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Originally posted by: sonalisharma1

Just loved the update

but ending tk aatey aatey heart beat badhaa di h Shreyuuu . . .

Next update jaldii s krnaa

Originally posted by: Nishtha

Thank you for update Shreyu.. 🤗

Coming to relationship that you potrayed here be it between Viresh and Varsha or Viresh and Raghav or Varsha and Raghav...marvelously done ...so hats off to you for that..

I can understand what it means to be Workaholic...I know my brother..he is like that only... and varsha worried about Viresh despite her own..health is something every loved ones do for you..but potrayed well..also I loved how you made her read Fault in our stars...lovely touch there and something new to any story/fanfic I read...

Like Sonu mentioned above..I am worried about Aman and his plans...but on the other hand I know...Viresh and Raghav are there..but still...Shreyu..cant wait for next update...

Love

Originally posted by: sammy4u

awesome part

vir and varsha are so cute

varsha listing things to vir to take eat properly, etc etc was so cute.

but why is she so tired to not have any food, i guess a bhukkad like me wont ever understand.😆

aman's wife should get rid of him for good...yeh acha hai, she should do job and look after the kid too, and yeh mahashay goes around being the ultimate chepad

iss baar vir ne nahi maara, but aman ki baatein sunn ke lag raha hai, bahut jald sahi dhulaayi hone wali hai aman ki

Originally posted by: aaradhaya1688

Loved it

Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: sandhiya_1195

Superb updates Shreya 👏

Loving it😊

Originally posted by: natashu

This Varsha man!

You can't starve or keel yourself over issues like that. It's better to communicate your fears and get them across to concerned people. This is hard and takes practice but it must be the only recourse!

I agree! That is truly what she needs to do! and I agree with that too, it is indeed hard.

This Aman - the lecher's not had enough, I presume? He needs his comeuppance. I mean proper comeuppance.

Hahha yup not had enough at all, and for the comeuppance hopefully he will get one.

Raghav-Varsha with the ice-cream though. Ice-cream always does bring out the child in us, hehe ;)

I agree always and always brings out the child in us. The fact that I haven't ice-cream for the past 3 months still haunts me. XD

And then who does she collide into but Mr. Cool 😳

Oh yeah of course has to collide into Mr. Nosy!😆

That bit of romance was just ooo le hawt hawt ☺️

OOO I am glad you like it!! OO I see blushin!!😆

Poor guy's a goner though. He read her private diary 😆

For sure!

Raghav's dialogues 🤣

The pink bunny energizer himself 🤣

You're a good girl HAHAHAHAHA.

😆hehehe

Alright so you've separated the two for a sequence comin' up, which I'm dreading...I really hope things do not go down the way they're lookin' *sighs*

Yup! Had to separate them I feel bad too. Well we'll see how it goes.

Here's hoping and praying we get rid of Aman fast!!

I hope and pray too