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Posted: 8 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: cosmosandme

<font size="2"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Hello Shubha ... 🤗</font></font>
<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">The FF you have written iis no less than a treat. Simple, sweet and very much relatable. What I really like and enjoy about the FF is the perfectly etched imperfect characters. They all are pure delight to imagine. Specially madhu 😆 Fear of lizards and passion for a dreamy subject like astronomy ! That makes her unique indeed and you too for finding such striking combination. 😃Harsh is like that cool friend whom we call when we goof up on something and expect to get consolation, but what we get is an irritating reply ! The duo are simply adorable. The cool "bros". I really loved this reply of harsh </font>

<font color="#336600" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Who knows, this time next year you might be busy cooking Puliyodharai for some Ambi your Dad got you married to! 😆😆
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<font color="#000000">Actually entire conversation in the first chapter is so entertaining. </font><font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">
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<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Sayali is also giving tough competition to the two in entertainment. So much research on someone she hasn't even met. She sounds like me 😆</font>

<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Siddhant is like a boy next door, caring, observant and so far putting up with sayali well.😆
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<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">The "hello sexy" mishearing cracked me up. You know what one of my friends too had misheard "hello 6E" as that. 😃
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<font color="#000000">So far I am loving the story and all characters, Please update the next part soon since I am very impatient kind ! Lots of love </font><font size="2">🤗</font>





Come here and take my kidneys already! 😭 What a delightful comment! You already know what you're to me.
Actually I've drawn a lot of inspiration from people around me to create the characters. And I guess that's the reason why you found them perfectly etched imperfect ones! Thank you for that line!

It's refreshing to see people who've taken up a subject that's totally uncommon yet exciting. I respect everyone who did that. It's not easy to choose an off beaten path.

And you know what? I myself heard Hello Sexy while on an indigo. That's where it came from! 😃 Id like to have that friend of yours read this!

And I need your comment under every part of mine. Call it a demand! 😆 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: sandhiya_1195

That was outstanding Subhaji👏



Thanks for being a constant here Sandhiya! I'll always look forward to your comments!

Just a request. Please don't call me Subha Ji. Subha is what I like 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#53
Wow !
Wonderful update subha... Sid is such a caring guy and also not so subtle, our madhu could easily understand his gesture, 😉
and why this guy is committed !!! 😭😭
But it will be very interesting to see how they both fall for each other. Considering madhu's reaction, she seems already infatuated !
Waiting impatiently for the next update 😳
lots of love and please update soon

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: bahubalifan

Siddhant Johnson... Christian father and Hindu mother so no issues for acceptance at his side. Madhu's excitement when she knew his mom is tamil. 😆

Oh her friend Sayali is checking him out !! I hope they don't strike a cord. Sayali is the flirty kind but seems like Sid is the more serious when it comes to relationships. I am getting this vibe that he is seeing someone or had a heartbreak. 😕

She wanted to send a 'I don't want to live' msg again to Harsh. 🤣

And comes the clown of their life ! Naveen ! Fake accent, striking neon shirt, colour bomb, shameless smile... 🤣🤣 He seems to be more whacko than Harsh !! Oh boy !! 😆

And her hyena laughter😳 Yeah they should smile more often for each other, at each other! 😳

This was funny. Thanks for the pm ! Looking forward to the next part.




Everything began with you Priya! Thanks for holding my finger and bringing me on to this IF platform literally! 😃

I love love love reading your comments. You're the one who captures and mentions exactly the same areas that I enjoyed writing the most. Nothing goes unnoticed by you! 😳 Your comments are oxygen!

Desperately waiting to know how you liked parts 4 and 5!

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Posted: 8 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: fictitious




Come here and take my kidneys already! 😭 What a delightful comment! You already know what you're to me.
Actually I've drawn a lot of inspiration from people around me to create the characters. And I guess that's the reason why you found them perfectly etched imperfect ones! Thank you for that line!

