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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yasmin- Preeto woh report... woh report... normal nahi hai.
A huge shock comes to Preeto.
Preeto after a while- kya
Yasmin- ha Preeto tumhari report normal nahi hai.
Yasmin began to cry. She turns her back to Preeto.
Preeto- hua kya hai mujhe
Yasmin cries a little more- tumhe...tumhe...
Preeto- Kya
Yasmin- co... cong... congestive...heart failure hai.
Preeto is really shocked, she looses her balance and walks back a few steps. Yasmin turns to her- im sorry Preeto hum jaante hai hume tumhe pehle baatana chahiye tha lekin hum khabhi himat nahi jaata pae.
Preeto- iss bemari ka kya matlab hai.
Yasmin- jab tumhara dil, tumharey sharer (body) ko utna khoon nahi dey sakta jinte key usko zarorat hai.
Preeto- kya... lekin isska koi toh ilaj hoga.
Yasmin cries- nahi Preeto iska koi ilaj nahi hai, sirf ek operation hai lekin yeh tumhara last stage hai. Aur isski waja se bhaut kam chances hai uss operation key successful hone key
Preeto- kitne chances
Yasmin after a long silence- sirf dus percent
Preeto gets developing tears and fights to hold them back- toh ab kitna waqt hai mere paas
Yasmin still cring- agar tum haar hafte pach se chey (5-6) ganto ki liye hospital akey IV drips logi toh hum tumhe ziyada se ziyada doo mahino tak bacha sakengay.
Preeto couldnt hold her tears and lets them come out. Preeto turns around and then starts walking like a laas. Yasmin follows her- Preeto hum tumhe kahen pe choudey.
Preeto- nahi Yasmin tum jao. Mein ab choud chali jaongi.
Yasmin was just left there looking at Preeto walking away and then finally turns around and goes home crying.
A huge thunder comes and makes a loud noise. Bj- hay rabba itni der hogae. Preeto abhi tak ghar nahi ae.
Papaji- kya kawal ji usne kaha tha na key Yasmin key saath aaj picture dekhne ja rahi hogi. Der toh honi hi hai.
Bj- hai lekin patta nahi kyun thodi gabrahat ho rahi hai.
Sonu- kya Bj apko toh bhaut gabrahat hoti hai aur ab ap please kaha dona Preeto di bhi nahi hai aaj kaha deyne key liye.
It is raining very heavy, Preeto is walking somewhere and she is all wet. Yasmin's voice keeps ehcoing in her mind. Yasmin- Preeto ziyada se ziyada doo mahiney, dus percent chance, koi ilaj nahi. Rajbeer's voice enters- i luv u Preeto. Bani- di tu mera air hostess baane ka sapna tot ne nahi deygi na. Sonu's voice- di mujhe doctor baana aeogay na. Bj- Rajbeer se shaadi kar liye puttar. Papaji- mera sher singh puttar. Then all the sudden all the voice start coming up at the same time.
Preeto helplessly falls to the ground on her knees and cries out loud. She looks around her to see that she is back at the lonely park where she first confessed her love to Rajbeer. She sees an imagination of Rajbeer hugging Preeto because she ran into his arms scared of the thunder. Preeto gets up on her feet and tries to touch Rajbeer but the image fades. Preeto looks up at the sky- kyu kar rahe ho mera saath aesa Babaji, meine na khabhi kiseki kise ko apni boore dua di, na boori nazar nahi khabhi kisika boora chaha. Sirf kyu issa, mera saath hi kyun. Kya kahon mein Rajbeer se key im sorry Rajbeer mein apko tezri baar choudke ja rahi hon aur iss bhar khabhi wapas nahi aongi. Kya kahon.
She sits on the bench and cries more.
It is about 9 pm, Preeto is outside Dhillon house, all wet. Preeto- nahi mein Bj Papaji Rajbeer ya kisse aur se iske baarey mein baat nahi karongi. Lekin Rajbeer ka kya karo... Woh sab baad mein sochti hon.
She enters and sees that Bj and Sonu are picking up everything. Bj sees her- Preeto, a gae. Rok mein khana nikal ti hon.
Preeto- nahi Bj mujhe bhook nahi hai.
Bj- kyu kuch khaya tha.
Preeto- ha Bj.
Bj- thik hai jaa kapdey badel key soo ja.
Preeto- ha Bj lekin Bani kaha hai.
Sonu- Bani di toh soo gae.
Preeto- itni jaldi
Sonu- ha
Preeto- thik hai lekin Rajbeer
Sonu- woh bhi khakey chalegae.
Preeto nods and goes to her room. She takes a salwar kamez and goes to the washroom without letting anyone see her. Preeto shuts the door shut behind her and goes to the wash basin and looks at herself in the mirror. She starts rinsing her face with the water and then looks again. She starts crying and the then falls to the ground on her knees still crying. Preeto- im sorry Rajbeer yeh mein sach mein nahi karna chahati. Lekin aur koi rasta hi nahi hai.
Later that night, Rajbeer calls Preeto on her cell phone. Preeto sees the number and then chokes back a sob and then disconnects it. Rajbeer is shocked when Preeto disconnected his phone. Rajbeer- Preeto iss bhar please kuch boora bat karna mera saath.
He calls her again but Preeto keeps disconnecting.
Next Morning...
Preeto left the house early because she didnt want to meet Rajbeer. Rajbeer came very soon after she left. He asked Bj- Bj yeh Preeto kaha hai.
Bj- puttar woh toh abhi abhi chali gae.
Rajbeer- chali gae.
Bj- ha kuch kam tha
Rajbeer- nahi Bj bas isse hi.
Rajbeer finishes his breakfast and leaves saying- Bye mujhe bhaut kam hai.
He goes to Preeto's boutique and sees that Preeto is not busy, no costumers and the boss is also not around. He takes Preeto's arm and takes her to the back of the boutique. Rajbeer held her wrists and pinned her against the wall. Rajbeer- mujhe avoid kyu kar rahi ho
Preeto had her eyes closed and was trying to free her wrists. Rajbeer saw her trying to get free. Rajbeer- meine pocha key mujhe avoid kyu kar rahi ho.
Preeto- mein apko avoid nahi kar rahi
Rajbeer- toh kyu kal bar bar mera phone ignore kiya meine tumhe 15 bar phone kiya aur aaj subha bhi tum mujse mile bina chali gae. Aur ab yeh kyu meri ankho mein ankhe mila key baat nahi kar rahi.
Preeto- mein apko avoid nahi kar rahi.
Rajbeer- jhoot.
Preeto- nahi kar rahi
Rajbeer- kar rahi ho
Preeto opens her eyes and looks into his eyes his watery eyes- HA AVOID KAR RAHI HON
Rajbeer is shocked. The episode ends off with Rajpreet staring at each other with shock and Rajbeer holding Preeto's wrists and pinning her against the wall.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh Nooo Preeto ko heart failure ki bhimari 😭
waiting to see what happens next...Great job Sana...You got me hooked😃

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