. Mr. Singh smile " this factory will soon be given to my daughter in law, and when she have kids they will be the face of this place. "

The reporters move in, trying to ask more question. Harman was quiet. He didn't say a word, he was lost in memory lane, when soumya was given the privileged to cut the rope. He bold his hand. Harman says in head, why did you leave gulabo. Didn't you think once about my feelings? Did you feel that I couldn't protect you, is that why you left.

Preeto nudge him and thank him for leaving work to come. Harman told her she drag him here, he wanted to stay and work on more cases. Preeto laugh it off.

The boy tried going to them, but he was pushed back by the reporters. Thinking he climb on top of Mr.Singh car and shout. Everyone turn, they we're surprise. The boy cross his hand " you people owe me an apologie"

Mr.Singh raise a brow " for what?"

" you guys almost hit me, causing me to accidently drop my gift for my mom"

Preeto ask the boy to come down. The boy refuse, he says he won't move until he get an apology. Mahi told him they will pay for the damage, but the boy refuse " money is not going to solve the problem. I work really hard saving to get my mom this gift, you people ruined it." He says

Preeto signal the police to grab him, but the boy stop them " even if you move me, I won't leave. My mom blood for justice run in my vein while my fathers bravery runs deep. Now I want an apology "

Mr.singh. was amuse, he told the boy they will pay for his gift, and apologize for what they did. " are you satisfied now, come down boy."

The boy just continue to stare, with his hand fold. " I want an apology from all of you, you guys we're also accomplice on it. "

The reporters start clicking pics. Preeto was not amuse. Harman on the other hand was impressed by his bravery. He apologize to him, soon mahi did. Preeto refuse too. But with harak persuasion she did. The boy smile and jump down.

He turn to leave, but Mr.Singh stops him and write him a check. The boy told him to keep it. Mr.Singh insist, but he still refuse. " what is your name?"

The boy smile " haya " he says before turning to leave.

To be continued...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aw HaYa have a son named Haya so cool...please continue soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It means Somu isn't a kinnar here. So did she take some surgery? or is the boy adopted and renamed as HaYa.. lets see how the story unfolds!
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Saumya has a son 😲 Is Saumya a complete feminine figure with no defects from her birth in your story or she had defects and Haya is an adopted kid ???


Awww Harman is still reliving in memories of Saumya despite being with Mahi 😆😆 Awww Haya is so cutee , I liked him 😳😳😳 Wish to see more Harman - Haya bonding and sweet naughty Haya ... Update the first chapter SOON ..


Nice and sweet prologue 😳😳😳 Update soon 😛

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Did something happen b/w Harman n Saumya before saumya leaving him n our brave HaYa is the result 😆
OK it's exciting . . I cannot wait to read further
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its interesting
cant wait for next ...
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Part 1


Soumya was getting things in the taxi. The driver told her to hurry up. Soumya told him her son isn't back yet. She was extremely worried.suddenly she heard a voice, she turn to see Haya running. When he reached Soumya hugs him before squeezing his cheeks " where did you disappear to huh?"

" ouch mommy, it hurts"

" you deserve it, I thought something happen to you"

Haya touch his mom hand and smile " nothing will happen to your protector. As long as dad blood runs deep, I will continue to be strong, and she'd light in your life."

Soumya smile " you already did by being born. Beside I don't need a protector, I just need my son near me."

Haya nod. He took something from his pocket and call his mom name. " surprise" he says showing her a cupcake with a candle. " what's this?"

" it's my gift to you"

Soumya was touched. Haya says it's not much, but he wanted to wish her a happy birthday. Soumya starts to cry. Haya panicked, he told her not to cry. And that he was sorry. He says if shes not happy about it he won't do it next time. Soumya denies it, " I'm very happy...thank you Haya"

The driver ruin their moment by beeping. Soumya quickly told her son to get in before the driver leaves. They said their good byes and get in the car. While driving they stop at a red light, she was unaware of Harman in the car next to her. She was busy talking with her son and feeding him the cupcake.

