Say you are mine. Short HaYa ff part 25 (3.10.2016)

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Ekta

@HaymurS

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Posted: 9 years ago

#181

Osm update
Finally kiss happened...very calculative of harman though😆
Awww glad somya give it back to samaira🤣 one feisty lady...

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Ishu

@Pani.Puri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#182

Hey Dear ! I'm very very late in giving my comment on this story so my apologies for that .. I'm really liking this story and the way its progressing . So lets start with ladies first - Saumya . She is a very sweet , innoncent and a docile lady but in the last chapy she became a tigress in front of Harman's ex and I liked that ... Hmm so she thinks that she is Harman's wife and that is why she is having all those feelings and emotions .. Liked her bonding with Harak and the way she innocently asks Harman about certain questions or when she shows her zeal and squeal like a kid for ice-cream or coconut ... Harman said truly in the last chappy that she really can't mask her feelings and she isn't a double faced ... Poor her , she always yearns for her husbands love and smiling heartfelt 2 words to make her day an awesome one . Coming to Harman now - OK this guy really seems to be a mysterious man to me ... He has lots and lots of deep secret within him .. Is Harman having some bad past ??? Bcz the way he behaves makes me ponder on this question , for instance what has happened b/w the father-son duo that Harak never eats with Harman or he doesn't ask Harman or behaves like how father should behave for example asking Harman that how was his day etc ... Has his past made him such that he never talks freely with anyone ??? OK one thing is really bugging me - Saumya is now getting better and Harman was never so keen to keep Saumya with him then why when she has got better then is Harman not telling her the truth that she is not his wife and they haven't married ??? Why did he kiss her and invoke those feelings within her ?? Din't Harman felt guilty of using Saumya just bcz he wanted to teach his ex-wife a lesson (I'm talking about the last chapter bcz that is why he took Saumya with him to the party and bcz of media he kissed Saumya).. Harman knows very well that she is an innocent girl and she has harbored feelings for him then why did he kiss her and invoke those feelings in her when he very well knows that she isn't his wife and all this is just a facade ???? I hope to get my questions answers very soon ... You write exceptionally marvellous and I really liked your writing style . You seem to be a pro writer . Friend just start writing a book or get started by publishing your works bcz you write really beautiful . Dear , also I would like to say that I won't be reading all the chapters whenever you will post them as I will read some 10-11 chappys together and then comment so incase you send PM then don't PM me bcz I'll comment later on .. And keep writing more and more stories Miss/Mr. pro Writer .

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Nithunavi

@Nithunavi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#183

Res
Unres

I'm late as I'm busy with studies & etc...

But..but I can't miss this story of urs ever...I'm quite addicted to this...LOL
Coming to the update it was Suppperrbb !!
Harman is dealing with soumya completely like a business minded person... He wants her to be his perfect like everything in his life & show the world it's always best with harman & mainly to samaira...
The guy wanted to make some hot stuff for news himself as it looses minds of all the media persons taking all the interest of the evng only abt them .& that's y he made liplock with the poor girl soumya who's more of emotional person who doesn't care anything but her hubby love...
Well both sides r coming together started just now... So it takes time for harman to fall in love with soumya & sounya to understand & deal with him .
And this innocent yet feisty woman is super cool (Soumya)
I loved the way she gave back to that ex wife though she was nervous & uncomfortable in her own way being there.
This ex wife is simply mocking her... But she gotta understand soumya doesn't back down that easily :)
Thanks alot for reminders of ur update Soul. :)

Edited by Nithunavi - 9 years ago

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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

Stunner

+ 31

Posted: 9 years ago

#184

Waiting eagerly for the new update.

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soul76

@soul76

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Posted: 9 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: ushasri
fabulous update dear
harman getting close to soumya feeling comfort with her
soumya vs harman exwife
liking this soumya a lot

thanks for the pm
waiting for next part

Thanks dear!

