Shakti: Forgiveness ~Haya FF part 11

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Pani.Puri
The story is going quite good but its too confusing . When I read a particular chapter and think that maybe today's chapter will end confusion then insstead of clearing the confusion it adds more to it .. So far the story is going superb with past and present .. So finally Harman Saumya have met each other and Harman is married to Mahi ... This is much is clear to me but my first confusion is who is Haya ?? Is haya a boy or a girl and if he/she is the child of harman-saumya or he is adopted/given to saumya ?? Haya is really a brave and a strong kid who rescued his/her mom .. So in your story Harman is a cop .. Wow so cool ... I love such cops or agent kinda leads ... Secondly in your story is Saumya a normal woman or a TG ?? Bcz how can Harman-saumya consummate their marriage ?? Preeto , preeto , preeto ... Uhhh how low will she stoop ?? She injected Saumya and got her transported to another country .. Disgusting on her for being a woman and shaming another woman ... Luckily Saumya is rescued and she got a place to stay for a while .. I hope the family she got to stay in is a nice family and a good , positive family ... Third confusion is how come Saumya got her periods all of a sudden when in her whole life she never got periods ?? This is something very confusion and I'm curious to know if such kinds of cases do exist in real life also where a woman all off a sudden gets her periods when she has never experienced periods ... So if Saumya got periods then it means she is a normal woman and not a TG ?? Right ???? ... Plz do update soon ... This story is getting so good and curious and confusing .. Hope to see a sooner update so that some confusions can be cleared .. Great writing ... Keep it up ..

Ishu its quiet confusing for me also..but about period thing.i hve friend who's was never experienced this period thing even when we all at our 17 years old.Hse told me she's not hve this kind of think.I dont know why maybe her woman hormon hve some problems and due of it its not coming.when woman doesn't experiences this period time i thought they could hve some problems in getting child when they married and i also think the same about my Friend. I dnt know the details but after some year she gor married and now have 3 childrens.i guees maybe she start taking some medicine or seing doctors to get help about this.i dnt know much about this also maybe the writers can give us more clues.anyway the story quite interesting but just like ishu said its quite confusing also.keep it up.😊

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Yanci

@angelk1

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Pani an sagi... I cant really tell you who haya is that will ruin the story. But i will say this, when soumya an harman got intimate. Harman was drunk. Remeber they said soumya might look like a girl an have female appearance but shes a boy. So harman having such strong feelings for soumya gave in to his feelings that night. The alcohol helped a lot. Soumya was drunk too.

Anyway, its common for a female to not have her period for a long time. The reason i use is because of stress. I explain a little about it in the story. But its real, when your under physical or emotional stress your body produce a hormone call adrenaline an cortisol which causes the muscle an oxygen. To the lungs to increase delaying the reproductive cycle an delaying your period.

And we all know soumya went through so much as a child. She never got the chance to discover anything about her body and learn about this kind of stuff. So as the story progress we will see some changes an of course soumya growing leading to her meeting harman. It wont take that long.

I hope i explained the confusion. An if your still confuse, everything will be explain in the chapters.

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Yanci

@angelk1

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Part 9

Harman woke up to the sound of birds. He sleeply look around, but became startled when heard his name being called. " soumya?" he says

She was standing by the door with food. Smiling at him. " your awake?" she says

Emotional harman asks what she was doing here?"

Soumya puts the food down " you dont want me here?"

" no"

When he said this she frown sadly, harman quickly tries to correct himself. " i want you here, always by myside. But where did you go? Why did you leave me? Is it because we consume our marriage" " we're you that disgust with my action?"

Soumya sits on the bed, making harman sit up. She check his forehead. Saying his temperrure went down . harman not looking away puts his hand on her hand, " you still didnt answer me."

Before she could speak they heard a knock. Harman looks at the door before turning to soumya , only to see her gone. The door open and preeto walks in. " how are you feeling?"

Harman says " soumya..sh-"

Preeto knitted her brow " soumya...soumya...soumya...is that all you think about. I'm right here worrried sick about you. Stop living in a world that doesnt exist ."

Harman got up , but fell back down " w-what happend to me?"

" you were in a fight and was drunk. But luckily we arrived to help you."

Harman holding his bandage head says " we?"

Preeto nods " varun an i"

Harman nods. He once more tries to get up. But preeto puts a hand on him " what are you doing? Stop and rest" she says

" i cant , soumya is waiting for me. Everyday I'm sitting here its taking time away. Soumya is probably waiting for me to find her. I will do just that." , harman left the room with preeto following him downstairs. She told him to think about her an her feelings. Harman ignores her. Just then they stop when they heard a gun shot.

." where are you going harman?"

