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Posted: 13 years ago
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Precap: NA's truth is out, Papaji says no to Rajbeer and Preeto's marriage. Papaji asks Sunny to marry Preeto and Sunny agrees. Rajpreet are broken. Dhillon family forces Preeto to marry Sunny. Rajbeer gets a posting out of Amritsar and is gone. Preeto and Sunny are married for 2 years and still they havent consummated their marriage. They live in Chandigad. After marriage Preeto sees Sunny's real face. Sunny is alcoholic and abusive. He hits Preeto almost everyday for some reason. Now Rajbeer has come to live in the same city as Preeto and Sunny. Though Rajbeer is unaware of that. Rajbeer's apartment is in Preeto and Sunny's building society. RajPreet have not met yet.

PART 1...

Rajbeer had returned from Air Force and Preeto was coming home after she visited a neighbour. Neither one of them is looking forward, Rajbeer was on the phone and Preeto was looking around. They suddenly bump into each other, their eyes met and they have a eye lock. The have remebered their sweet memories like when they first met, Rajbeer kissing Preeto, Rajbeer carrying Preeto dowstairs on Karvachauth. Then they have a harsh flashback (Papaji- Rajbeer aur Preeto ki shaadi nahi hogi. Sunny aur Preeto ki shaadi hogi) Preeto gets tears in her eyes and looks away. Rajbeer was somehow holding his tears back.
Preeto- ap yaha
Rajbeer- woh mein isse society mein rehta hon.
Sunny was coming home from work and then he sees RajPreet together. He gets mad but manages his anger. Sunny-Preeto tum yaha, mujhe laja tum ghar pe hogi.
Preeto- ha mein bas ghar ja rahe thi.
Sunny- oh chalo saath chalte hai. (looks at Rajbeer) Are Rajbeer itne saal baad.
\[-Rajbeer- ha woh Chandigad mein iss bar posting hui ha.
Sunny- i see
Rajbeer- go ahead, tumhe late ho raha hoga.
Sunny- oh hain bye Rajbeer
Rajbeer- Bye sunny bye preeto.

As Rajbeer entered his house he was broken but still he thought- Okay so what Preeto mere nahi ha, at least woh kush toh hai. Sunny usse bhaut kush rakhta hoga. Aur kya chahiye mujhe
He looks at the wall in his bedroom which was covered with pictures of Preeto laughing and smiling. Rajbeer- i just want u to be happy Preeto.
Rajbeer walks to his terrace and sees Sunny and Preeto's house... (Different buildings but same level and could see each other's house straight across)...
The curtains and the window to Sunny's house were open, which Sunny was unaware of. Sunny was holding Preeto by the arm and pulls her in the house. Sunny slams the door behind him- TUM USS RAJBEER KE SAATH KYA KAR RAHE THI
Preeto gets a little scared- woh achanak mile the.
Sunny - YEAH RIGHT! TUMNE KAHA KE TUM RAJBEER SE ACHANAK MILE THE AUR MEINE MAAN LIYA! (he is holding on to her arm even tighter) SACH BOLO
Preeto- SUNNY TUM SONU JO SACH THA WOH MEINE TUMHE BAATDIYA
Sunny gets mad and pushes Preeto on the ground but she actually hits her head against the corner of their dining table. Sunny saw what he did but he has no regret for it. Preeto feels the part of her head that she hit and sees its bleeding.
Rajbeer is very devistated seeing Preeto hurt and Sunny with no regret.
Sunny- Preeto mein akre bar poch raha hon Rajbeer ke saath kya chakar hai tumhara.
Preeto- aur meine bhi tumse keh diya hai ke mere aur Rajbeer ke bich koi chakar nahi hai.
Sunny- tum aise nahi manogi.
He pulls out his belt and starts hitting Preeto's back. Preeto is crying so much but Sunny is not stopping.
Rajbeer couldnt stop his tears anymore and he turns around. He goes into his house and Starr at the pictures of Preeto smiling. Rajbeer touches her picture- iss smile ka kya hua. Tumhare papaji ko laja ke sunny tumhare chere pe yeh smile rakhega aur uss Sunny ne kya kiya. Tumhare chere se yeh smile chinle.
He is crying even more - lekin mein tumhe uss Sunny se door lejaonga aur tumhare yeh smile lotaonga. I promise that.