HaYa are indeed getting close but there is much that Soumya is unaware of. She still needs to figure Harman out. 😊

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soul76

@soul76

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Posted: 9 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: sparklingeyes
That kiss was unexpected one... Harman is too confident doing anything n everything
N I love this saumya... She shows everyone their place perfectly
Loved reading it
Waiting for next update

Lol yes Harman is confident because Soumya has never stopped him on the contrary she craves him as a wife would for her husband. Harman knows the truth Soumya doesn't. I do so want women to be empowered to make their own choices in life. 😊

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soul76

@soul76

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Posted: 9 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: ytanuja
Nice story

Long time since I saw you. 😊

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soul76

@soul76

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Posted: 9 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: Hybrid_Freak
Osm update
Finally kiss happened...very calculative of harman though😆
Awww glad somya give it back to samaira🤣 one feisty lady...

Yup the kiss happened! 😆

I like my Soumya, fiesty and sharp not portrayed like the dimwit she is in the series :)

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soul76

@soul76

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Posted: 9 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: RagingBlaze
Hey Dear ! I'm very very late in giving my comment on this story so my apologies for that .. I'm really liking this story and the way its progressing . Thank you for liking my work! So lets start with ladies first - Saumya . She is a very sweet , innoncent and a docile lady but in the last chapy she became a tigress in front of Harman's ex and I liked that ... Soumya is courageous and brave and she does not believe in staying mum for no fault of hers. Indeed she is loving and innocent. Hmm so she thinks that she is Harman's wife and that is why she is having all those feelings and emotions .. Yes she does think she is married to Harman. Liked her bonding with Harak and the way she innocently asks Harman about certain questions or when she shows her zeal and squeal like a kid for ice-cream or coconut ... Harman said truly in the last chappy that she really can't mask her feelings and she isn't a double faced ... Poor her , she always yearns for her husbands love and smiling heartfelt 2 words to make her day an awesome one . Well the feelings she has are what a woman would have towards her husband whom she believes she is married to, she yearns for Harman's love while he knows the truth and tries to maintain distance from her. Coming to Harman now - OK this guy really seems to be a mysterious man to me ... He has lots and lots of deep secret within him .. Is Harman having some bad past ??? Yup Harman has a relatively difficult past which I will be highlighting soon. He has become heard hearted because of that and does not consider other people's emotions or feelings as his concern. Bcz the way he behaves makes me ponder on this question , for instance what has happened b/w the father-son duo that Harak never eats with Harman or he doesn't ask Harman or behaves like how father should behave for example asking Harman that how was his day etc ... Has his past made him such that he never talks freely with anyone ??? OK one thing is really bugging me - Saumya is now getting better and Harman was never so keen to keep Saumya with him then why when she has got better then is Harman not telling her the truth that she is not his wife and they haven't married ??? It will come in time he will tell her. Why did he kiss her and invoke those feelings within her ?? She already has those feelings for him, he merely used her as a pawn in his game. Din't Harman felt guilty of using Saumya just bcz he wanted to teach his ex-wife a lesson (I'm talking about the last chapter bcz that is why he took Saumya with him to the party and bcz of media he kissed Saumya).. Nah he doesn't feel guilty at all in his mind since she already desires him he could make use of her in this particular situation. Harman knows very well that she is an innocent girl and she has harbored feelings for him then why did he kiss her and invoke those feelings in her when he very well knows that she isn't his wife and all this is just a facade ????Like I said Harman is an opportunist, if he sees an opportunity he grabs it. I hope to get my questions answers very soon ... You write exceptionally marvellous and I really liked your writing style . You seem to be a pro writer . Friend just start writing a book or get started by publishing your works bcz you write really beautiful . Thank you so much for your wonderful comments, they mean a lot to me. Dear , also I would like to say that I won't be reading all the chapters whenever you will post them as I will read some 10-11 chappys together and then comment so incase you send PM then don't PM me bcz I'll comment later on .. And keep writing more and more stories Miss/Mr. pro Writer . I normally don't pm ppl only those who specifically ask for it and it is Mrs pro writer 😊