Harman glares at his dad " your going to stop me to old man"

Mr.singh drops his hand. " no, i gave you a chance to bring soumya but you didnt . "

" I'm still searching'

" how long will you look "

" as long as it takes"

Mr.singh looks at preeto, preeto nods. " then before you go you might want to see this" he says throwing the bracelet. Harman looking at it remeber the gift. It was the one he bought for soumya.

" why are you giving me this?"

" harman...soumya, how do i say this" she says sad

" shes dead" he finished

Harman move back " what?' he says

" we got the news not to long ago".

Harman still didnt believe , he told them he has to go to surbhi house, preeto told him to go then since thats the only way their word is confirmed. She does her drama about her son not believing her. Harman ignores her and left .

Meanwhile, soumya and sonali were walking after doing grocery. Sonali taught soumya about america. She told soumya not everything is behind doors and people can get justice. Soumya almost trip, but luckily someone caught her. " are you alright?"

" yeah...thank y-yo-"

Soumya stops to watch the face. She was surprise to see a beautiful Women . The men lady looks at her before giving her a card. Sonali looks at the card. " what is this?".

"The men smiling says " its a function, we're holding to speak up about our marriage rights"

Soumya looks at sonali for help. Sonali translate to her. The men looking at soumya asks if she will attend. He said they need a lot of supporters. The soumya seeing his desperate look agreed. Sonali said they will come later. The men thank them and walk away. It wasnt long before they reached the house. Soumya excuse herself to use the phone. She tried dialing harman house number, and the maid answer. " hello?"

Soumya excited said hello. She asks if harman was home. The maid was about to respond. When preeto asks who it was. The maid says soumya. Preeto knitted her brows, this soumya just wont leave . thinking she disconnect the phone line. Soumya was about to say something, when she heard the hang up noise. " hello? . hello?"

Sonali asks what happen, she said. The line was disconnected. She tried again an again, but nothing. Sonali says " do you think they change their number?"

Soumya tense says " i hope not"

Meanwhile, harman reached soumya house to see people leaving there. He watch as surbhi comes out crying . dadi told her soumya wouldnt want her to be sad. She says " our soumya is with nimmi now"

When she said this harman heart broke. He turn away from the scene and got in his jeep. He was driving extremely fast ignoring. People protest. " soumya" he says " why did you leave me? Did you dispise me so much that you had to die. I cant live without you soumya." while driving harman didnt see a huge truck heading towards him. The next thing he knew he was hit.

Causing his car to flip over. Before passing out harman heard a voice calling him..

To be continued...

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Ishu

@Pani.Puri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Superb update ... Felt so bad for Harman and Saumya ... Whole Singh and Kaur house is against their love ... Preeto and her cheap tactics just makes me sick ... She knows everything yet she does everything against HaYa's re-union ... The desperation and urge in Harman to find Saumya is so painful & the urgeness and eagerness of Saumya to meet and call Harman depicts her love and how they both are longing to be with each other . Its good to see that Saumya will attend that conference to know about other such ppl and their stories which might help her to gain confidence and courage in herself ... I hope this conference becomes a turning point in her life and gives her a new meaning in her life and after attaining all this she goes back to Gurdaspur and untie with Harman .. Hope in future she equals the score with Preeto for all the misdeeds she has done . I think the girl is Mahi who shouts for Harman's name ... I so never wanted this Mahi Harman marriage to happen and somehow Harman remains single or something like that but alas you showed HarHi as a couple ... Lets see whats in store for HaYa , Preeto , haya (Saumya harman's child bcz I think its their child and not some adopted cuye kid) ... The story is going great .. Hope so next time you give more lenghty update where atleast you reveal some secrets .. Good going ...

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Yanci

@angelk1

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Pani.Puri
Superb update ... Felt so bad for Harman and Saumya ... Whole Singh and Kaur house is against their love ... Preeto and her cheap tactics just makes me sick ... She knows everything yet she does everything against HaYa's re-union ... The desperation and urge in Harman to find Saumya is so painful & the urgeness and eagerness of Saumya to meet and call Harman depicts her love and how they both are longing to be with each other . Its good to see that Saumya will attend that conference to know about other such ppl and their stories which might help her to gain confidence and courage in herself ... I hope this conference becomes a turning point in her life and gives her a new meaning in her life and after attaining all this she goes back to Gurdaspur and untie with Harman .. Hope in future she equals the score with Preeto for all the misdeeds she has done . I think the girl is Mahi who shouts for Harman's name ... I so never wanted this Mahi Harman marriage to happen and somehow Harman remains single or something like that but alas you showed HarHi as a couple ... Lets see whats in store for HaYa , Preeto , haya (Saumya harman's child bcz I think its their child and not some adopted cuye kid) ... The story is going great .. Hope so next time you give more lenghty update where atleast you reveal some secrets .. Good going ...

