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Posted: 9 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: soul76




Lol I was actually thinking ppl might think Somu still not up but I need to explain Harman as a person here before we indulge in Soumya's character.
Kaka is the centre piece of Harman's life and has much to tie up.
U know when I finished writing this I realized that the character has a lot of RK in it, I cannot deny that he is probably my fav character played by Vivian. RK though had a sadistic side to him which I was not a fan of. Harman will definitely not be sadistic, his actions will explain themselves. Soumya will be Soumya but my Somu will have enough courage, the one thing serial Somu lacks is confidence and I don't like that at all. Thanks for reading.😊



Excited about next chap yar ! U know I love Rk char like crazily & yeah whatever u said is ryt,first char shud b developed as u said & I won't agree Rk was sadistic coz Rk has his own story & it's an epic char which can't b ignored .But I yeah respect ur opinion though :D LOL . I'm looking forward for this confident somu & im guessing this is going to b love-hatr story & harman char here I loved it as it is . plzzz do update sooon... I'm addicted to this story already hahaha
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52

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Excited about next chap yar ! U know I love Rk char like crazily & yeah whatever u said is ryt,first char shud b developed as u said & I won't agree Rk was sadistic coz Rk has his own story & it's an epic char which can't b ignored .But I yeah respect ur opinion though :D LOL . I'm looking forward for this confident somu & im guessing this is going to b love-hatr story & harman char here I loved it as it is . plzzz do update sooon... I'm addicted to this story already hahaha


Trust me RK is my fav character too, his authoritative nature was a huge draw to me but when I look at some of the stuff he pulled on Madhubala I cringe sometimes. The biggest was his unwedding drama, as a woman I felt he had used Madhu to the core and then left her high and dry. She loved him so deeply and I can understand being married there is a lot you put in a marriage and if some guy does that to you that is pure torture. Yes RK had a past so what everyone does, life is not a bed of roses Madhu had a past too. RK was so involved in self pity it sometimes became over bearing. Not that I agreed with everything Madhubala did, didn't like her over confidence and fakeness at times trust me but then that was what made them so special they were both flawed.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chp 7

Soumya had fluttered her eyes open the dim lights in the room had made it hard for her to make out anything her vision was hazy she brought a careful hand to her bandaged head which felt as heavy as lead. She winced in pain as she tried to get up it was an extremely difficult task for her, her futile attempts had not gone unnoticed by the nurse who was by her side "Mrs Singh please don't strain yourself" she had gently lain Soumya back. "Where am I?" Soumya had whispered her mouth was parched her lips pale surprisingly she couldn't recall any of her surroundings. "Please don't stress yourself Mrs Singh you'r right at home" the kind nurse had propped downy pillows around Soumya helping her rest against them holding a glass of water to her she helped Soumya sip it slowly. The nurse had switched on the lights for better visibility making Soumya look around the room assessing its splendor. It was done up in azure and beige the queen size bed she lay on had silken sheets with a carved head rest there were luxuriant sofas and foot stools. The room was carpeted in a beige fur a crystal chandelier hung overhead but right now the soft lights that flooded the room emitted from studio lights fitted around the length and breadth of the ceiling, a massive wardrobe stood at the far end of the room.

Soumya had closed her eyes again unable to make out anything as far as she understood this was alien to her, she wondered where her family was though try as she might she couldn't remember them. Harman had swung open the wooden door to find Soumya finally awake as he stepped forward she had opened her eyes to find herself being glowered at by a stranger. "There now Mrs Singh your husband is home... I'll leave you two alone for a while" the nurse had smiled at Soumya who had felt it quite awkward to be at the receiving end of such an unpleasant stare. Throwing his coat on a nearby sofa Harman had kicked off his shoes. "So you finally awaken Sleeping beauty and now that you have done the honors could you please be kind enough so as to enlighten me of your existence" Harman had asked her scathingly. Soumya had looked up at him through her soft hazel eyes in bewilderment if what the nurse had stated was true why was he asking her for an identity. She studied him in detail, he was probably five feet eleven with rich dark silken hair some falling on his forehead, his face was perfectly symmetrical and impeccably handsome, his chocolate eyes narrowed to mere slits fringed with curled lashes. His lips were of a perfect shape though one appeared to be swollen, he had a slight stubble as if he had forgotten to shave that day and she admitted to herself looked perfect with his personality. His nose was straight his eye brows thick though right now they were knitted together as he waited for her answer testing his patience.

