Originally posted by: Tilottamaa
For the last couple of chapters, reading this story was only becoming a more and more entertaining exercise!
As these two "risers in love" keeps rising and loving it's turning out to be a more thrilling joyride than it had initially appeared. Be it the apparent separation in the previous chapter, or this pleasantly pleasurable tryst they have set out together - you effortlessly make things happening enough even without anything overtly happening at all.
For the last couple of chapters, mystery and chemistry have been turning more and more synonymous terms!
I haven't read of it anywhere else, nor am I certain if that's exactly the case here, but seems like it's Siddhant's mystery factor that has been incessantly catalysing Madhumita's growing attraction towards his persona, the more he stalls his advances, the more she's adamant on her affectionate sentiments, coming out of her shell, doing things she's never done before. That's really interesting, is your Siddhant!
For the last couple of chapters, you've been becoming more and more sweetly hilarious in your narrative, and Madhumita, if possible, wittier!
It's such a fun to read Madhumita's wisecracks, her room-mate bickering, Siddhant's puns and the general humorous vein that runs thru the narrative. It's equally amusing and awesome, how Madhumita paraphrases, even the most gnawing troubles and harrying misfortunes into well humoured punches - this girl is amazing!
Apologies for having skipped commenting on the previous update, though I have tried a poor cover up act in this comment...
Update soon,
Adwitiya.
PS: I like to meet Bengali characters, however insignificant, in South India-based stories... It was a pleasure meeting Shubho Das! 😉
Shiv Shakti
