Tum Tak. HaYa FF Discontinued

soul76

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Supervampire
nyc storyline
now Harman is protect soumya
conti...

Thanks dear. Oh yes he will protect her 😊

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sparklingeyes

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Loved it...

Harman taking Saumya with him

Waiting for the next part

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soul76

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: sparklingeyes
Loved it...
Harman taking Saumya with him
Waiting for the next part

Thanks! 😃

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tooba ilyas

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Chapter 1 .. so happy to read a story ...

it was really adorable and the conversation between them was really sweet... Harman is such sweetheart man.. And soumiya .. Just like a flower.. So delicate...

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tooba ilyas

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Chapter 2..how cruel and so narrow minded people are they.. After leaving soumiya safely in her chawk he left only to witness such a drastic scene in front of him... Seeing his gulabo manhandled ...

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tooba ilyas

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Chapter 3... I really didn't like the turn of events in the show.. And glad that you changed it... Much better than it..mohinder tried to shoot soumiya but nimmi came in between.. Now she is badly injured.. She asked and took promise from Harman to make soumiya safe... Surbhi felt betrayed by her own father ... Harman .. Ohh such a adorable man .. To make soumiya Ta ease he was joking with her ... Update soon

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soul76

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: doll.12
Chapter 1 .. so happy to read a story ...
it was really adorable and the conversation between them was really sweet... Harman is such sweetheart man.. And soumiya .. Just like a flower.. So delicate...

Aw thanks dear. I find Soumya extremely gorgeous, and Harman is a charmer lol...

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soul76

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: doll.12
Chapter 2..how cruel and so narrow minded people are they.. After leaving soumiya safely in her chawk he left only to witness such a drastic scene in front of him... Seeing his gulabo manhandled ...

I wanted to show Harman involved. Though it did mirror what had been portrayed in the show as well but it was a necessity for my plot too.

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soul76

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: doll.12
Chapter 3... I really didn't like the turn of events in the show.. And glad that you changed it... Much better than it..mohinder tried to shoot soumiya but nimmi came in between.. Now she is badly injured.. She asked and took promise from Harman to make soumiya safe... Surbhi felt betrayed by her own father ... Harman .. Ohh such a adorable man .. To make soumiya Ta ease he was joking with her ... Update soon

I am glad you liked it. The show's marriage at break neck speed indicated future problems.. sigh. Atleast I can pen my own happy incidents in the ff lol!!!

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soul76

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Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: Amrtina
Awesome update

Thanks dear!!! 😊

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