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soul76

@soul76

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Posted: 9 years ago

#190

Part 19

The rest of the evening was a blur for Soumya she though had seen Samaira smile at her from across the room and had felt queasy each time their eyes had collided since hers seemed to be focused on Soumya at all times. Harman had been called to pop the first bottle of Champagne for the evening, Soumya had accompanied him to the pyramid of wine glasses erected in the center of the ballroom. Amidst a thunderous applause Harman had flipped open the cork stopper and a frothy gush of the effervescent liquid had been released, smiling Harman had poured it in the topmost glass till it overflowed and filled the symmetrical arrangement underneath. "Cheers!" he had tipped his glass to the company joining him and they had swigged at the amber liquid in unison. Soumya had watched all of it apathetically she had found the party rather unamusing her eyes scouring the room blandly. "Wanna join in" Harman had murmured handing her a glass "I don't drink" she had immediately denied the offer. "Soumya drink it!" this time he had ordered her, he could see dozens of eyes fixed on them each move they made was monitored and would be discussed and dissected after the party. He did not want her to come across as a middle class dunce on the contrary he had hoped to present her as a chic and elegant lady which he had succeeded in doing till yet.

Soumya had tried to deny yet again when he had thrust the wine glass in her hand and she had accepted it from him miserably hoping for a distraction. At the precise moment as a godsend Samaira had been upon them swaying lightly to the mellifluous music resounding in the hall. "Hello darling" she had leaned in to kiss Harman on the cheek while fire shot through Soumya's profile. "I see your new toy is quite feisty" she had complimented him on his choice. "Hello Samaira I see Mr Sehgol is missing... probably busy with his Russian counterpart" Harman had replied softly. Soumya could almost feel the heat emitting from Harman it felt as if he was scorching, Samaira on the other hand had smiled lazily. "Mr Sehgol is in safe hands" she had assured him laughing her tinkling laughter. Soumya had studied her carefully her milky skin was flawless, the lilac saree she wore had hand embroidery done on it the most intricate work in just the right amount. She had latched herself to Harman's arm "Hunny lets dance" she had coaxed him. "I think I already have a partner Samaira" he had held his arm out to Soumya who had gratefully slipped her hand in his. Putting her glass on a passing waiter's tray and leaving a jilted Samaira nursing her wounds they had left for the dance floor with her watching them venomously. Prior to Soumya's arrival Samaira had always successfully managed to instigate Harman to rash actions but tonight the tables had been turned. Tonight Harman had been profoundly at peace with Soumya by his side and that reflected in his calculated conversation with Samaira.

On reaching the dance floor Harman had held Soumya close to him, "Harman" she had whispered afraid that her voice may travel to unknown ears. "Hmm" he had mused looking at her "I can't dance" she had whispered again gravely repentant at her inability to do so. "It's ok", he had murmured close to her ear making her tremor with delight as his lips brushed against her ear shell. "Just follow my lead and try not to punish my feet" he had whispered kissing her ear tentatively a slow smile had settled on Soumya's lips as she had shyly met his searing gaze. She had tried to follow his steps her arms around his neck staying clear of his feet and he had chuckled as he noticed the concentration with which she performed the exercise. Samaira who had been thoroughly miffed by Harman's indifferent attitude to her had not given up on them, grabbing a young man from the crowd beside her she had joined them at the dance floor. Soumya had let out a soft moan on seeing Samaira beside them making Harman turn her in his arms watching her face intently "Don't let her get to you" he had warned her. "How can I when all she does is glower at me" Soumya had complained in soft tones causing Harman to fill her up in his arms as they moved to the rhythmic beats. Swaying her hips in perfect motion Samaira had appeared near them "I see you haven't lost your spark Harman... still can make a woman lose herself" Samaira had hit on him sarcastically. Harman's eyes though remained fixated on an apprehensive Soumya who had felt the emptiness seep in them, his grip on her waist had tightened making her understand Samaira had hit on a raw nerve.