Harman turn when he thought he saw Soumya reflection. He sigh, I need to stop thinking about Soumya. Its been many years. She left and theirs no trace of her, it's like she doesn't exist. He thought, he close his eyes and open it to see her reflection gone. Mahi seeing his disturb look ask if everything was fine, Harman ask her to stop being concern over him, so she won't catch feelings for him again.

Mahi frown " can't a friend be concern " she says

Harman staid quiet. Mahi curse under her breath. You still thinking of her even now. Why won't you let her go.

The next day, Preeto grab the newspaper for her husband. She was surprise at what she saw. She walk to the living room and drop the front paper on the table. " look, look at what happen"

Harak reads the paper " boy bravely confront the singhs for ruining his present and making them apologize ", Harak laugh " what's so bad about that"

" this, made us seem like bad people. Like we didn't want to apologize. "

" just leave it alone"

" no, I will have to teach that boy some manners"

" drop it honey, leave things be " he says

But Preeto was one to never leave things alone. She was cooking up stuff.

Meanwhile Soumya came out of the taxi. She watch her old home, recall in everything that happen to her. Haya told her he will get her things while she knock " who is it?" the voice said

Soumya became emotional. " di" she says

The door quickly open and surbhi came out. " soumya!? "

Emotional they hug. Surbhi had many questions for her, she call beeji and they all hug her. They told Soumya to come in, but she said she has to wait for Haya. They question her about it, and she told them Haya is her child. Soumya smile and went on about how sweet and caring Haya was. Surbhi and beeji smile, " I'm glad she makes you happy. I haven't seen you glow in so long."

" Surbhi right, now I want to see my niece that cause this."

Soumya was about to tell them Haya was a girl, but stop when she heard him call her. Both Surbhi and beeji gasp, standing with logedge. Was a young boy who resemble someone they use to talk too. But he had Soumya nose and eyes. Beeji wanted to cry, " you adopted someone that looks just like you Soumya, it must be fate."

Surbhi ushered them in. She said it's cold and it's better if they stay warm. When Soumya walks in she realize somethings have change. She ask for maninder, and Surbhi told her he doesn't live with them anymore. Soumya was sad, but didn't ask anymore question. Beeji told her she missed many things , just like how she missed a lot of Soumya life. She told her Surbhi is married and is expecting.

Soumya became happy. She was happy for Surbhi. She wonder who it could be. Suddenly her phone rang. " hello"

" Ms. Soumya, we found a nice apartment for you."

" is it near the location I told you"

" yes mam, we want you to come and take a look"

" OK, I will come tomorrow " she says

Beeji watching Soumya wonder how much Soumya has change. She look more confident just sitting their and talking on the phone.the old Soumya would have been stuttering while speaking. Beeji ask her if she's not planning on staying, Soumya says no. " being by myself have giving me strength and also challenge me. I don't want to keep deepanding on people."

Surbhi coming back was sad, but she turn to Haya observing him. Haya was quiet observing his surrounding, he was making sure it was OK for his mom. He relax when he saw how comfortable his mom was. He turn to Surbhi and raised a brow " aunti-ji, your mom sister?"

"Yes"

Haya got up and stood in front of Surbhi. He gave her one of Soumya smile " my name is haya-kaur, nice to meet you"

" aunty ji makes me sound old. Call me choti."

Once everyone settled, they ate and went to bed. Haya couldn't sleep, so he went to his mom room. Soumya smile " you came to check up on me"

Haya nod, Soumya scooter over and told him to sleep. And he did. The next day Soumya woke up feeling heavy. She look down to see Haya head on her stomach sleeping. Soumya smile. " Haya, wake up"

When he did, they both went and brush their teeth. Before getting ready to leave. Surbhi told them to eat before they go, Soumya nod. After breakfast, they happily left.

To be continued...


Previiew

A car is being chased, a women became hostage, a boy runs to save his mother, and two people meet for the second time.
Edited by angelk1 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hope harman & sumya meet soon
amazing update
waiting for next ...

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