Say you are mine. Short HaYa ff part 25 (3.10.2016)

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Ekta

@HaymurS

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Posted: 9 years ago

#191

Beautiful update
Cant wait for harman past to be reavealed and then healed by somya...
Samaira is indeed the witch🤣
Phew haya ka first outing destroyed by samaira...
Lets see what havox she creates in future

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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#192

Awesome update.

Harman's pain will be healed by saumya.

I am loving the gradual progress of the story.

Continue soon.

Edited by _Ms.Funnybee_ - 9 years ago

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sparklingeyes

@sparklingeyes

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Posted: 9 years ago

#193

The way u write is amazingly beautiful..

I can feel that pain n happiness

Harman tried his best to make samaira jealous but it seems difficult as of yet to ignore her n her taunts

But our saumya will make that happen.. I m sure

Harman might be opportunist but somewhere I feel subconsciously he has fallen in love with Saumya especially the way he asked her to stay close to him in drunken state

Cannot wait to read what u have next for HaYa..

Edited by sparklingeyes - 9 years ago

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usha

@ushasri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#194

wow awsome update dear👍🏼
want harman to come out of past completely with the help of soumya
loving this haya jodi

thsi samiara is a big witch

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Nithunavi

@Nithunavi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#195

UN resed my comment on pg 25 for Part 18 :)

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Nithunavi

@Nithunavi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#196

Part 19:
Fabulous & awesome update :)
Sowmya realized her love for harman.
She understood that she is in love with her hubby & can't see him in pain or can let him go.. That's a gud sign.
Samaira is one jealous soul..can't stand anyone's happiness or want to simply mock others & feel proud for herself... But harman had given the taste of own medicine in his style.. Though in a polite manner..
Soumya was caught feeling secue abt herself when that ex wife who's so sexy was around her husband..
But harman had proved it wrong & the way he comforted her inhibitions by his actions was excellent :)
The dance part where she was doing her steps very carefully with looking her steps where she's putting showed how innocent she is ! LOL harman had gud laugh inside I guess at her actions :)
But this samaira might have known many things abt harman may be... Thats y she had hit him with the cord which puts him in misery instantly...
But now sowmya is determined to tc of him so nothing of her actions now on may hurt him..
Harman unknowingly got into sowmya.. He may not know but he started liking her...the way he needs her is so emotional & I hope he starts realizing soon his love for her :)
Loving it Soul..
Now waiting for next update..

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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#197

waiting eagerly for next part.

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soul76

@soul76

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Posted: 9 years ago

#198

Originally posted by: Hybrid_Freak
Beautiful update
Cant wait for harman past to be reavealed and then healed by somya...
Samaira is indeed the witch🤣
Phew haya ka first outing destroyed by samaira...
Lets see what havox she creates in future

Thanks dear!

Harman's past will be revealed soon but Soumya will still have to struggle to understand him. Harman is not very open with his sentiments and Soumya will have to coax him to let her love him. 😊

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soul76

@soul76

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#199

Originally posted by: _Ms.Funnybee_
Awesome update.
Harman's pain will be healed by saumya.
I am loving the gradual progress of the story.
Continue soon.

Thanks a lot,

Yes Harman is very broken and Soumya has to heal him tenderly but she'll manage the fighter that she is :) 😊

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soul76

@soul76

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Posted: 8 years ago

#200

Originally posted by: sparklingeyes
The way u write is amazingly beautiful..
I can feel that pain n happiness
Harman tried his best to make samaira jealous but it seems difficult as of yet to ignore her n her taunts
But our saumya will make that happen.. I m sure
Harman might be opportunist but somewhere I feel subconsciously he has fallen in love with Saumya especially the way he asked her to stay close to him in drunken state
Cannot wait to read what u have next for HaYa..

Thank you so much dear for your beautiful comments!

Oh yes Harman did try his best to not let Samaira get to him but he couldn't do that as Samaira knows of his past and is sadistic enough to derive pleasure from his pain.

Yes Harman has subconsciously fallen for her, the hope now is that he acknowledges that he is truly in love with her.

Oh HaYa is in safe hands with me trust me!