Thanks lol, and the whole point of this is to show soumya with more confidence. Even i don't want mahi and harman, but its better than surbhi. Also this spice things up and also in the future which will be interesting. Its almost to the point where we go back to the future. You will find out some secrets in the past about Soumya, it will be soon lol.

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Yanci

@angelk1

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Chapter 10

Past

Soumya woke up feeling restless. She didnt know how, but she knew harman was in trouble. Getting out the bed, she puts her shoes on. She walk out of her room and walk downstairs, heading to the small shrine sonali has. Sonali husband watching the news stop to look at her, when he saw her praying he silently mute the volume out of respect.

Soumya says in head. I'm away from harman ever since we consume. You took me away from him and brought me here, for what? Now harman could be in danger. He needs me, but i cant reach him because I'm far away. So I'm begging you please protect him. She says .

While she was praying harman was being takin to the hospital room. Preeto was crying while mahi counsel her. Harman thought he heard soumya for a second. He calls her name causing preeto to stop crying. She says even in his death bed my son still managed to say that kinners name. This has gone to far.

Harak says my deal with harman is over. He says he gave him chance to find soumya but he didnt. His time is up, and now he will marry mahi. He says " harman obsessive love is very dangerous. We wont know what will happen next if he tries to look for her."

Preeto couldnt agreed more. Just then surbhi came in asking if harman was fine. Preeto knitted her brow " no ...my son is lying in the hospital because of your kinner sister. If anything happend to him i will not spare any of you."

Raavi says " you have no relation with us. Your sister is dead, so leave and never show your face infront of us"

Surbhi sadly look at them, " your right, i have no relation with you all, but harman is my friend. You guys ruin his life and di's, i will remeber this day. The day you all broke Ties with us" she says before leaving.

Elsewhere,

When soumya was done sonali mother asks if she wants tea. Turns out she had woken up a few minute before soumya. After making the tea. She asks soumya what was wrong. Soumya explains her concern. Sounali mom says " its natural to feel this way, after all your far away from your husband. Your practically home sick" soumya nods when she said this.

" who ever kidnapped you must have been adamant to make you stay away. Do you know who?"

Soumya thought about it. " the last thing i remember was preeto asking me to get her something"

" do you think she did this?"

Soumya shook her head, " theres no way, she...she w-wouldnt " she said more with a question.

Suddenly soumya recall something. When she went to get something for preeto, she thought she saw her face behind her. She gasp " it was her"

" well...it would seem that your mother in law wants you away from her son. But why?"

Soumya hesitate pondering whether to tell her. " I'm a kinner" she says looking down

Sonali mom stayed quiet for a while making her nervous. John sonali husband asks what was a kinner. Sonali mom answerd the question. John says soumya should watch this news with him.

He told soumya theirs nothing wrong with being born a boy in a girl body. He says you didnt choose this. He showed the people on tv. He says " do you see them. Their fighting right now for their rights to get married. They are mixtures of trans, les an gays. Other country are allowed to get married, but this mayor refuse to allow it. Which is going against the law. "

Sonali mom looking at soumya says " i can understand , our culture. They criticize too much. But in order to survive this you must be confidence and fight for whats yours. Give them no way to say no. And show them kinners lives matter too"

" but how will i do that?"

" sonali told me , you met a kinner that gave you a card?"

Soumya nod " then go to that convention, hear their story and help them." " become the shakti they need" she finished

Soumya became tense.

Elsewhere

Harman woke up to see his father next to him. " your finally awake" he says

Harman look around " wheres ma?"

" shes been crying all night because of you"

Harman frown. He tried to sit up, but his head starts to hurt. " how did this happen?" he says in pain

" you did this when you went in search for soumya?"

Harman looks at him now confuse " whose soumya?"

To be continued...

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Yanci

@angelk1

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Part 11

Past

.Harak blinks " is this a joke"

Harman says " if this was a joke i wouldnt be serious"

Harak excuse himself for a minute. He search for preeto and explained everything. Preeto smile " this is perfect. We dont know how long this will last, but we must be quick"

She quickly calls mahi and they walk in. Mahi starts her acting saying she called the ambulance seeing him in the accident. Preeto says " how could you worry your soon to be bride like this"

" bride?" harman says

Harak nod. " you two got a long so well that you came to me asking to marry mahi"

" i did?"

" yes, now get better soon. Your mom and i have to finish the preparation"

They smile at each other before leaving them alone.

