'Cause You Said I Can!' : PrAnushka SS: Update- Part 24 |Pg 72 |Nov 03

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natashu

@natashu

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#531

Chapter 23:

That was...heart-breaking, to say the least.

Siddhant's fears are rightly placed, as are Madhu's feelings. I'm not sure who to side with because they both have coalesced into one for me.

Separations aren't easy to write but they're natural for the story woven by the author in place.

These are your characters, with their respective background histories, and personage; it's the situations they battle and ultimately win over that drives the game.

They'll steel their hearts, but I do wonder how you'll re-unite the two -- your story is a whole lot more than meets the eye!

Looking forward to what plays out next for these two (:

Edited by natashu - 7 years ago

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MeenuCrazyPanda

@MeenuCrazyPanda

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Posted: 7 years ago

#532

Originally posted by: Kairalove55

😆 ... Sorry, but love this comment so much 😆 ...

thank you so much.. 😆

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MeenuCrazyPanda

@MeenuCrazyPanda

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Posted: 7 years ago

#533

Originally posted by: hasi.83

Wow nice meenu... siddhu is same jalebi...

😡 😡

Jelebi oh idiyappam oh.. ethukum oru limit iruku.. Oru pulla manasula aasaya vedachitu.. ippo po na? Kovam varum thaney.. 😡😡

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sandhiya_1195

@sandhiya_1195

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Posted: 7 years ago

#534

Hey Subha !!!

Such an emotional and powerful update 👍🏼

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fictitious

@fictitious

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#535

Originally posted by: Tilottamaa

That was extremely thoughtful of you! Thank you so much for this valuable input! 😃

@underlined... Such sweet compliments! Here's a hug for you 🤗... Let me live up to these sweet compliments, and here's the next query : what's a "davani"?

And yeah, thanks to the festivities and other mundanes, I haven't commented on the last few chapter, but would surely catch up, once the upcoming one is updated! 😃

Adwitiya.

Sorry that I'm replying after centuries, as always!

Davani or Half Saree is the three piece traditional wear of Tamil women. ( A blouse, skirt and a dupatta). You must have seen Deepika wearing them in Chennai Express! Incl her intro scene! 😊

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fictitious

@fictitious

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#536

Originally posted by: .LovelyDreamer.
I hate you Subha.. for making me teary eyes.. 😭😭😭
I literally crying reading ur words...
Whom I should support.. Siddhu or Madhu.. Oh No...

Update super Subha..
Cant wait for next update...
love it.. Love ya...Hugs

I love you too Anbu! I'm posting the next update after I'm done replying to the comments!

I hope to wipe those tears away soon!😊

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fictitious

@fictitious

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#537

Originally posted by: Kairalove55
😭 ..
I seriously don't know where to start and wat to type.. I read this update today early morning and literally cried at the end... after that I jus reserved the space to make my comment later as I was left blank at that moment..

Ok, I must say that I understand now y it took so long for you to update this chapter.. this really needs lot of time to pen down all the emotions so beautifully the way you do... everytime I used to say that you are so good in writing and bringing life to your characters and this time also you proved it 👏 ...

Now coming to the story, I was thinking that this will happen for sure.. that's y to confirm I was bugging you .. and sorry for that.. 😃
can understand Siddhu's pain and his past has major impact on him and that's the reason he was hesistant.. but one thing was not going well wth me.. if he was not so sure, atleast he could have told everything during Madhu's proposal.. instead giving small hopes to her through his gestures and revealing his part at this point of time makes me to take Madhu's side(my POV ) 😃

And Ramanathan, I have doubt on him from beginning 😆 ... he is right at his stand but Santa, I never expected the same... I thought she will support Madhu atleast Not saying No at that place itself... I can relate wth Madhu char so well this time.. don't know y.. but that doesn't mean I don't like siddhu char 😊 ..

Now small break up.. usually I don't like that in any story, but this time with you I want to experience their emotions during this period.. and how they reunite.. have full faith on you that you will make it awesome..
Ok now I really don't know what I typed so long.. and still want to talk more on this chapter... and seriously with you writing like this, I am not able to wait long for updates... but wait is so worth it everytime I read new chapters of this story..

I am waiting now for next chapter.. know won't be soon but still want to say, I am waiting and please update soon 😛

I love you a lott dear! I absolutely love longgg replies. A lot of effort goes into them, so reading them makes me feel very special. Thank you so so much.🤗

Blue : I'm glad you asked this. It's a relevant one. I'd be addressing the question slowly, over the upcoming chapters.

Red : You know me well! I'm ready with the new one though, posting soon! 😆

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fictitious

@fictitious

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#538

Originally posted by: shreyj7
Promise won't do anything to you Subha!!
Actually all in all it was emotional, but yet a very realistic update. BECAUSE THIS TOTALLY HAPPENS IN REAL LIFE SOMETIMES.
I know I get too carried away with stuff sorry.
I think Mr. Ramanathan's concerns are valid, but then also we need to give a look around on this time and generation. The advancements in each and every field, and also in the way people act react everything has changed. Some personality changes will not certainly hurt.
But, truly Siddhant a man of word he truly is. I cannot imagine him going away!
Do I need to take sides? Because I cannot!!
I teared up during the lines Madhu said before saying hate you Siddhant.
Ahh!! Have never seen Madhu in this condition I feel horrible right now, and Mr. Siddhant Oh lord! I like it! Love you always huh? Yes, oh my gosh I am excited to see what you do to get yo lady back!
I am so glad it took place at a beach the setting was just perfect.
Subha,
The emotions of every character was portrayed with utter excellence it was just beautiful
In addition, to bring out the beauty more, were the words and the flow of them!!
Loved it in a very deep and heartful way!!
Amazing,Superb!!
Keep Writing

This is one of my FAVOURITE replies of yours, love! 😊 So sensibly you've accepted everything. Like I always say, you're far ahead of your age! 👏

Thank you for being so generous with kind words! I wonder how you managed to do this to every single writer, on every single update. There are very very very very few like you!

May your big heart keep getting bigger and bigger! ❤️

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fictitious

@fictitious

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#539

Originally posted by: hasi.83
Poor siddha and Madhu both have their own strong reasons.. can't blame them..

But I can ask you subha.. why why!!!! 🤢

Will wait for your next update..

😆😆

Next one will not make you cry! That's for sure!