"What's your name?" she had asked him softly "I'm sorry but somehow I can't recall it" she had explained honestly while he gazed at her surprised by the gentle tone of her voice. She did not appear intimidated by him rather at a loss and that further appalled him. He had turned away wordlessly to the wardrobe retrieving his t-shirt and track pants and had disappeared in the washroom for a quick shower. In his absence Kaka had called on him to inform him about dinner being ready. Watching Soumya wide awake he had inquired of her health and she had smiled at him "I am much better" she had replied. Kaka had taken an instant liking to her and had asked her if she was hungry. Having been asleep for nearly a day Soumya's insides hurt with fatigue and she had complied to Kaka's offer to having dinner in her bedroom. Moments later Kaka had returned with the food in a tray and had placed it on the low table in the room Harman had returned then toweling his hair dry. He had completely ignored Soumya thrusting his feet in his sandals he had stepped out of the room to find the nurse waiting by the entrance. "Sir your wife seems pretty weak" she had informed him and he had listened to her comment in silence, making for the dining table downstairs. It seemed as if the other occupants had had their meals and as he confirmed with kaka who had assented to his doubt. "Harman she seems pretty nice" kaka had informed him, "why you talked to her?" he had inquired spooning his food in his mouth.

"Yes I did" kaka had smiled, "Did she have her dinner?" he had asked again. "I don't know" Harman had answered off handedly "Did you get her name?" Harman had asked Kaka. "No" kaka had replied "though Monty told me it was Soumya" he had informed Harman. "What else has that Monty been telling you?" Harman had asked amused. "He didn't have to the paper pretty much said it" Kaka had replied showing him a copy of the evening paper where indeed a picture of him with her in his arms adorned the front page. "Tycoon turns into prince charming" Harman had read with disinterest, the calumnies churned by a disillusioned reporter my God could it get any worse he had thought.

Soumya had thought the stranger which she assumed was her husband would join her for dinner she felt hungry and her head hurt she waited patiently but he still didn't return. After a while her head began to feel dizzy and had started throbbing incessantly the nurse too was unavailable, little had she known the nurse had finished off with her duty and had retired home. Putting a hand to her forehead Soumya had managed to push back the silken covers revealing her saree the heavy embroidery it bore weighed it down and Soumya had found it extremely uncomfortable an attire to be in any longer. She slid off the bed steadying herself against the head rest the wardrobe seemed so far away but she simply had to relieve herself of this constraining garment. Pushing herself forward she managed to walk the expanse of the room holding on to the sofas for assistance once there she had swung open the doors only to find it decked with masculine garments. Shirts, suits even undergarments all probably belonging to the man who was here earlier. She stood perplexed a sharp pain engulfing her she felt herself falling when Harman had deftly caught her in his arms before she had hit the ground. She had looked up at him through those bewitching eyes yet again "Where had you gone?" she had whispered softly startling him.

As he filled her in his arms she had held him by his shirt. "What were you doing?" he had asked grimly placing her on the bed "I wanted to change" she had told him and he had left once again. She wondered why was it that every time she answered him he walked out on her. "Kaka could you ask Raavi to lend some of her clothes to the girl" he had inquired of Kaka. "Why don't you ask her yourself?" Kaka had suggested "Please Kaka not now" Harman had requested and Kaka had shaken his head in disappointment they were a stubborn lot all of them. Moments later he had returned with a bundle of clothes from her room which Harman had taken from him to his own and had handed them to Soumya. "Change, eat and sleep" he had ordered her and had left her in care of the nurse who had resumed night duty beside Soumya. Holding the clothes in her hands Soumya had watched him exit the room what sort of a man had she married she had wondered then. Harman had retired to bed in one of the adjacent bedrooms he was determined to get over with the chapter named Soumya in his life, making up his mind to inquire about her family once she got better he had drifted off to sleep.



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Edited by soul76 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I'm here... LOL
wow...update is here..
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Originally posted by: Nithunavi

I'm here... LOL
wow...update is here..


