My Boyfriend's Best Friend : A PrAnushka FF/ Part 4 Page 8 - Page 6

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Posted: 8 years ago
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I love the way u connect ur characters to each other...and plz don't think of dropping this FF...it's getting so interesting 😳
So Dev already knows Shayara even before Parth came into the picture...and looks like he has some feelings for her as well ☺️

Looking forward to see what happens next...thanks for the pm Kaushi 👍🏼
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I learnt from my mum that it's good to have feelings.
Thanks Kaushi for writing this sentence. I always keep on reminding myself the same, only to nosedive even further.

Coming to the story, the stage has been brilliantly set, like a Maestro conducting an opera.

Shayara and Devrath are such confused, emotional souls - they could only fill the jigsaw puzzles in their lives and hearts. Parth is just a catalyst here, at least that's what I will believe.

Shayara had saved Ankita, that's how an unknown bond had formed between Shayara and Devrath.

And now he knows and sees who she is.

BTW, DS will always remain those sols, always searching for something more in life, far away from the usual trappings. I so recognise them in me, a small part though.

Now hurry up with the next scribbled piece. 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Shubha... we have only known that Dev knew Shayara. Because her favour was far beyond just a favour. And then there's music. We don't know if it's a vice versa.😆

Tweetie, darling I thank you so much for provoking me a little. I love when read my stuffs. Let's are how far I can stretch though.😉

Shreya... love you darling! You are such a sweetheart! Thank you for encouraging me every time with everything I jot down. Love you loads!🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: poetic

I learnt from my mum that it's good to have feelings.

Thanks Kaushi for writing this sentence. I always keep on reminding myself the same, only to nosedive even further.

Coming to the story, the stage has been brilliantly set, like a Maestro conducting an opera.

Shayara and Devrath are such confused, emotional souls - they could only fill the jigsaw puzzles in their lives and hearts. Parth is just a catalyst here, at least that's what I will believe.

Shayara had saved Ankita, that's how an unknown bond had formed between Shayara and Devrath.

And now he knows and sees who she is.

BTW, DS will always remain those sols, always searching for something more in life, far away from the usual trappings. I so recognise them in me, a small part though.

Now hurry up with the next scribbled piece. 😃


The line is from a song. I hate you I love you.😛

Definitely , DS have inspired us a lot in these few months. I owe a lot to them .

Thank you beyond words . Will try to pen down real fast.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: natashu

Drop the FF? heck, nooo. Never. We need to travel the road with Shayara-Dev!


This Parth ugh. The manner in which he speaks, the way he check off his relationships as if they're mere things on a list - such a shallow person. Iski toh! *le punches him*

Dev's feelings brought to mind this other character I was watching on a TV show recently -- he loves his craft as much as Dev, but ends up losing a part of himself when others around him try to milk his fame. I hope to god Dev won't be taken advantage of!

Dev's such a cutie though - I could picture this guy in my head 😳

Almost skipped the *six years back* note for the following part and thought WHAAAT IS HAPPENING. The effect was jarring but my your writing is cinematic. And my god, Shayara the saviour -- Dev's got much to thank for and more.

mere dil mein tu basi hai, phir bhi mujhse ajnabee hai
keh rahi hai ab toh doori, tujhse milna hai zaroori

The above are a few lines that came to mind whilst reading this one ☺️

Natasha ...a big hug. You have no idea how much I wait for your comments!
Well... Dev is something different. You'll see. Emotional but not a fool.😉

Those lines... lovely!

Do drop in and keep pushing me okay?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very nice update Kaushi 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you so much Sandhya!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Shayara with guitar and voice...but now ?...hmm..



Waiting for the next one...

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