"Well you've got ample experience... started so young... it's quite natural to have a knack for it by now" and that was the moment Harman's patience had snapped like a dry twig. Taking Soumya by the hand he had led her outside the ballroom in haste, Sharma had run after the fleeting couple in a rush. "Sir the party" he had attempted to remind Harman. "Handle it" Harman had barked before practically sprinting to the Audi, Monty who had just settled in for a nap had been rudely awakened from his dream when Harman had literally banged on the window. Startled he had jumped up and quickly rolled down the window clicking the locks open. Opening the back door Harman had practically shoved Soumya in the back seat "Monty take her home" he had ordered grimly "But master you.." he had tried to ask. "Don't argue Monty I'll come home myself" with that he had walked out of the parking lot leaving Soumya as flustered as Monty. "Monty where is he going?" Soumya had asked tears rolling down her cheeks "I have no clue madam" he had answered ruefully. "Monty let me go on my own you go after him" she had suggested when Monty had started the engine. "When master is angry I do not mess with him" he had explained rolling the car towards Singh mansion. Soumya was now sobbing openly she could not fathom why Samaira's remark had left him so broken what was it that his past held that had sliced through his soul leaving it bleeding to a silent death. Getting out of the car Soumya had begged Monty to go find him "Please Monty... please go find him" she had clasped her hands before the servant. "Madam do not embarrass it is my duty to get master safe at home and I will return only when I find him" with that Monty had left again. Soumya had headed to her room with heavy steps her eyes shedding countless tears she had quietly changed and sponged her face cleansing it of the makeup.

She had tried to remain enclosed within the confines of her room but had failed to do so taking to the lawns she had paced vigilantly. As the night grew deeper so had the silence, the house had become quiet all activities ended what had not stopped was the continual flow of salt water from her eyes. Minutes seemed like hours the wait threatening to choke her she prayed silently shivering as the wind had turned colder, the temperature dropping considerably yet she could not find it in her heart to stay within the luxury of her room while her husband scoured the streets. After what had seemed like an eternity she had sighted the twin lights of the Audi flash at the iron gates her heart had jumped to her throat and she had run to the marble steps awaiting him. Monty had gotten out at the threshold sprinting over to the other side he had helped a drunk and staggering Harman on his feet, placing his arm on his shoulder he had propped Harman against him. Soumya had lent Monty a hand and had ducked under Harman's other arm straightening him they had together hauled him up the stairs and reaching the bedroom had placed his limp body on the large bed. "Harman... Harman" Soumya had tried to awaken him from his unconscious state patting his cheeks gently. "Madam he is drunk you might as well let him sleep it off" Monty had advised soberly closing the door behind him as he exited the room.

The minute Monty had seen Samaira enter Carlton he had an intuition of some grave incident taking place and so it had been, he had found Harman at his favorite pub drunk to the core. Tonight his master had been hurt again at the hands of that witch how he hated the sight of her and hoped Soumya would heal the wounds his master's heart bore. As the silence had settled, the room echoed with Soumya's sobs "Harman... Harman.. Harman" she chanted rubbing his hands placing them against her heart. Till the moment he had walked away from her in the parking lot Soumya had been oblivious of the love that had spread roots in her heart for him, the minute he had turned his back on her had been the precise moment of enlightenment. She had taken off his shoes and socks, unfastened his belt and pulled it off lastly she had with some difficulty taken off his coat opening the top most buttons of his shirt she had tried to make him comfortable.

The movement had caused him to stir he had opened his red rimmed eyes to meet her dewy ones. "Harman" she had breathed softly overjoyed to see him come around he had pulled her to him enveloping her in a loose embrace. For the first time Soumya had felt herself becoming an important, an integral part of his life. "Harman" she had whispered encased in his arms and he had opened his drugged eyes to watch her with a sentiment she was unable to decipher. "Stay" he had requested and she had kissed his cheek with love "I'm right here... right here by you" she had assuaged him settling in his arms. Even though he reeked heavily of alcohol the ardor she had felt for herself in his eyes had made her snuggle up to him. She had lain awake for a very long time that night listening to his heart as it rhythmically thumped in his chest. Before her eyes had drooped close she had planted a tender kiss on his bare chest promising to herself to put an end to his misery soon.

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Edited by soul76 - 9 years ago

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