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Posted: 13 years ago
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woww good one story in different angle...👍🏼waiting for next part...😃
uss sunny ka toh..huh...😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sana - you are just 14 and your writing is so awesome ..
This take is totally different and absolutely loved it..
Cant wait Rajbeer to do Sunny ka khoob sa Dulai
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 2...
Next morning...
Preeto is wearing a pink suit, she has a bandage on her forehead cuz of her injury and Sunny is getting ready for office. Preeto- sunny kya tum mujhe market chod dogay.
Sunny- kyun rab ne do par nahi diye
Preeto sighs and the leaves the living room and goes to their bedroom.
Sunny leaves and then preeto leaves the building. She is outside the socitey when Rajbeer drives behind her- kaha ja rahe ho
Preeto - market
Rajbeer- ao mein chod deta hon
Preeto smiles and enters the car. Rajbeer wants to see if she'll lie or not.
Rajbeer- yeh chot kaise laje
Preeto- oh woh mein kal gir gae thi aur table se chout laje.
Rajbeer disappointed- i see
He takes a left turn and drives.
Preeto- market toh right pe tha
Rajbeer doesnt answer and drives till they reach a lonely street.
Rajbeer- kya kaha tha ghir gae thi
Preeto nodds
Rajbeer- abhi tak nahi janti ke tum mujhe joot nahi bol sakti. Meine dekha tha sunny ne tumhe maara.
Preeto starts crying. Rajbeer cupps her face and turns her towards him. Rajbeer- bj papaji ko patta hai ke sunny tumpe haath oatha ta hai
Preeto- nahi, woh mujhe pe yakein nahi karti. Meine unhe baatane ki kushish ki thi lekin unhone kaha ke mera kanyardan hua hai aur dan ki hue kise wapad nahi lete.
She instantly huggs Rajbeer and starts crying even more.
Preeto- pehle toh ros nasha karta tha aur ros mujpe haath oatha tatha.
Rajbeer's hands are caressing Preeto's hair. Then one of his hands slides down to her back to give her a proper hug. But as soon as his hand touches her back preeto- ouch
Rajbeer - kya hua
No response, rajbeer moves her hair to the side to see what happened. Then when he saw what happened, tears formed in his eyes. Preeto's back was covered with red marks, from the belt that sunny used to beat her. Rajbeer gently touches her back and preeto winces.
Rajbeer- mein tumpe ek ach bhi nahi bardash kar sakta aur ussne tumhara yeh haal kiya. Usse mein chiudunga nahi
Preeto breaks his hug- rajbeer nahi wais bhi Bj Papaji mera yakein nahi karte, yaha tak ke mujhe woh yeh bhi keh chuke hai ke mein jio ya maaro unhe koi fark nahi padta.
Rajbeer- yeh sab kaise hogaya, mein toh tumhe khush dekhna chahata tha.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sana you are so talented. This is another lovely FF with an absolute different style altogether. Poor Preeto. Rajpreet separated. 😭. You are very talented at 14.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting want to know whats next..😃continue...👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow loved both the parts ... really interesting story ...

that sunny ka bacha ... he uses violence ... the fuk*r...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It's so nice to read that they still feel da same for each other after everything aww.. ❤️ update soon please. x
Edited by Mary1234 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Late at night, Preeto is at home and Sunny comes home with a guy dressed in black. Sunny leads the guy to the living room. Sunny goes to the kitchen where Preeto was. Sunny- Preeto yeh mera bhaut accha dost hai jo bhi chahiye woh dey dena. Mujhe kuch kam hai mein abhi atta hon.

Preeto nods and Sunny leaves the apartment. Preeto makes tea and takes it to the guy. She gives him the tea in a tray and then guy takes. Guys takes a sip- hey mein Vansh hon.
Preeto smiles- nice to meet u
Then goes back to the kitchen and then Vansh gets up and closes the curtains of the living room. Then he closes the door then walks to Preeto. Preeto hears him coming and turns around- yeh kya kar rahe hai ap.
Vansh- tere patti ne bola nahi key mujhe jo bhi chahiye woh deyna. Toh mujhe tere saath suna hai.
Preeto- kya bakwas kar rahe ho.
She walks past Vansh to open the door but Vansh takes her by the hand. And pulls her towards him. Vansh- itni jaldi kaha ja rahe hai. Terey patti ne aaj raat ke liye tujhe becha hai mujhe.
Preeto is shocked- nahi woh issa nahi kar sakta.
Vansh- ussne issa hi kiya hai.
Vansh was now trying to take Preeto dupatta but Preeto picks up a steel container and bangs it against his head. Vansh is in pain but follows Preeto who is running to the exit of the society. While on the way down, Vansh did get a hold of Preeto's dupatta.
At the exit of the society, Vansh finally gets a hold of her. Vansh is forcefully trying to take Preeto back up in the apartment when a hand holds Vansh's hand. Preeto is crying like insane. She turns and sees Rajbeer, she smiles and looks back at Vansh. Vansh who is trying to take Preeto upstairs says- tu kun hai
Rajbeer- tum Preeto key patti toh ho nahi toh tum kun ho.
Vansh- tujse matlab.
He then again tries to take Preeto upstairs but this time Rajbeer makes him turns around and punches him in the face. Vansh lets go of Preeto and falls on the ground. Rajbeer takes Preeto and puts her behind him. Rajbeer then starts hitting Vansh, he is kicking him and punching him. Then Preeto finally stops him. Rajbeer sees that Preeto is missing her dupatta and sees that the dupatta is on the stairs of her building. Rajbeer walks over to the dupatta and picks it up. He returns Preeto her dupatta. Rajbeer is still angry- kya tha yeh sab.
Preeto doesn't answer, Rajbeer takes her by the hand and then they go to Rajbeer's apartment.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sana your such an amazing talented girl...way to go 👍🏼...I just started reading this one...love it...stupid sunny...like all the different angles your bringing in with rajbeer-preeto's love story..thanks for writing 😛

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