Meanwhile,

Soumya and sonali were at the function. Soumya thank her for coming.sonali told her she needs someone to translate so shes glad to help. They sat down and wait for the events to start. Soumya was a little nervous. The man/women from earlier tap soumya and hug her. " you made it"

Soumya nod. The man now women says " you will love it"

He left soumya and walk up the stage. Turns out he was the spokes person. Soumya watch as he talk with so much confidence telling his story. It wasnt long before another came. The one that touched her was the young girl with the bruses on her body. How they would beat him because he chose to be himself. How he couldn't use the boys or girls bathroom at his school. When he did, they would beat him and the principal would do nothing. Even his parents supported it saying he should stay in his place. he said he had no one.

he said the one person who defended him and made him accept his body was murdered. Sonali asks soumya if she was ok. Soumya nod while wiping her tears. She heard the boy/girl says " all i want is justice for him. What was his fault in all of this, their was no reason for him to die because he helped me . everyday, i feel misserable knowing its my fault. Thats why i want justice ."

The spokesperson took the girl of the stage when she started crying misserably. Soumya didnt know they were others like her suffering just as much . she suddenly stood up. Sonali asks if she wants to go up. She nods. And so soumya walk on stage . she look at everyone with pity. Sonali says , she will translate. And so soumya began her story. Soumya says " even through all of this . I'm still alive and have hope for change. Even through this journey i was just gonna go back like nothing happen. "

" but being here and listening to everyone's story. Made me realize, people mind set wont change unless we change. Weve been acting upon our fear and bowing down to their feet. For what? For being born this way? For wanting to be normal. Sadly we are not normal, we are imperfection. If being normal means picking on someone or preventing them from being happy than i dont want to be normal. I'd rather be imperfection" she says

Sonali smile hearing this. Everyone starts mumbling amongst one another. One kinner stood up " i am imperfection" he says

" i am as well"

" so am i"

" team imperfection" another says

Soon the whole crowd starts to chant imperfection

Soumya smile she says " if we want things to change, than we need to stand up to this mayor. Show him kinners lives matter too, and that we will not sit and watch him ruin more lives."

The spokes person says " your speech has really inspired them. Would you like to lead this protest. "

Soumya shyly says " i dont know where to go"

The men/ women laugh " i will direct you"

Sonali stops them. She says they should get him where it hurts. She said , we should make banners that says imperfection and kinners lives matter. The women says sonali has a point, she says the mayor is hosting a dinner at his house with important people. In two days. We should make our voice heard then.

" thats right, this is perfect" sonali says

And so with everyone cooporation they planned the next time to meet for their big day. Sonali and soumya walk in the house. Her mother asked what happen. Sonali explained everything. Her mother smile " i knew you could do it. "

" thank you, but its not over until the mayor agrees"

Two days later, Soumya and her group march to the mayor house . when they reach they all circle his house while chanting. The mayor discussing with other senators stop. He look out the window to see many people lined up. His friends look at him. He told them to ignore it .

The men/ women use a speaker , he says " we will not leave this place until you come out"

The mayor sigh, " these people are nothing but trouble." he says

He got up follow by the senators and walk out. Everyone quiet down. " why are you people disturbing me"

Soumya says " we just need you to listen to our story before you decides to ban our rights."

" i dont need to listen. You guys need to understand that this is best for the people. You trans. Do not deserve to get married. Its disgusting to even suggest it. The people wants normality, not someone to confuse their sexuality. I let it slide by letting you all walk around and live normally, but keep acting like this. You all will be in jail." he says

Soumya and the rest were now angry. Soumya says " mayer sir, we didnt come to cause trouble For everyone. We are humans not alien. You say people want normality, but take a look at us, we are not normal. No one is, we are all different. Thats the beauty of it all, language, body shape, ideas, skin, hair and posture are all different. So to say the people want normality is a joke. Because no one is the same."

The mayor glares at soumya " so your the leader of this group?"

" yes i am"

" if you care about your friends, you will cancel this, other wise you all will not be safe."

Soumya says " a mayor that threatens his people for peacefullly protesting is that whats best for the people."

The kinners all shout no. She says I'm glad he actually spoke up because it had always been our words against his. But now, what will the media and the world say once they hear it.

The mayor knit his brow " what are you saying?"

Soumya smile before nodding to sonali. Sonali made the call, suddenly a lot of news reporters came out. The mayor was taken back. They ask the mayor if all of this is true. The mayor baffled glares at soumya. The mayor tries to explain, but they just kept asking. The men/ women kinner says " will he agree now"

The mayor went in his house. The reporters turn to their camera speaking. Some went to soumya to get more information. Soumya says they wont leave until he change the rule. She sat down infront of his house, soon follow by the others. The reporters turn to their camera to speak.

Soumya tells the kinners they will not move even if it takes them a week. They all nod.

To be continued...