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Kaushitaki

@Penkie06

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: fictitious
Dev D! So it's a combination of a hot, happening, walking pandemonium and a cold, uninspiring sloth bear !

This Malayali is loving the Bengali touch all over the story.(I hope you're aware of the Bengali-Malayali connect) The appearances you've chosen are apt. Let's see how Dev D puts a smile on that grumpy face of Shayara !Why do I feel that you (or someone you know) went though that 'phone number on Facebook' fiasco in real?

I can actually feel the truth in your words 'This story is close to my heart' all over the story.
I won't or probably can't elaborate, but the lines carry the genuineness of an autobiography or biography!

I am not particularly aware of the Bengali Malayali connection! Fish and Rice is it? 😆 But I'm glad you like it.

You have caught it extremely right. If I can finish this story ever, it will definitely turn out to be an amalgamation of a number of life stories around or revolving me. And more than a story it will be my story or our story. Definitely not everyone will connect because not everything happens as we expect to, and because fact is stranger than fiction.

I just hope I don't lose interest midway.

Edited by Penfolk - 8 years ago

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Kaushitaki

@Penkie06

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Pooja... I hope to clear your confusions someday.

Tweetie and Rachna. Thanks for peeping in without a pm on my part. Thanks a lot.

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Bond_7

@Bond_7

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Hey Kaushi, thanks a lot for the PM! 😃

I've read the prologue and it's interesting! Will read the updates soon.

I never commented on the previous stories of yours, but I really loved them. You are an awesome writer! Quite happy that you've come up with this one. It's a bliss to read any number of stories on Pranushka, not a burden! 😊

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hasi.83

@hasi.83

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

A good start chotti... Keep rocking asusual... 👏 👏 👏

Will wait for your next part... 😊

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shreya

@shreyj7

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Thank you so much for the Pm. Kaushi Ji

Omg me and Shayara totally relate in the morning haha my family ks the same but I dont have a brother..😆

The update was amazing as always😃

Sooo... I see Devrath Dixit huhh is that chocolate boy everyone loves interesting

Eager to see what magic he does in Shayara 's life😛

Cant wait for the next update😊😊

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natashu

@natashu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

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Kaushitaki

@Penkie06

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Bindu.
Hey Kaushi, thanks a lot for the PM! 😃
I've read the prologue and it's interesting! Will read the updates soon.

I never commented on the previous stories of yours, but I really loved them. You are an awesome writer! Quite happy that you've come up with this one. It's a bliss to read any number of stories on Pranushka, not a burden! 😊

Yes I know you read my previous stories. 😆

Glad that you decided to read this too...if I continue.

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Kaushitaki

@Penkie06

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: shreyj7
Thank you so much for the Pm. Kaushi Ji
Omg me and Shayara totally relate in the morning haha my family ks the same but I dont have a brother..😆
The update was amazing as always😃
Sooo... I see Devrath Dixit huhh is that chocolate boy everyone loves interesting
Eager to see what magic he does in Shayara 's life😛
Cant wait for the next update😊😊

Shayara's exist here and there. 😆😆

Not everyone has a brother to add to the irritations, I know. 😆

Devrath isn't typically chocolate, but yes...unlike Shayara who feels at times that nobody loves her (or maybe that's true even), Devrath never thinks that way.

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Kaushitaki

@Penkie06

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: natashu
I like the way you're setting up the stage with the introductions of the two leads -- Devrath's entry was awesome! I love Sonu Nigam's album songs and 'Deewana tera' is a huge favourite of mine -- I don't normally like to listen to new, remixed versions (they always ruin the essence of the song), but I may give it a try on your recommendation (:

Actually I have been listening to this song now. It's got a typical concert feel. Although many other bollywood songs have the same feel and are actually better, I used this just due to the recent addiction.