Enjoy it !
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Omg...it was a fabulous update !! :)
I enjoyed :D
Soumya in real forgot herself & thinking harman to b her hubby who's careless abt her aww...
She's softly talking to him & harman is ofcourse shocked coz he thought for his sarcastic qtn he wud get a rude reply... But she was so sweet as she thought him to b her hubby .
"Tycoon turned pribce charming " Lol yeah ofcourse its for damsel Cinderella soumya ;)
Harman family seems complicated... & kaka is mediator & close to all...
No wts harman will do with his fake wife who thinks herself to b his wife in real LOL
Im excited for further story of Mr & Mrs Harman Singh scenes :)
Update sooonnn..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nithunavi



Omg...it was a fabulous update !! :)
I enjoyed :D
Soumya in real forgot herself & thinking harman to b her hubby who's careless abt her aww...
She's softly talking to him & harman is ofcourse shocked coz he thought for his sarcastic qtn he wud get a rude reply... But she was so sweet as she thought him to b her hubby .
"Tycoon turned pribce charming " Lol yeah ofcourse its for damsel Cinderella soumya ;)
Harman family seems complicated... & kaka is mediator & close to all...
No wts harman will do with his fake wife who thinks herself to b his wife in real LOL
Im excited for further story of Mr & Mrs Harman Singh scenes :)
Update sooonnn..


Hahaha wasn't Soumya just a cuty... yeah this Harman isn't used to being handled this way.
I think you'll like the next few scenes, this Harman is so close to my heart!!! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 8

At some indefinite point in the night Harman had felt his hand encumbered he lay comfortably sprawled on his massive king size bed in his guest room. He lugged at his hand in sleep but found it pinned under a minuscule weight. His eyes had groggily opened up to make out a dismal shape in the inky darkness etched in the room. Reaching out for the bedside lamp he had switched it on to find Soumya slumber by the side of his bed her head resting on his open hand he stared on not registering the uncanniness of the situation, only when he tried to move his hand a third time and it still wouldn't budge from beneath her did he feel anger bubble inside him. What the hell was this woman doing in his room in the dead of the night? No forget the room this wasn't even his room this was a guest room where he had been forced to sleep because SHE was occupying his room in the first place. He had felt like banging her head against the wall he noticed she shivered slightly as she sat huddled on the cold marble floor her head resting on his palm while her hand holding on to his arm. Her bandage was soiled from the side where she had been hit the blood stain increasing in diameter, the wound was probably bleeding underneath.

This was too much for him to handle he had paid medical staff to take care of her twenty four seven yet she sat beside him in a visibly uncomfortable position while the damned nurse was nowhere to be found. Sitting up straight he had gently lifted her head her wound was troubling him immensely. Part of him wanted to bring the house down but the other more rational part knew at two in the night he couldn't act like a child who'd been deprived of his favorite soft toy. He had bent down and had been about to pick her up in his arms when she had stirred feeling the light on her face she had opened her tender eyes to greet his feral ones. "What the hell are you doing here?" he had snapped impatiently and Soumya had stared at the man in wonder what had she ever done to get him so infuriated at her in the first place.


"I ... was feeling .. afraid" she had whispered sitting up straight though in the process her head had blown up in a zillion pieces all at once she had drawn in a sharp breath pain evident from her distorted expression as she put her palm to her forehead. "That nurse is gonna pay for this" Harman had sworn under his breath getting off the bed when he had felt a soft hand on his own. He traced it to her "It's not her fault please don't get mad at her" she had pleaded to him. "She's supposed to look after you that's what I bloody pay her for" Harman had shrugged her hand off and marched in the next room to storm on a fast asleep nurse Mala. The poor woman was a heavy sleeper and snored quite vehemently much to Soumya's inconvenience and discomfort. Soumya had tried to put up with the thunder and roll for quite some time but when it became quite impossible for her to do so she had decided to join her husband in their bedroom. She had tiptoed to his room miraculously he was just in the room next door. She had found it quite rude to awaken him at her expense and avoided getting in bed with him rather had settled on the floor beside him with her hand holding onto him for assurance of him being there. She could hear him rant and rave at the flustered nurse and deep inside Soumya felt bad at having put her through this. She contemplated on returning to her room or not when the door to that room had flown open and Harman had stomped in sweeping her in his arms in one graceful move he had her nestled safely in them.

