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sandhiya_1195

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Posted: 8 years ago

#81

Subha👏

Love the way you write...The flow of the story and the bond among characters is so well portrayed 😳

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rajkamal02

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Posted: 8 years ago

#82

Read all the chapters...loving it... eagerly waiting for next chapters..look forward to Harshit/Madhu interactions...premise reminds me slightly of Yeh Jawaani movie...but since I don't like Ranbir didn't enjoy the movie much...but this story is cute/sweet all rolled to one...

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fictitious

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Posted: 8 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: rajkamal02
Read all the chapters...loving it... eagerly waiting for next chapters..look forward to Harshit/Madhu interactions...premise reminds me slightly of Yeh Jawaani movie...but since I don't like Ranbir didn't enjoy the movie much...but this story is cute/sweet all rolled to one...

Hello Rajkamal!

So happy to have you reading the story and a thanks a lot for your lovely feedback.

And you know what? I'm surprised that nobody noticed/mentioned the similarity with Yeh Jawani before, as it is a very popular movie.😆 It was surprisingly coincidental though. Guess its because of the camp, friendship and disturbed girl lead.

This story was actually penned for my best friend few months back. We'd visited a fort in Rajasthan together last December, made up our mind to explore it fully again and started researching on google about places and camps. But we got stuck in our lives without time for leisure,so I decided to vent the frustration out by writing this with my best friend as the lead.(in place of Madhu)

An article about Sariska was my primary trigger.

Later when this PrAnushka craze started, I modified it for them.But as the story shaped up I felt that it bears lot of resemblances to Yeh Jawani. Last week I watched the movie again, to avoid similarities as far as possible ! :D In fact I'd to cut few sequence that I'd planned.

Thanks again for your support! Looking forward to it in future too :) Next chapter will be up tomorrow.😊

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fictitious

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Posted: 8 years ago

#84

Rachna, Kaushi, Aaradhya, Bindu and Sandhiya.. You guys are! ❤️

Meenamma very excited to have you here!🤗

It's very much a simple story, but digs a little deeper into the emotional aspect ! Just trying to convey something positive through each of the characters!

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shreya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#85

Ok ok

I am very sorry to be so late I did not have time yesterday whenever I came to my laptop some work started coming in front of me.

but the update Subha ji it was awesome..😊

What email did Madhumita get that made her cry so badly????😭

That was nice of Siddhant to stay back and take care of Jaidev😃

Thank you so much for the PM.⭐️

Thank you for updating so regularly.

and as always can't wait for the next update😃

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bahubalifan

@bahubalifan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#86

Chapter 6

Sidhu-Merlyn, Sidhu-Merlyn... gggrrr !!! 😡

Yup pls do that bro !! Just woo Merlyn and get her out of Sid's life!! He belongs to Madhu !

Sid the sloth ( ice age ) he is a sloth for not falling in love with Madhu.

Madhu: I wish I had a camera like yours.
Sid: Just ask me if you want anything to be clicked.
Madhu: Click a pic of yourself and give me, I'll give it to some spell caster and make sure you ditch that girl and fall head over heals for me !!

Yeah boyfriend ... why do you care da dunna ? Go go to your Merlyn.

You know how dangerous she can get if she is angry - John... Arya right ? 😉 this role fits him like a glove.

Oh dear it's epilepsy for Jai ! 😲 How did he travel alone ?? He was busy texting someone before he collapsed could it be due to that stress ??

And Naz saves the day ! 👏

I feel there is going to be more than one love story. Too many young guys and girls 😉😆

Chapter 7

Aaawww Sid my sloth touched the heart again !! 😳 He stayed back to be with Jai how sweet ❤️

That was a cute bond between Jai and Sid. Wish to know how their camaraderie evolves into a lifelong friendship. 👍🏼

She is impressed by the way they carry their relationship ... ohh Madhu don't be so nice ! Do something, make him fall for you !!

Oh so Sid paiyaa does get angry when someone pulls her legs !! What is the use ?? Go da go to your Merlyn.

'Found a new partner' Yeanda Nee therinji pesuriya theriyama pesuriya da ?? 😡

She cried and that hurt him... Ahaan !! 😉 Very good very good 👏

But why did Madhu cry ?? Something happened to her parents or her dad chose a guy for her ??
😭

Ohh how I want this to continue... I want all 8 of them as friends for life including Harsh of course Sid-Madhu become a couple. 😳😆 Thank you for the pm Subha ! Waiting for the next part.

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fictitious

@fictitious

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Posted: 8 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: bahubalifan
Chapter 6

Sidhu-Merlyn, Sidhu-Merlyn... gggrrr !!! 😡

Yup pls do that bro !! Just woo Merlyn and get her out of Sid's life!! He belongs to Madhu !

Sid the sloth ( ice age ) he is a sloth for not falling in love with Madhu.

Madhu: I wish I had a camera like yours.
Sid: Just ask me if you want anything to be clicked.
Madhu: Click a pic of yourself and give me, I'll give it to some spell caster and make sure you ditch that girl and fall head over heals for me !!

Yeah boyfriend ... why do you care da dunna ? Go go to your Merlyn.

You know how dangerous she can get if she is angry - John... Arya right ? 😉 this role fits him like a glove.

Oh dear it's epilepsy for Jai ! 😲 How did he travel alone ?? He was busy texting someone before he collapsed could it be due to that stress ??

And Naz saves the day ! 👏

I feel there is going to be more than one love story. Too many young guys and girls 😉😆

Chapter 7

Aaawww Sid my sloth touched the heart again !! 😳 He stayed back to be with Jai how sweet ❤️

That was a cute bond between Jai and Sid. Wish to know how their camaraderie evolves into a lifelong friendship. 👍🏼

She is impressed by the way they carry their relationship ... ohh Madhu don't be so nice ! Do something, make him fall for you !!

Oh so Sid paiyaa does get angry when someone pulls her legs !! What is the use ?? Go da go to your Merlyn.

'Found a new partner' Yeanda Nee therinji pesuriya theriyama pesuriya da ?? 😡

She cried and that hurt him... Ahaan !! 😉 Very good very good 👏

But why did Madhu cry ?? Something happened to her parents or her dad chose a guy for her ??
😭

Ohh how I want this to continue... I want all 8 of them as friends for life including Harsh of course Sid-Madhu become a couple. 😳😆 Thank you for the pm Subha ! Waiting for the next part.