It's refreshing to see people who've taken up a subject that's totally uncommon yet exciting. I respect everyone who did that. It's not easy to choose an off beaten path.

And you know what? I myself heard Hello Sexy while on an indigo. That's where it came from! 😃 Id like to have that friend of yours read this!

And I need your comment under every part of mine. Call it a demand! 😆 😛



Well isn't that why I am here !!! You make that work easier by posting such lovely updates. All I have to do in return is simply comment , an effortless task for a writer like you. 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#56
A cute and pleasant chapter Subha😳
And he's taken😲 Not at all done...

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Posted: 8 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: sandhiya_1195

A cute and pleasant chapter Subha😳

And he's taken😲Not at all done...



Sandhiya.. thank you! Let's see what Madhu has planned though. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#58
Chapter 4 :

She was so casual and cool with him usually girls will be so conscious when around handsome and attractive guys iyer amma can't be bothered. She is unique ! 😳

This sayali !! I want to smack her at the same time hug also ! Such a drama queen!! 😆 I think you should introduce a face for her! Seeing her craziness and crush for Sidd I think T would be apt to be Sayali 😉

Sidd's care for Madhu when Sayali hit her 😳

I sat in between a pot bellied lion and a 8 yr kid with rubix cube but you flew down with a handsome hunk... eat,drank and SLEPT WITH HIM!!! 🤣🤣🤣 This cracked me up !!

Her hyena laughter 😆

Oh poor girl freaked out !! Sayali !! Gggrrr !!!! I would have slapped her hard ! 😡 So embarrassing too with so many people watching her and ahem ... ahem Sidd ! Oh no !!

Chapter 5:

Weird reason ?? Lizard is weird reason for him ??? Gggrrr!!! 😡 He will know if something he is so scared of is thrown on his face !!

He handed her the bag and she shamelessly took it ... ohh !! But good or else Madhu would have become jejjamma 1. For refusing food, 2. Refusing stuff given by her special someone 😳

He bought it for her...( I am blushing hard ! ) 😆

His telepathic radar sniffed her presence ... ahaan! 😉

It is not wink it is WINK so strong enough to kill us.. 🤔

Why make films when he could be the hero ?? Factu factu factu... 🤣🤣 so now I know why the camera in your minimalist poster this fella has a passion for filmmaking. Good ! 👏

The last bit...😭 "she's Meryln Siddu's girlfriend" 😭 this also I could tolerate but them both engaged in deep conversations uuurrggghhh I just can't take it ! My heart just broke !!! 😭 😭 😭 Poor girl she had just started developing feelings for that dunna and look at him !!! Gggrrr!!!! I want to smash the mirror, break the windows !!! I want to call Harsh now !!!! I don't want to live !!!!! ... 😆

But this is different from the usual hero falls for heroine story. Very good ! 👏I am sure Sidd will find his way to Madhu she is his true love. He already has a "thing" for Madhu 😳 Merlyn, you get lost go find some Jackson for yourself don't come in between Madhu-Sid else be prepared to get savakku kattai treatment from all here !!!! 😡

Pls pls pls update next part soon! I want to know more about Sidd n Merlyn. He introducing her to Madhu and she fuming inside. Merlyn finds a better chap and ditches Sidd who wails like a baby and Madhu lends her lap where he puts his thalai 😳

Thank you so much the pm dear ! 👍🏼
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Posted: 8 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: fictitious

Everything began with you Priya! Thanks for holding my finger and bringing me on to this IF platform literally! 😃

I love love love reading your comments. You're the one who captures and mentions exactly the same areas that I enjoyed writing the most. Nothing goes unnoticed by you! 😳 Your comments are oxygen!

Desperately waiting to know how you liked parts 4 and 5!



My pleasure Subha !! Your style of writting is witty and humorous just the way I like it. Thank you so much !! 😉 😆 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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^^ last bit of yours reminded me soo much of ADHM. Ayaan Sanger being ditched by that angrezi chiriya and Alizeh supporting the crier! Such a baby!!!

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