'Cause You Said I Can!' : PrAnushka SS: Update- Part 24 |Pg 72 |Nov 03 - Page 55

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Tilottamaa

I know you're not happy! Beat me, kick me, kill me, bury me!

But please do not cremate me, for I plan to resurrect and pen down their happiness one day!


Okay now out of all the very many touching lines you penned, i chose to pick up these two. Why? Just as an evidence to my small observation - that both, Mrs. Shailaja Johnson and Ms. Madhumita Ramanathan, has inherited their unique sense of humor from you! Not many authors can come with a request like this, after putting up such a sensational update, you see! 😆



I would not delve into the nitty-gritty of who's right and who's not, nor would I say I was surprised at the sudden revamped version of Santa, but I would applaud for etching a father like Mr. Ramanathan for Madhu. The two of them have much in common - be it stubbornness, or the strength to oppose dearest ones!



The rest of it, precisely the separation, was as sublime as their meeting. They'd met and bonded so smoothly, that even when they've broken apart it doesn't exactly seem like they've indeed done so; that's the beauty of your story telling! I would just love to go with the flow of it, and take things as they come.


Thanks for this lovely update,

Adwitiya! 😃


P.S: Question 1: Ramanathan Gopala Iyer - which is the name and which part is the surname?🤓

Question 2: I can figure out somewhat, but anyhow, what does the words "poguma" and "erungo" mean? 😊



Hehe !! Thank you, Adwi! This comment makes me blush like a girl in love ! 🤣 The update had been an emotional one, so I was feeling a little goofy at the end hence the disclaimer. Hope it eased things!

Ramanathan is quite a multi layered person. I wanted to expose him slowly, with the flow of the story. I do have a rough sketch, hope that I manage to give it a proper form.

And like always, kudos for catching the not-so-obvious. Like similarity between the father and daughter, who superficially seem poles apart!

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* Ramanathan is his first name/real name. 'Gopala' comes from his father's first name Gopalan. And Iyer, is the caste name! 😊 If Ramanathan had a son ABC, he would be ABC Ramanatha Iyer.

** I think Hasi already answered the question Poguma and Erungo.

Sorry that you'd to ask ! 😊I'd actually planned to add translations for the chapter, but forgot! I'm doing them hereon! 😊

I love your curiosity!



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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: PriyaSweety-Anu

Thanks for Update,Dear.😊

I'm so sorry for late comment,Little bit Busy..
The Poster was so Nice.😊
The lines were Heart-Touching.😭
It was so Painful Part.😭
Madhu asked Siddharth to convince her Parents,it was nice.😊
Siddharth tried to Convince them but they didn't.😭
They are giving importance to their Society and Tradition,it was so sad.😭
Siddharth easily give up and wanted to convince her,it was so sad.😭
Siddharth fear also justified at his point of view.😭
Madhu became angry and broken that no one supporting her including Siddharth,it was so sad.😭
Siddharth also became broken of leaving Madhu like this..😭😭
It was so sad to see Siddharth and Madhu like this..😭😭
I hope everything will be fine.😊
Please Continue soon.😊
PriyaSweety-Anu


I guess it's the first time I'm seeing so many crying emojis in your reply! Beautiful souls like you deserve to smile, laugh and giggle. Everything will be fine.

Thank you and I really really love you! ❤️❤️❤️

You're precious to all of us! 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: NandhuPabsu_23

Such an emotional update...hope they patch up and v get to see a romantic update of them


Happy that you chose to comment on this one! Hope to see you around often! 😊
Things will definitely be fine! 😊

And pls do tell me what to call you!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: GHT_ArMan

😭😭😭

Love the story..loved the way you conveyed everything...I understand real life is not like a fairy tale... update soon dear❤️


Thank you!😊 Updating today!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: aaradhaya1688

That was such a blow to my gut

It made me cry
But i understand this is how our communities work
Loved the update
Thanks for the pm


Thank you Aaradhya! 😊😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Penfolk

The best part of this story is the reality.

The wavelengths the protagonists travel are too real to be even a story. Like, not every hero stands before heroine's dad and says, " dilwale toh dulhaniya leke hi jayenge!!! "

Some heroes step back, fight their own battles, and let go.

Siddhant is the best character in this story, for me. Because we find women like Madhu in many stories, but Siddhants occur in real lives.

Not that Madhu is unreal, but Madhu is an ideal protagonist, again, to me only. A bit arrogant for love, ready to run away for love, not that real girls aren't that way, they are, very much, but most protagonists are too. And thus while a reader craves for something fresh, it's Siddhant to me.

I think I am not clear.


You ARE clear! In fact, very clear to me!

I think more than being fresh, its about being distinguishable from the rest. Siddhant easily stands out among the men. But all four girls of the story are kind of similar- caring, fun loving and enthusiastic. Madhumita is everything that they are, but she is a little more too. It's that difference, howsoever minute, that made Siddhant feel for her what he hasn't felt for Merlyn.

The fact that this story is told mainly from Madhumita's POV, is the main reason that makes Siddhant special, I'd say. Siddhant's qualities and greatness could be categorically described, while Madhumita's need to unfold with the flow subtly. Madhu is bound to look like the normal and confused one, because this is basically her story, driven forward by Siddhant. She is the subject, and he is the change. 😊




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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sonalisharma1

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font color="#990000">So... what do you want, Siddhant? "</font>He questioned, beaming through his glasses.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">If Siddhant had a choice to be honest, he would have just asked for that cup of coffee, the permission to sleep on any of their beds, wake up after hours and leave without a fuss. But he had a loathsome task to execute.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">With a man who looked like a lion ready to pounce, Siddhant was to discuss the prospect of marrying his daughter!</font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">These lines , lion , lioness reference , Siddhant's inner feeling superbly written . </font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Now waiting for what Madhu will do in upcoming update . .</font>




Thankoo! I think too enjoyed writing that part! 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: elle..

No no no..this cant be it..you can not tag your past along everytime..sometimes you have to just let go...not only this story but also in ppl's lives...



He will let it go at a point, we need to see what takes him to that point! :)
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: MeenuCrazyPanda

You know what.. I understand Madhu.. siddhu can go to hell..



Let Madhu marry harshu.. and Let them live happily ever after..

And Let Siddhu pluck leaves in Himalayan forests..

Tata.. Bye bye.. Cya..






🤣 🤣 Meenamma, you're a cutie!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: hasi.83



Wow nice meenu... siddhu is same jalebi...

😡 😡



Jalebi Baai!
By the thank you for helping Tilottama with the Tamil words. I was slow as usual :P

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