'Cause You Said I Can!' : PrAnushka SS: Update- Part 24 |Pg 72 |Nov 03 - Page 7

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: bahubalifan

Chapter 4 :

She was so casual and cool with him usually girls will be so conscious when around handsome and attractive guys iyer amma can't be bothered. She is unique ! 😳

This sayali !! I want to smack her at the same time hug also ! Such a drama queen!! 😆 I think you should introduce a face for her! Seeing her craziness and crush for Sidd I think T would be apt to be Sayali 😉

Sidd's care for Madhu when Sayali hit her 😳

I sat in between a pot bellied lion and a 8 yr kid with rubix cube but you flew down with a handsome hunk... eat,drank and SLEPT WITH HIM!!! 🤣🤣🤣 This cracked me up !!

Her hyena laughter 😆

Oh poor girl freaked out !! Sayali !! Gggrrr !!!! I would have slapped her hard ! 😡 So embarrassing too with so many people watching her and ahem ... ahem Sidd ! Oh no !!

Chapter 5:

Weird reason ?? Lizard is weird reason for him ??? Gggrrr!!! 😡 He will know if something he is so scared of is thrown on his face !!

He handed her the bag and she shamelessly took it ... ohh !! But good or else Madhu would have become jejjamma 1. For refusing food, 2. Refusing stuff given by her special someone 😳

He bought it for her...( I am blushing hard ! ) 😆

His telepathic radar sniffed her presence ... ahaan! 😉

It is not wink it is WINK so strong enough to kill us.. 🤔

Why make films when he could be the hero ?? Factu factu factu... 🤣🤣 so now I know why the camera in your minimalist poster this fella has a passion for filmmaking. Good ! 👏

The last bit...😭 "she's Meryln Siddu's girlfriend" 😭 this also I could tolerate but them both engaged in deep conversations uuurrggghhh I just can't take it ! My heart just broke !!! 😭 😭 😭 Poor girl she had just started developing feelings for that dunna and look at him !!! Gggrrr!!!! I want to smash the mirror, break the windows !!! I want to call Harsh now !!!! I don't want to live !!!!! ... 😆

But this is different from the usual hero falls for heroine story. Very good ! 👏I am sure Sidd will find his way to Madhu she is his true love. He already has a "thing" for Madhu 😳 Merlyn, you get lost go find some Jackson for yourself don't come in between Madhu-Sid else be prepared to get savakku kattai treatment from all here !!!! 😡

Pls pls pls update next part soon! I want to know more about Sidd n Merlyn. He introducing her to Madhu and she fuming inside. Merlyn finds a better chap and ditches Sidd who wails like a baby and Madhu lends her lap where he puts his thalai 😳

Thank you so much the pm dear ! 👍🏼



Priya you know what? While reading your comment I feel the same way Madhu does when she is talking to Sid! 😆 Love you loads for picking up every tiny bit of my writing! 🤗

And yeah! Though I had no plans of introducing a face for Sayali when I started, as the story progressed I too felt Tamannaah or Tapsee could be a good choice. But I think I'll go ahead with Tam as she has a similar equation with our main people already. Someone you feel like squishing and hitting at the same time !😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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A very eventful update Subha, lots of things happening at the same time.
Liked the cute interaction between Madhu and Harsh, they are such good friends.

And then the photo of the moon clicked by Sid, and his showing the same to Madhu. And all the talk about Sariska . Love!

Makes me want to go to the trip itself.

Hope Jaidev recovers and out not-so-sure lovebirds find some time to spend together, a wee bit alone

'Thanks Subha 😊 Pl update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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The story is getting more and more interesting now
Loved the update
She should have not lied
But alas the story has to go on
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Jesus! Epileptic attacks! Such people should not just travel alone!
I love the brewing up of the story! Neat. Though I may soon get confused with the amount of characters being introduced, I hope I don't!

So Nazneen does have a good knowledge of first aid!!

And why do I feel you yourself recently attended such a camp?

Amongst everything, it's good to have little conversations of Madhu and Sid. As you said this isn't typically a romantic story... I'm liking it even more.

Because very surprisingly speaking ...
" I hate love stories! "
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: poetic

A very eventful update Subha, lots of things happening at the same time.

Liked the cute interaction between Madhu and Harsh, they are such good friends.

And then the photo of the moon clicked by Sid, and his showing the same to Madhu. And all the talk about Sariska . Love!

Makes me want to go to the trip itself.

Hope Jaidev recovers and out not-so-sure lovebirds find some time to spend together, a wee bit alone

'Thanks Subha😊Pl update soon



I myself wish to go on such a camp Rachna! Maybe you could say this story happened because of my love for exploration! And I'm someone who failed miserably after trying to capture moon! :D

And thank you.! Updating the next part soon :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: aaradhaya1688

<font color="#990033">The story is getting more and more interesting now</font>

<font color="#990033">Loved the update</font>
<font color="#990033">She should have not lied</font>
<font color="#990033">But alas the story has to go on</font>
<font color="#990033">Thanks for the pm</font>



Yeah she shouldn't have lied. 😭 Let's see if she gets a chance to fix that.
Thank you ! :)
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Originally posted by: Penfolk

Jesus! Epileptic attacks! Such people should not just travel alone!

I love the brewing up of the story! Neat. Though I may soon get confused with the amount of characters being introduced, I hope I don't!

So Nazneen does have a good knowledge of first aid!!

And why do I feel you yourself recently attended such a camp?

Amongst everything, it's good to have little conversations of Madhu and Sid. As you said this isn't typically a romantic story... I'm liking it even more.

Because very surprisingly speaking ...
" I hate love stories! "



Haha high five! I'd say it's almost impossible for me to handle something very gooey romantic. Just not my cup of tea. And cheesy dialogues make me cringe. I can probably never create anything from scratch. All my works are inspired by some tiny element that I saw or experienced in my real life. Sometimes it could be a simple photograph.

And no I did not attend a camp,but that made me really happy. It makes me feel that things sounded authentic.There was a conscious effort for that. But I'll tell you, I have travelled quite a lot. And do a lot of research. My best friend and I discuss about these things day and night. Few incidents like Hello 6E are from my own life. I'd been to just one part of Rajasthan and it bowled me over. And I tried to do a research for my next trip.

And I promise not to confuse the readers any further. I'm trying my best to etch the characters that need to be remembered, properly. Some characters are there just for the sake of it :) A camp after all!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Subha,
Your updates are always interesting!😊 Loved this one as well. Madhu,Siddu,Merlyn..all of them are really sweet! Harsh is something else,altogether,love him the most!🤣

Love Nazreen's character too..quite relatable!👍🏼

I thought Siddu too had a crush on Madhu looking at his concern but "He is taken" surprised me! Eager to know what have you planned for them!😊

Thanks for the PM!😊

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