Even though Soumya's ride was a short one it was memorable to her since it was the first one she remembered with vivid clarity. He seemed least bothered about her reaction or take on his actions settling her on the bed he had wanted to return to his own bedroom when he noticed her food tray untouched. "Have you had dinner?" he had inquired brusquely of her. "No" she had answered only to see the untamed fury in his eyes directed to her now. "Why" he had growled "How could I eat alone" she had counter questioned him. His eyes had narrowed then drilling their unhappy glare in her while she looked at him unaware of his thought process. "Well I didn't know you required company to dine" he had stated acidly turning to the nurse he had ordered her to make her eat something before making her take her pills and had left to catch up on his sleep.


The next morning Soumya had woken up with a heavy head though it did not pound like a wave crashing shore it certainly felt like lead. The night nurse had helped her walk up to the washroom Soumya longed to have a shower but her head injury wouldn't allow her that so she settled for a bath. Soaking her tired body in a fragrant tub of bubbles she had soaped herself luxuriantly taking in the ceramic fittings of the expansive bathroom complimenting the rich creamy colour that glowed in the soft amber lights making her feel as if she was a princess and had after the exercise felt much better. She had put on the bathrobe and had walked out to see the nurse await her with breakfast. "Is my husband home?" she had asked the servant waiting on her in return Monty had stared at her in awe now who had told her to play along when master wasn't even around. "Harman sir isn't home" he had answered curtly not liking his master's bachelorhood being compensated on the whim of a dainty looking creature. Soumya had looked at him quite taken aback by his rather formal yet scathingly to the point answer somehow the feeling that she had wronged the man in charge in some inexplicable fashion had hit her home yet again.

The nurse had placed the breakfast tray in front of her coaxing her to take her cereal and she had eaten mutely. She remembered the cold dinner she had, had to have under the watchful eye of the same nurse the previous night it certainly hadn't been very appealing she had recollected sadly. After breakfast Soumya had been made to change in an expensive saree her hair brushed and braided she had left the room with her attendants for a trip to the hospital. She had taken in the bustling traffic that Mumbaii was so famous for her mind not registering any of it as familiar, she mused silently during her car ride trying to recollect her past but it just would not come to her. At the hospital her tests had run smoothly and the doctor had smiled as he saw her sit looking rather apprehensively at him "Mrs Singh you're going to be just fine" he had grinned good naturedly. "Your reports will in by evening but by the looks of it the wounds seem to be healing" he had carefully unwrapped Soumya's soiled bandage studying the tell-tale cut meticulously wiping it clean he had bandaged it again. "Is there any other pain or problem you have experienced after the accident besides your head injury?" the doctor had asked mechanically taking her pressure.



"Actually doctor" Soumya had started hesitantly when the knowledgeable doctor's eyes had rested on her. "Yes Mrs Singh" he was all ears and Soumya had felt like pouring her heart out to him she had sobbed then unable to understand herself at the point. Dismissing Monty and the rather reluctant nurse from the room the doctor had made Soumya relax in her seat fetching her some water which she drank in small sips. "Now Mrs Singh let's start from the beginning" he had smiled kindly. Dr Mathur was an aged doctor who had seen many pleasant and not so pleasant cases in his thirty years of service as Senior Doctor at Mumbaii City Hospital. "Doctor my husband I think I might have upset him in some way but I cannot recall how... I can't remember anything from before the accident" she had explained to him. 'I couldn't even remember his name" she had wept inconsolably this time as Dr Mathur had gazed at her thoughtfully. "Do you remember your own name?" he had asked her gently and Soumya's eyes had widened in horror up till now she had assumed to have forgotten all details on Harman it was now that reality struck her with full force she was a lost soul who had no inkling of her own identity. She clutched her head in agony her tears falling thick and fast watching her this way Dr Mathur had been forced to inject her with a sedative.


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Edited by soul76 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Fabulous update ā¤ļø
Gonna post my thoughts on every part later...
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Fantastic Update...!!šŸ‘šŸ¼
Im eager after reading every chap for the next chap , & waiting for Haya scenes more to come...
Loved it 😃

Update soon...

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