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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Kairalove55

MyMyMy... oh, my love for this ff increases day by day and with each chapters you update...

The best courier one would ever get 😳 ...so much love and still not proposing... very bad... poor girl πŸ˜† ... and Bindi one is just awesome... I was like awww...

Expect the unexpected... loved the way how Madhu unknowingly falling into his trap and asking for long drive which Sid already planned for his love... πŸ˜† ...
btw sayali is such damn good friend one could ever get... planing surprises for her friend and that tooo best one... love all the bonds..

Totally awesome update with lil moments between all the characters... waiting for next chapter eagerly for their yelagri trip... hope next gonna be sooper dooper update...



What an absolutely delightful comment! It made me grin like a fool.
Thank you sooo much Kaira!

I'm almost done with the next update, it ended up being super long, so have a little more work! :)
Will put it up by tomorrow:)
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Tilottamaa

For the last couple of chapters, reading this story was only becoming a more and more entertaining exercise!

As these two "risers in love" keeps rising and loving it's turning out to be a more thrilling joyride than it had initially appeared. Be it the apparent separation in the previous chapter, or this pleasantly pleasurable tryst they have set out together - you effortlessly make things happening enough even without anything overtly happening at all.


For the last couple of chapters, mystery and chemistry have been turning more and more synonymous terms!


I haven't read of it anywhere else, nor am I certain if that's exactly the case here, but seems like it's Siddhant's mystery factor that has been incessantly catalysing Madhumita's growing attraction towards his persona, the more he stalls his advances, the more she's adamant on her affectionate sentiments, coming out of her shell, doing things she's never done before. That's really interesting, is your Siddhant!


For the last couple of chapters, you've been becoming more and more sweetly hilarious in your narrative, and Madhumita, if possible, wittier!


It's such a fun to read Madhumita's wisecracks, her room-mate bickering, Siddhant's puns and the general humorous vein that runs thru the narrative. It's equally amusing and awesome, how Madhumita paraphrases, even the most gnawing troubles and harrying misfortunes into well humoured punches - this girl is amazing!


Apologies for having skipped commenting on the previous update, though I have tried a poor cover up act in this comment...

Update soon,
Adwitiya.


PS: I like to meet Bengali characters, however insignificant, in South India-based stories... It was a pleasure meeting Shubho Das!πŸ˜‰



First of all, sorry for having spelled your name wrong all this while! Somehow the second
'i' had escaped my eyes every single time!

Secondly, don't you dare call this a poor cover up act! 😲
Adwitiya, how beautifully you play with words! Gift us your own story already!

I feel a casual conversation or a gesture could explain situations and emotions better than explicitly written paragraphs, atleast in some parts! That's the reason why I tend to include a lot irrelevant yet relevant scenes/dialogues! Comments like these kinda assure me that they don't look forced.

You're absolutely right about Siddhant's acts making Madhu more daring! I love you for picking that part up! In the end this is what the story title is all about! Siddhant made her realise that she CAN do, anything! His inhibitions have only fuelled her determination. She knows that she needs to act, to make 'them' happen!

So, you're a Bengali! I would say that your eloquence doesn't surprise me then! ;) I'm very fond of Bengali culture. I find the sensibilities very similar to that of Malayalis' !

And Shubho is glad to have met you too! :)

Thank you so much for this, Ms. Wordsmith! ;) You're amazing!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sandhiya_1195

Mind blowing update SubhaπŸ‘

Beautifully written😳



Thank you dear! :)
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: PriyaSweety-Anu

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was Amazing Part.😊
Madhu and Sayali Conversation was so Nice.😊
The way Madhu said about Siddharth Behavior,it was so Nice.😊
Siddharth and Jai Part was so nice.😊
Siddharth Surprise to Madhu was Awesome,I likes it.😊
The Bindi Part was so Cute.😊
Siddharth and Madhu going to Chennai,it was so Interesting.😊
Siddharth and Madhu while travelling was so Cute.😳
The Story is getting So Interesting.😊
Please Continue soon.😊
PriyaSweety-Anu



Love you for always being here and pointing everything out! :)
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: MeenuCrazyPanda

Kavalur.. YElagiri hills...


Oh boy! And also Murukku😳

All my favorite! Oh how I would love to go on a long drive with my man to such a place!


But what is up with our moddhu? suddenly all filmy?

And this man is confusing me.. and so are you chechi!🀒



Dunna will spin kilos and kilos of Jalebi once more, in the next update.
After that things will become clear! πŸ˜†
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: AnuRjun

so good..
I am in love with this Siddhu
So considerate n loving, Madhumita's Chui-Mui
You know, nowadays its hard to find such boys who want their girlfriend to wear Traditional wear and of all Bindi Haayeee
Siddhu is a gem who not everyone can get
N Road trip to the hills , wowww
waiting eagerly
update soon.



Thank you so much AnuRjun! :) The comment means a lot!
I'll post the next update tomorrow! :)
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: hasi.83

<font color="#ff0099">On chapter 19</font>


<font color="#ff0099">That was a beautiful update with full of surprise twist and turns.πŸ‘</font>

<font color="#ff0099">Siddhu bringing her bindi and asking her to wear something ethnic... How cute this can get..</font>

<font color="#ff0099">Planning for a lunch and drive to yelagiri hills... way too romantic that too as a surprise.</font>

<font color="#ff0099">Wondering!!!! is it the same siddhu who has been quiet and hesitant on the previous parts is doing all these things for madhu.</font>

<font color="#ff0099">Please do continue soon..</font>





Hasi Ma... Thanks a ton for 5 colourful comments in one go! Love you love you love you!

I've actually never hidden Siddhants love in the story, but explaining since you're confused! :) The moment of love for Sid was the moment he actually met her at the airport itself. But he himself couldn't understand the concept of love at first sight, on which Jai later enlightened him. Sid is clearly in love with her. She knows it, and he knows that she knows it too.. It's just that Madhu is open about it, but Siddhant is not. There is something that is holding him back from getting into a committed relationship with her, which will be revealed in two episodes! He just needs some time.

Regarding the question " How can Merlyn be interested in Sid if he is interested in Madhu? "
Merlyn knew Sid much before Madhu did. Also its not about interest, but feelings, over which we have little control.
Merlyn and Siddhant were close friends since ages.Its very natural for either of them to have feelings. Merlyn does have some feelings for him, but she also knows that Sid never did and will never have. He has never or would never give her any hopes either. Their friendship was always on good terms.
And they're all matured people, who understand emotions. Merlyn could be a little sad, but at the time she is happy that Siddhant found love in Madhu too. She would never try to have Sid for herself or anything.
Third angles need not necessarily mean grudge and jealousy, they can be about understanding and acceptance too. This is a very common thing in real life actually. This part would be dealt with in detail in one of the future chapters. I hope things would be more clear then. :)

Thank you once again, Hasi! 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: fictitious



What an absolutely delightful comment! It made me grin
like a fool.
Thank you sooo much Kaira!

I'm almost done with the next update, it ended up being super long, so have a little more work! :)
Will put it up by tomorrow:)




Am waitinggg!!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Bindu.

I've read the update twice and like Siddhu, I'm smiling galaxy wide! πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜† This chui mui was so funny πŸ˜†

I'm loving the story more and more with every new chapter, Subha! ❀️

We saw a progress in the work of Sid-Jai and also Madhu has successfully completed her 10 days at the observatory.. Learning new things and making new friends. Loved the whole observatory part including the pic.. πŸ˜ƒ

So, sir was busy planning for the road trip with his lady love during nights.. πŸ˜‰ The best part of the update was courier, for meπŸ˜† Their meeting after two weeks.. So beautiful!

I'm eager to read the next one..and the mystery hasn't been revealed yet! πŸ€” Sid shows his love but doesn't say it. Madhu might be ready to wait forevrer but I'm not!πŸ˜† So pls update jaldi jaldi..


Bindu Maa!πŸ€—πŸ€—
I was supposed to update yesterday, but I overslept!πŸ˜†

I'm ready with the next! A little more wait before the confession, but I hope the next chapter makes you happy!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Aqua_marine

I love your story..but wht irks me so much is siddhu's hard to get attitude


I understand!πŸ˜† The confusion will be cleared in a couple of chapters!😊
Thank you for dropping by!😊

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